wat will u do when sum1 dies.MG ff last part+epi - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Scary yaar
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Chapter 15

Pari hugged maan and cried

Pari-maan how are you, where were you, what had happened, you are ok na. Maan why are you so quite, say something Na.

All giggles seeing pari talk nonstop. Maan calms down pari and says- pari i'll say when u'll shut Na.

Pari- oops. Sorry. Now say

Maan- I am totally fine pari and everything is under control too. Nothing has happened to me. Now you stop worrying about me and take care of yourself and my angel.

Pari smiles a little listening to maan. While others admires heir bond.

Maan- so pari, how is my angel. You are taking care of her Na.

Pari- yes bhai your angel is totally fine and getting naughty day by day. You know she keeps on kicking me whole night and didn't let me sleep.

Maan- aww my sweety. Saying so maan hugged her.

Pari gets emotional and says bhai your angel and me missed you so much.

Maan – I missed you both too.

Vicky- ok ok now enough of this emotional talks. Now all you stop shedding tears and smile.

All laughs at Vicky's antics.

Pari- ok guys you all sit and i'll bring you guys' coffee.

Pinky- no pari u'll not. Look at you are getting so weak now a days. You will rest. I'll bring the coffee.

Pari- but pinky

Geet- pari pinkly is right. Now u'll rest and we'll take care of everything. Ok.

Pari making a face- ok

Pinky and Annie left to kitchen and brought coffee and snacks for all.

Meanwhile, dev reaches khurana's mansion to find it locked.

Dev- it means Vicky was saying truth. But still I should go and check personally.

At Vicky's place all of them are having coffee and were chatting and remembering their old days and are laughing, when the door bell rings.

Pinky- who will be there at this time in night?

Geet- what if it was dev?

Vicky-yes, it can be dev. Maan you do a thing. You just go and hide in room upstairs. We'll see who is it.

Maan runs upstairs and hides there.

Annie goes to open the door.

Annie- dev? You at this time? Everything all right?

Dev- oh yes annie. Everything is fine. I was just passing by so thought and come and see pari , as Vicky was saying she is quite unwell.

Annie- oh yaa, please come .

Annie escorted dev to living room

Vicky- hey dev come sit.

Dev- how are you Vicky, hey pari. How you are now and how is angel. Vicky was saying you are unwell.

Pari faking a smile to him – oh dev I am fine. Thanks you came to see me personally. But it ok. You guys stop worrying about me. See geet have come too to take care of mine.

Dev- oh that's so nice.

Geet- dev you sit, i'll bring you a coffee.

Dev- no geet. No need of it. I am leaving now.

Pinky- but dev you came now only and now you are going too.

Dev- actually pinky I have some work which need to be completed by tonight only so I had to leave now.

Pinky- oh it's ok.

Saying bye to all, dev turns to go when something caught his eye. He turns around and sees the thing which shocked him.

Looking to the shocked face of dev , they all follows his direction of vision which frightens them in worry.

Precap- what did dev saw? Why all are worried? Was it was maan?

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update dear...
seems intersting...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part sweety...
I guess he saw sumthing tht belongs to Maan...
Wish he does not suspect anything...
Continue soon...tunic for the update n keep writing...
Love ya loads...take care...muahhh...

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