New FF: Kismat Konnection:Ch.10 posted in Pg.25

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My Jaan
The flames climbed up the trees like it was a step ladder they grew and grew winding and wrapping their way around the forest. Tightening its grip, hot, sweaty. The unbearable heat grew upon the trees. There was no escape route. Suffering in pain. The forest shrieked silently green shrubbery burned to crisp. Khushi Kumari Gupta was stuck in this forest.

- Payal Di, that night. Was a nightmare for me. - I said.

- Khushi forget about that past. That was 6 years ago. - She said calming.

- 6 years ago is not a long time. It haunts me. I cant forget it. - I said lost.

- Khushi if you cant forget that night. You will never move on. - She answered.

- Payal please. If you were in my place you would understand. - I said angrily.

- Khushi calm down. You already have responsibilities. Go pick up Meethi. - she said.

Meethi my jaan. Meethi means everything for me. 6 years ago I thought I had no place to live. But after Meethi she was the world to me. The only reason I'm living is because of Meethi. 6 years ago I had lost everything. But Meethi gave me everything. She's only 5 years old. My sister, friend, girlfriend, mom, dad and daughter. She's very understanding. She can understand me.

At Meethi School:

5 minutes more and than Meethi will be out of school. This was my everyday time. I wake up early in the morning. Make breakfast and shower. Than it's Meethi time. I wake her up, feed her, shower her and do her hair. And she's off to school. Than I come to pick her up.

There I saw Meethi. Her pretty hazel eyes. Her black hair in a ponytail. And her backpack in her back. Meethi always stayed happy. She was never sad. She cant bare to see anyone sad. That's my little girl.

- Ma. I love you - she said hugging me tightly.

- I love you too Meethi. Come on lets go home - I said picking her up.

- Ma. Can we go eat out today. I have good news to tell you. - she told me happy.

- Good news? What good news Meethi? - I said thinking.

- It's something Ma. I'll tell you home - she said smiling.

At Home:

- Come on Meethi. You have to eat. - I said.

- Ma. I don't want saabzi and roti - she said whining.

- Meethi come on. I gave you pizza yesterday. - I said mad.

- No.No.No. I want PIZZA!!!! - she said angrily.

- Meethi don't show me this attitude. Or no chocolate for you. - I said in a tough voice.

- Chocolate! Okay ma. Only 1 roti for me. - she said happily.

- Naughty girl. Chocolate your agree with anything. - I said smiling.

- Ma. Can I have chocolate now. - she said quietly.

- Meethi! Finish you roti than. - I said feeding her.

- This will take forever. Give me a big piece. - she said demanding.

- Your going to choke after Meethi. Please listen to me. - I said.

- Okay Ma. Payal didi? - she said.

- She went shopping. - I told her.

- Shopping without me. But she always takes me. - She said.

- I thought you had good news to tell me. - I told her.

- Yes I do. Tomorrow is Parents Day. Can you tell papa to come back home. Please?? - she said sweetly.

To be continued...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Index:

For a Pm Please hit the like button. It would be easy for me to Pm you. Just hit the like button please.

Chapter 1 - Pg.1

Chapter 2 - Pg.2

Chapter 3 - Pg.3

Chapter 4 - Pg.5

Chapter 5 - Pg.9

Chapter 6 - Pg. 12

Chapter 7 - Pg.16

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sanjana,
Great start. I wonder who Meethi's Papa is..?
Looking forward to the next part, so update soon hun!!
😊
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Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Hey Sanjana,

Great start. I wonder who Meethi's Papa is..?
Looking forward to the next part, so update soon hun!!
😊

Hi. Thank you so much for this lovely feedback. Your find out Meethi Papa in the next chapter. No I think in the third chapter. I will update soon. 😊

P.S: Love your username =)
Edited by sanjanaprincess - 14 years ago
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hii sanjana!
That's an amazing start, I have a feeling Meethi's dad might be Shyaam😔
but I'll hope for the best(Arnav!) hehe😛
Please continue soon & add me to your PM list!

Priyanka <3
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Hey Sanjana, that was a cool beginning, I reall hope Meethi's dad is NOT Shyam but Arnav ( LOL, who woudln't😉)

Anyways, update soon =)
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This is really intriging. Do continue soon
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Originally posted by: Prix3

hii sanjana!

That's an amazing start, I have a feeling Meethi's dad might be Shyaam😔
but I'll hope for the best(Arnav!) hehe😛
Please continue soon & add me to your PM list!

Priyanka <3

Hi Priyanka!

Thank you for liking it. To find out Meethi dad you will have to wait a while. I will continue soon ans sure I'll pm you.
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Originally posted by: ..anisha..

Hey Sanjana, that was a cool beginning, I reall hope Meethi's dad is NOT Shyam but Arnav ( LOL, who woudln't😉)

Anyways, update soon =)

Hi Anisha! 😃

thanks for liking my beginning. Hehe. You have to keep reading to find out. I will update soon.
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Questions and Questions:
I
knew one day Meethi would ask me this question. But I never thought this soon. I always use to tell her your father is out of town for work. And now what will I tell her. That he cant come. I don't want Meethi to have hatred toward her father. I want her to love her father. Yes her father made some mistakes but still I know he will love Meethi a lot.

- Ma. Tell me. Can papa come please? All my friends make fun of me. They say I don't have a papa. - she said sad.

- Meethi don't worry. Papa will be home on Parents day. - I told her pulling her cheeks.

- Ma. I love you. I cant wait to see Papa tomorrow. - she said running to her room.

- Parent's Day is next month Meethi - I said yelling.

I was in deep thought thinking how will he come. I didn't even tell him he has a kid name Meethi. How will he react. Till Payal Di came back home. She seemed so happy after shopping.

- Khushi what happened? - she said worried.

- Meethi asking for her father. - I told her biting my nails.

- Khushi I told you. That Meethi would ask you. She's a smart kid. - she said.

- Payal what do I know. I'm only 24 years old. I don't now anything about parenting. I was pregnant when I was 18. So what do you expect. - I told her.

- Khushi I know. All you can do is to ask him to come for a few days for his daughter. - she told me.

- He doesn't even know that he has a kid. I just cant go up to him and tell him you have kid name Meethi and she wants to meet you. - I told her thinking.

- Well know you have to Khushi. Your break Meethi heart. - she told me.

- What will Shyam think? No way I cant go. I cant tell him that Meethi wants to meet her father. - I said worrying.

- Khushi please. For Meethi sake. You love her right. - she told me placing her hand on my hand.

- Payal you're the best sis I can have. You were always there for me. I love you a lot. - I said smiling.

- Give your love to him not me - she said winking.

- Payal. He doesn't deserve it. What he did I cant forgive him. - I told her mad.

- Sorry baba. Look I made you mad again. Go to Meethi. Before she starts whining and destroying our mind out. - she said laughing.

- Alright Di. - I told her hugging her.

I was off to my room. I had to go meet him. I never wanted to meet him. But for Meethi sake I have too. Meethi happiness is my happiness. Khushi was about to go to Meethi room until her pager rang. She had to go back to the office pronto. She had to go to Mumbai urgent. Mumbai the place that haunts her. Is Khushi ready to back Mumbai where her past lies? The bitter truth of Khushi. The effect on Meethi.

To be Continued...
Edited by sanjanaprincess - 14 years ago

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