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Posted: 13 years ago
part 9
Sasha, Sumaira, John all can happily go to hell and enjoy there...
hopeless people...
nice part and dance...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10
nice part...
Maan and Geet have some hidden feelings which is yet to surface...
the foursome are really getting on my nerves...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved the way maan held geet when she was about to fall n then when she skidded
n precap is awesome
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wow! LOVED the care ..
Continue soon ..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 11

It was 8am, Sumaira, Sasha and John met early at the office to discuss the issue of Maaneet impending closeness. "John they are spending way too much time together, we need to stop their blossoming friendship...but what can we do?"

"Simple cause them disgrace and embarrassment of the canotations associated with their so called 'friendship', we need to cause misunderstandings". Sumaira smiled.

"Sumaira we will cause Geet to withdraw herself..thats the only way as you know MK is not too bothered with what people think" Sasha blew on her long witch like fingers.

"Today it is the office party...so start targeting Geet as soon as she enters the office okay Sasha? Sumaira you get close to Maan".

The meeting lasted till 9am. Maan walked into the office with Geet in tow. He called for an immediate meeting. "Today is an important day for Khurana Constructions..and I cannot stress enough what this client Mr Bhatra means to us. I want Sasha, Tasha and John to look after the party today. Sumaira you will accompany Mr Bhatra. Adi will look after the remaining guests. Geet will stay with me". Hearing Geet's name Sumaira and Sasha gave glances to each other.

"I want no mistakes and everyone will act professional". Maan finished giving his orders. "Sasha...I mean maam, DD is so manly isn't he and so in control..any lady will love to be in his arms". Sumaira gave a evil glare. "Sorry Maam" Tasha ran off fearing her reaction.

Maan called Geet in his cabin. "Geet today you will stay with me, by my side. We are going to the Crystal hotel so dress up nicely. Anyway I'm off I need to attend a business meeting, see you later". Geet smiled and he left. She was busy with the remaining chores. Sumaira walked in.

"Hello Miss Hoshyarpur suna hain your going to assist Maan today...he seems very impressed with YOU..always singing your praises". She circled her which was patronising Geet. "I really don't know what is special about you I mean look at you ... a typical village girl...no style no sense of fashion..."

Geet began knotting her dupatta. "Geet he is mine samji tum mine...so stop this innocent act and leave him alone". She was thundering with anger. "Sumaira I don't know what your saying".

"Oh come on Geet itni bholi mat bano..you know exactly what I am saying...girls like you just look innocent but you are very clever...I am warning you to not come In my way or it won't be good for you samji tum?". She flicked her hair and walked off. Geet sat in her cabin and was trying to make sense of what she had done. Why was Sumaira angry with her? Her mobile rang "Geet come home and get ready..otherwise we will be late". She put the phone down.

Back at KM Maan and Adi was getting ready for the party. Geet walked in looking glum, she saw Maan. "Maan I need to talk to you".

"Abi nahin get ready..we are getting late". Maan wore a black Versace suit. Geet wore a pink evening dress..she left her hair semi open. She wore big blingy studs and a small choker.

She walked down the stairs and Maan was left breathless seeing the sight of the most beloved friend he had.

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Maaneet had a moment of admiration of each other and made their way to the party. Maan sat in the car and Geet fixed his tie. "Maan you look very handsome today".

"Really? Maa always says that I look good in everything..by the way you look uh..look..uh nice". Geet made a baby face she expected a better compliment.

The party was underway. The venue had lots of chandlier lighting, the high class were dancing and drinking away. Geet felt uncomfortable as she felt people were behaving too openly. It seemed this party was less of a business one and more of picking up sleeping partners. Mr Bhatra had arrived and complimented the extravagant party. "I must say Mr Khurana your company is perfection..I am impressed".

"Hey you look amazing...Maan would you care for a dance as these days seeing you without your secretary is near enough impossible". She seductively took him to the dance floor.

Suddenly there was a huckus in the hall. A pigeon had flown into the venue. John began throwing it about. Geet ran and saw it was handsome. She snatched it from John. "This is animal cruelty, you could get reported for this..anyway this is..M.." before she could finish her sentence Sumaira came and snatched the handsome back. "Listen this my cousin..he can do anything he wants with this pigeon..who do you think you are...I warned you before and I am warning you now you bloody village girl..you f*****..."

