New FF: Kismat Konnection:Ch.10 posted in Pg.25 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: 26javey26

OMG that was amazing. I really hope Shaym isn't the father. By the forest thing it sounds as if she was raped and I don't want Arnav to be the guy. Ahhh i'm so confused. Update soon and thanks for the pm

muaahhh xxx

Javeria

Thanks for loving it. Lol. Dont worry dont get confused alot. I will update soon and your welcome.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Leaving

Mumbai! How will I go back to Mumbai. Everyone there. I cant go back to my past. But than how will I tell him that Meethi wants to see you. I don't even now his phone number or anything. All I know is he is still living in Mumbai in that cottage. That fire, that night still haunts me. But if I don't go than no work and no money. And how will I feed Meethi and buy her stuff.

Khushi it's better off you go. You were in no fault. It's all his fault. Why are you ruining your life just because of him. Just go. And tell him that your daughter wants to meet you and come back to Lucknow. I better tell Di, I need to go to Mumbai. Should I take Meethi too. No it's better if I don't.

At Meethi Room:

- Mom. I want to come with you please mommy. - she told me sweetly.

- Meethi. I'm going there for work. I'll be back in a week. - I told her.

- Mommy please. If I go I wont bother you. I'll be a good girl. - she told me.

- Khushi let Meethi go. She's never been to Mumbai. Let her go - Payal told me.

- Fine Di. But get one thing right your spoiling meethi a lot. - I told Payal.

- Yay! Mommy pack my clothes. - she said happy.

- Okay baba. Let me pack my clothes first than yours. - I told her smiling.

- Yay! Yay! Yay! - she said running around her room.

- Meethi don't run around. Your going to fall. - I said worried.

- Mommy. Don't worry nothing will happen - she said smiling.

Suddenly an Ow! Come out from Meethi mouth. She had just tripped.

- Meethi! - I said running towards her.

- Mommy my knee hurts - she said crying.

- Meethi I told you to be careful. Why don't you listen - I told her worried.

- Sorry mommy. But I just tripped. She said crying.

- Okay stop crying now. Payal get me the first aid kit please. - I said wiping meethi tears.

In Mumbai:

Did I have to bang into this desk. Stupid desk. Who put this desk right here. I am already not feeling well and now I just banged my knee into this desk. Don't now what's happening this couple of days to me. Until I heard the door swung open.

- Sir! Are you alright. I heard a banging sound sir. - he said worried.

- Raj. I'm alright. Just go get me Mr. Mehra files. - I told him.

- Sir. Let me get a first aid kit first. Maybe your bleeding - he said worried.

- RAJ! Get me MR. MEHRA FILES right now - I said yelling.

- O… Okay s..iiir.. - he said mumbling.

-No Raj. Your not getting the files. Bhai please come on. Your working since the night. And what is this you just banged your knee. Bhai please be careful.

- Anjali Di, don't worry. I'm fine. And I cant come home. I need to get the conference room ready. And I need to pick Mr. Mehra wife and kid from the airport. Di I don't now what's happening this days. I keep hurting myself.

- no excuses. You cant drive you just banged your knee. And maybe a dear one is missing you. Maybe your forgetting a special person. That means a lot to me.

- Di, sorry I have to go the airport. And a special person. I don't have a special person.

- Are you sure? What about Khushi? Have you forgotten her after 6 years and don't tell me that I don't now what your talking about.

- Di please. I don't want to talk about her. She was my past and today is present. I cant remember anything in the past. Please Di. I told you so many times to not talk about her. And I'm going to the Airport. I maybe come home late. Bye Di.

- But…. Listen to me. Shyam.

To be Continued...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Your concept is awesome dear, a very different one, very innovative👏
Please pm me when you update, please😊
Your writing style is also very nice⭐️
But, one thing, Anjali is Shyam's sis, ewww😡
will be waiting eagerly for the next Part!!!!😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: murphy369

Your concept is awesome dear, a very different one, very innovative👏

Please pm me when you update, please😊
Your writing style is also very nice⭐️
But, one thing, Anjali is Shyam's sis, ewww😡
will be waiting eagerly for the next Part!!!!😃

Thank you. Yes I decided to make a different one. Hope you like it. Of course I'll pm you. Thanks for liking my writing style. Hehe. You find out in the next chapter for sure.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
yayy! Arnav's the dad! This is getting reallyy interesting! I love it👍🏼
Thanks so much for the PM😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
yaay so does that mean its Arnav's bachha? 🥳 Soo happy, continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Prix3

yayy! Arnav's the dad! This is getting reallyy interesting! I love it👍🏼

Thanks so much for the PM😊

Thanks for liking it. Your welcome.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
I've finished reading every update!
Your ff is amazing!!!
Please add me to the pm list di?!!
Much appreciated!!
take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: shilparoxx

I've finished reading every update!
Your ff is amazing!!!
Please add me to the pm list di?!!
Much appreciated!!
take care

Thank you so much. I love reading comments. Press the Like button where the Index post is and than your be in my PM list. You take care too.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
It's different but I like it, can't wait till nxt update

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