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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter -14

Geet looked at maan with scared face.

Geet- maan its dev's call. Why is he calling. Is he known that you are here? What will happen now maan?

Maan- geet relax. Nothing will happen.. U pick up the call and talk to him like nothing have happened.

Vicky- geet , maan is right. Pick up his call and don't let him suspect that you know about maan even if he seems to know about maan escaping.

Geet- I can't do this. What if he comes to know? No maan I'll not talk to him. Please.

Maan- geet please relax. It's okay. Vicky you pick up the call and talk to him.

Vicky- but maan what will I tell to him if he asks about me picking geet's call.

Maan- Vicky say that geet is at your place for some days to t care of pari, and for now they are sleeping so you took he call.

Vicky ' okay.

The phone rang again''''''

Vicky- hello

Dev- geet?

Vicky- dev, it's me Vicky

Dev- Vicky? How come you picked up geet's phone?

Vicky- dude, geet is here at my place as pari is not well. So she told that she'll take care of her. So she is here for some days. And for now she is sleeping along with pari. I saw her phone ringing so picked it up.

Dev- oh!! It means there is no one in khurana's mansion now.

Vicky - yes dev. But why you are asking this?

Dev- oh awehi Vicky. Anyways dude i am putting the phone down now as I have some clients.

Vicky- oh Okays. Bye

Dev- bye

~~~sameera's office~~~

Dev- rishabh, maan still have not contacted them. And a plus point for us is that geet is not in km too. So even if he goes there, he can't meet her.

Rishabh- dev, but still we have to keep a eye over all. You send some of our men's o km and ask them to keep eye on mansion. If maan goes there we can stop him from meeting geet and others.

Dev ordering his men's. Go n keep a eye on khurana's mansion. And this times no mistakes. They all nods and leaves he place.

~~~~khurana's~~~'

Vicky keeping phone down sighs in relief.

Vicky-thank god. Maan, I felt dev have got doubt over us.I think he have found out you missing

Maan- how can u say that Vicky?

Vicky- don't know dude but I am getting a feeling. The way dev is speaking is creating that feel.

Maan- Vicky if you are right then we have to be extra careful now.

Geet-what will we do know maan.

Annie- I think fist we should all have to leave km and go to Vicky's place.

Pinky- Vicky place, why?

Annie- pinky, bcoz Vicky said to geet that she is there at his place. And I think he will surely go there to confirm if he had found maan missing.

~~~~dev on way to Vicky's place.dev's pov~~~

I think rishabh is right. I should go there at Vicky's place myself and check.

We can't take a risk now. After visiting Vicky's place, i'll go to khurana's mansion and see if maan reached there .

~~~~khurana's~~~~

Maan- I think annie is right. We should immediately leave from here. Geet u go and bring the necessary things.

Vicky- I am taking the car ou.

Geet rushed upstairs and brought some clothes of maan and hers and all other necessary things.

After picking the thing they left the km locking it.

On way to Vicky's house.

Geet- Vicky I think we should inform pari of our arrival.

Vicky ' okay let me call n inform her.

Vicky calls pari up and tells her about their coming.

Some they reaches vicky's house.

Pari opened the door for him . As soon as pari sees maan , she hugs him crying. Asking about his well being.

PRECAP- WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN DEV COMES TO VICKY'S HOUSE.


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Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey tht was nice nut a very short one yaar...
Ok so now they want to catch Maan again...
Now Maan needs to hide in Vicky's house...
Yaa this wud be a better option...
Thn Dev n Rishab will not catch Maan...
As they think he will go to KM...
Just tht before Dev reach,all of them shud reach Vicky's place...
Thnkx for the update...love u...keep writing...
TJ...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved it
precap is interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update yaar...

Its very interguing...

Update soon...

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