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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you so much all for comments and likes.
sorry for making you all wait for the part.

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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter-16


Dev turned around to see maan's watch lying in the centre table

He bends and picks it up.

Dev to geet- if I am not wrong then it is maan's watch. Isn't.

Geet- yes dev it is maan's watch

Dev- but how come it here

Geet- actually dev, after maan his belongings, his things are only things I am left with. U know dev, this watch was maan's favorite. He always wears it because it my gift to him.

Saying this geet became too emotional and a lone tear escaped her eye.

Annie- geet control yourself.

Dev getting satisfied with geet's answer places watch back on table and leaves he place.

As dev left all sighs in relief. As maan came down geet ran and hugged him and started crying.

Maan consoling her-Shhh mishty it okay. Everything is fine. Your maan is fine. Now stop crying.

Vicky- maan I think you guys should go and rest.

Maan- Vicky you are right.

Vicky escorted maaneet to guest room while Annie and pinky left to their homes.

Whole night passed away like blow of wind.

~~~morning~~~

Maan ,geet, annie , Vicky, pari n pinky are having hier breakfast. After beakfast.

Annie- guys we should do something fast. We have to collect proof against dev. Before he gets to know about maan being here.

Pinky- annie is right . But, what will we do.

Maan- we should go to sameera's office

Geet- sameera's office, but why?

Maan- because the tape that reporter hide was still there .

Vicky- oh then we should reach to that tape before dev or rishabh gets it.

Maan- hmmm. Lets go.

Gee- no maan you will not go. What if dev or rishabh will be there

Maan- but geet

Vicky- maan, geet is right. You should stay here. We will get the tape

Maan- but how can I let u guys go alone

Vicky- maan 1st we are 4 of us. Not alone. Secondly pari will be here so you take care of her. Third trust me. I'll not let anything wrong to happen.

Maan ' okay dude. You guys take care and keep informing me.

Vicky ' okay and hugs him.

Maan hugs all and planted a kiss on geet's forehead- take care mishty.

Geet- you too. Love you

Maan- love you too.

Geet along with others left to sameera's office.

They reached there and looked around and find no one. So they enter inside.

Geet calls for Tanya. Listening no respond they think no one is present. So they started searching for tape.

They searched for tape everywhere but didn't find it. Getting frustrated Vicky kicks the flower pot nearby, it breaks.

As they looked down to see the broken pot their faces had a wide smile. There was the tape inside the pot. Vicky bends down and picks the tape and shows geet.

Vicky- oh gosh geet we did it. We find the tape.

Geet ' yes I am so happy Vicky, I can't express.

Annie- lets go before anyone comes.

They turn around and went towards the door to see dev entering the place. Dev sees them too.

Seeing dev, Vicky immediately hides the tapes in his pocket.

Precap- what will dev do know? Will they got caught?

So guys now they got the tape too. So what will happen now? Dev have seen them in sameera's office. Will they get caught ya they will escape.

Waiting for your valuable comments and likes.

Love

Tinu

Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago
sehrish79 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one
Loved it
Cont soon xx
Thnx for pm
sur001 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesum update dear...

waiting eagerly to know will Dev come to know about the tape or not update soon...
amita5 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hope they dont get caught

Hope they can save maan from dev and rishabh

please update soon and thks for the pm

007jindal thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sur001

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesum update dear...


</div>waiting eagerly to know will Dev come to know about the tape or not
<div>
update soon...</font>



glad u liked. Thnx 4 cmnts.
007jindal thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: amita5

hope they dont get caught


Hope they can save maan from dev and rishabh

please update soon and thks for the pm



thank u dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
precap is interesting
continue soon
007jindal thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, beautiful part
loved it
precap is interesting
continue soon



thank u so mch di. Will continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update dear...GEET ne acha bewakoof banaya Dev ko...
Evenif usne Jo bhi bola Dil se bola...
So tape mil gayi...uff ye Dev bhi na...
humerus wrong tym pe tapakta hai...
Be it serial or FFs...har jagaa wrong tym...
Continue soon dear...waiting...

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