It should have been you(ArSH/AR/DMG3 FF) Updtpg148 - Page 86

beautiful part

Originally posted by: tintinu

wow!im first

just saw ur update

Originally posted by: destinationn

great yr.. superb...👏

Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd

OH MY GOD !! OH MY GOD!!!!

I love this OMG stuff cause right off the bat I know and like I'm not nervous! Plus this is always a good first reaction 😉

U woman u better tell me what happened in the last few days that made u so so so much matured in terms of love😉..i mean u have grown a whole ten fold as far as romance is concerned...Just look at ur thoughts..ur lines...either the writer in u have grown up, or u were like this only, but didnt get a platform to explore it...Whatever it is..if all ur past updates were a treat to read, this was a whole party...😃

AWWW that's so sweet! Honestly I think its the first thing, maturing! And you know why😉 but thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked cause honestly I was like yaar kya soche gi, is this too much? but so relieved that you enjoyed it this much!

...The magnificence of this part lied in its softness..the subtle veil of shyness in which u hid the two protagonists...I loved ..absolutely loved the hesitation put so beautifully...the amateur nature...the blush...it was awesome..

😳😳 always subtle! that's the best kind of love!

I loved the conversation...it was i guess by far one of the most heartfelt ones of the story...every single line that armaan said...i swear i myself was feeling giddy at the intensity...i looked around and my vision was blurry for a while...i was so so into the moment...i loved how u described shilpa..i was also smiling reading about her reaction after armaan left...

When he came bak...OMG!!!I had a feeling he saw her...and eeekkkss he did...i loved the way he teased her...i actually felt my own heart thump when they were so close...

THANK YOU! honestly tumhe pata hai how difficult dialogues are for me so im like overjoyed that you liked this conversation it means so much!!

The phone call...my my my...i think armaan;s line abut shilpa jumping and shilpa thanking him...and yes also the lines armaan said to shilpa...like what she taught him and what she didnt...for me these all are the lines of the day...says about the rate of ur work today , doesnt it😉

Thanks thanks thanks!!! I'm happy that you liked all the lines but also a bit sad cause I LOVE reading your scene/line of the day 😆

I WANT MY OS...

and I shall pm u some scenes soon...already have one ready..u can very well put that in next part..:P

OS! yes yes that will come soon! don't worry! I promise!

Love you loads ❤️

Originally posted by: blessed4

Amazing part...please continue soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sweet1210

Wow finally u updated
lovely part
loved it
continue soon
luv
Bharti 😊

Originally posted by: rads73937

Aww sho shweet. Amazing update. Thanx for the pm. Continue soon jaldi jaldi fast fast. Take care.

Originally posted by: thithutop14

Oooyyeee Hoooyyee...

main mar jawan... kya likha hai ... superb mera dil garden garden ho gaya yeh update padh ke... am sooo happy... gosh i felt like dancing finall this has happened ... WOOOW

pls pls write soon can't wait to read more ...

ty so much for the pm!

love

komal