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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
loved it
hidden truths r coming out slowly
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow,...tht was a real twist yaar...
I dint expect him to be Involved...
Dirty truth??hmmm...!!!!
Hv to scratch my brains for tht...
So it's better I'll wait for next update...
Continue soon n keep writing...!!!! Muahhh... !!! :* :* <3 <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
me likeyy
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice awsum
nice parts i like it...❤️
thnx 4 da pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago

thank u guys for likes and comments


CHAPTER 13

Annie- why rishabh did this? He loves sameera, isn't?

Maan- no he don't. He did this to sameera because she came to know about his dirty truth.

Geet- truth, which truth maan?

~~~~~~flashback~~~~~~~~

Dev and rishabh were talking, while maan is acting of being unconscious listening to them.

Rishabh- thank you dev, now I don't have to worry and I can continue with all my illegal business.

Dev- rishabh you don't have to thank me, after all if sameera would have exposed you to the world then I would be in the trouble too, as I am you co-partner in it.

Poor maan he thinks I am his best friend, his brother but unknown to him I was doing all this illegal work under the shed of khurana's constructions. As u know no one can raise finger at maan Singh khurana's loyalty so getting caught is next to impossible.

But your dumbo wife came to know about the truth and I have to play all this drama.

Rishabh-u know that day when she told me about telling all the truth to world I got scared, but you saved me.

You came up with this plan. You made her fall in love with you and making her fool you even make her sign all her property in your name.

You know dev I always thought you to be very clever, but u are much cleverer then I have thought.

Dev- thank you rishabh

Both of them laugh evilly.

Rishabh getting serious- dev what did you with that sameera and reporter. If they are alive or dead.

Dev- doesn't worry rishabh they are already finished.

Rishabh- so was that easy to finish them?

Dev- no dude that was not so easy. Just to make world believe that sameera was with maan and they died because of accident. I had to make that reporter wear all of maan's belongingness.

Then I put them in car and pushed the car against the tree making it look like an accident, soon the car catches the fire and they got burned along with car.

Now no one can recognize the face of reporter and with maan's belongings they will think him to be maan.

Both of them laugh evilly…

~~~~~~~~flashback ends~~~~~~~~~

Vicky- oh my god! I can't believe this dev. How can he go so low? Disgusting.

Geet comes close o maan and places her hand on his shoulder- maan I know you are very disturbed as well as angry because of them. But please control. You are still weak.

Maan- no geet I am fine. I will not leave that dev. He has to pay for what he has done.

__________ sameera's office_________

Dev while kicking he table – how can he escape? What were you all doing?

Men- we are sorry sir but we don't know how he escapes from here.

Rishabh – shut up just shut up, go and search for him. We want him back at any cost.

Rishabh to dev- dev what if maan reaches to geet

Dev- no I won't let it happen. I am not gonna let my plan fail.

Rishabh- dev I think you should check if maan reached there or not, as I think he can' go there himself. he is not in a condition to walk so maybe we can find him before he reaches to anyone .

Dev- okay I am calling geet and try to find out about maan from her.

__________khurana's________

Geet- now lave the topic maan, come sit have water.

Geet made maan drink some water and says him to sit.

Maan sits on sofa, geet gets seated beside him. Taking his hand in hers she says

Geet-maan I know you are very disturbed and wanted to punish him for his deeds, but for now you have to take care of yourself too. For me you are very important maan.

Maan understanding geet- oh geet. I love you. I will try to control myself and rest.

Geet- I love you too maan and hugs him.

Annie, Vicky and pinky-smiles and clears their throat. Maan and gee parts away smiling at their friends act. Geet gets up saying she will bring coffee for all, just when he phone rings. It was DEV.

Precap- will dev find out about maan? What will be his next move? What will maan do now?

So guys finally the secret out. It was the involvement of both rishabh and dev. Rishabh has some illegal business like drugs dealing and many more, about which Sam came to know.

Hope you guys are okay with the speed of the track going on. Do tell me anything you don't like and want m to correct. Your suggestions are most welcome.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Yippie...first 1 to comment...
Hey nice part dear...
Dirty truth is out...I so much hate tht Dev-il n Rishab...
I wanna kill them wid my bare hands for hurting both Geet n maan...u shud make him suffer too much...
I kno we have a mutual feeling abt dev's punishment...
Continue soon sweetie...waiting for next part...
Thnkx a lot n keep writing...!!!!! Muahhh...!!!!Love u loads..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tammana_Maaneet

Yippie...first 1 to comment...
Hey nice part dear...
Dirty truth is out...I so much hate tht Dev-il n Rishab...
I wanna kill them wid my bare hands for hurting both Geet n maan...u shud make him suffer too much...
I kno we have a mutual feeling abt dev's punishment...
Continue soon sweetie...waiting for next part...
Thnkx a lot n keep writing...!!!!! Muahhh...!!!!Love u loads..



thanks for comments yaar. ofcourse i too want that dev to rott in hell for hurting my maaneet. just keep reading to see what i do with him
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey atlast all the secrets come out...

Tats so nice... Just hang tat dev coz dumping maan...maan treats him as bro & he steep so low...

Awesome update...

Enjoyed a lot...

Thanks 4r pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update...so finally entire truth is out...now let's see how Maan traps Dev and Rishab in accepting truth...i hope he uses help of police and they rot in jail for their entire life

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