"Sumaira! How dare you talk to Geet like that...this is my pigeon..he must have flown behind me..I can't believe you were swearing at Geet". John came smoking his cigarette. "Maan don't take it too heart..she didn't know it was your pigeon..Sumaira say sorry to Geet". She apologised just to pacify Maan. Maan was sulking and angry throughout the party. "Maan what happened?"

"That Sumaira how dare she speak to you like that..your my friend I can't see anyone being rude to you".

"You really did mind?"

"Of course and now don't ask me why"

"Why?" he looked at her annoyingly and seeing her cute smile he burst out laughing. "Listen Geet I'm hungry get me some food please". She walked off only to be intercepted by John.

"Hello Miss Geet...about time I met you...I'm John...wanna dance?"

"No thank you"...Geet started putting the food. "Oh come on, one harmless dance..please?". He grabbed her hand and pulled her towards the dance floor. She struggled in his grip. He pulled her close and began touching her up. "Leave me alone". He grabbed her tighter. Suddenly Maan saw John forcefully trying to kiss Geet. He pulled Geet away and punched John. "How dare you touch her..you dog". John got up with bloodied nose smirking. "Maan what's your problem I was just dancing..and I am touching her..or I forgot she is your Heer...and only you are allowed to touch and kiss her".

"John behave yourself otherwise.."

"otherwise what she will get disgraced..anway you have great concern for her..who is she to you anyway?

"She is his friend!!" said Sumaira sarcastically.

"Friend? That is a joke isn't it? I mean you roam around like a couple. You are always alone with her..you made an under qualified girl your secretary and she is your friend..I mean common seeing your performance as Heer-Ranjha any fool knows that you are masking this affair your having...I mean everyone knows your sleeping with her". Geet began crying and left the venue whilst Maan beat the hell out of John. Adi followed Geet home.

Maan came home looking shattered with the turn of events. He asked Adi about Geet and he told she was crying in her room. He entered her room. "Maan ruk jao mat aao mere paas..ab bahut hogaya...aaj se ye dosti khatam".

"Par Geet.."

"Heres your cap". She left and locked herself in the bathroom and Maan left to take his frustration out by practising tai chi.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2A2-lgDTJH0[/YOUTUBE]

*I need to talk to her, she shouldn't stay away from me...I mean I can't stay away from her...what we have is special...we can't lose it..I...I ..do I love her? yes I do love her..I need to express my feelings to her* Maan picked up his mobile and rang her phone. It kept going to voicemail. He tried about 7 times but she switched her phone off. Maan looked at his mobile in tears. Maan Singh Khurana cried. "I have lost my friend forever".


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a1tVvBxs4rk[/YOUTUBE]

Precap; Maan corners Geet.

Previous: Part 10
Next: Part 12


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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Mahi...( for part 10 )

*Edit 1*

Oh me first to comment... wait will read part 11 and comment on it...

*Edit 2* ( For Part 11 )

that was awesome Mahi... that 🤬 John... how dare he try kiss Geet... if it was me then I would have stapled his lips or would have burned his lips...

Come on Maan go and get your Love... dont let her go...
Edited by JayaR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...

the three of them planned everything...sumaira, john n sasha...

that john ...tried to kiss her...but he can never hurt her in any way as long as maan is around...

finally maan realized his feelings towards geet...

waiting for him to talk to her...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
spetacular update
wow maan falling for geet
maaneet scene dreamy
love it core
waiting eagerly
ty 4 pm
part 11
beautiful update
love it
three devil plan together
uff he wanted to kiss her i'm glad
maan came on time to save her
yippe maan realize his feeling
cint soonnn
ty 4 pm
Edited by sharmake11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update. omg geet's dress is sooo nice and then party was good but how john try to kiss geet😡😡😡 hate him sooo much. love the way maan talked for geet but she broke friendship😭😭😭😭😭😭. pls don't make them seprate longgg. they should realize their feelings soon

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