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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 21

maan's heart was bleeding wid guilt to be d reason of tears of his geet...
to be d reason of d break up of deir beautifull relationship...
to be d reason of making her feel alone in dis world...
to b d reason of d distance..dat endless distance between deir heart...
he still wish to get back dat beautifull life where dey were best frnds...
where dey would fight wid each other for every stupid yet sweet eason...
where dey wud hug n kisses each other unlimited times a day...
where dey were 1st priority of each other...
where d distance never existed...
and he knew...
it was en END
...
...END OF DEIR SWEETEST FRNDSHIP !!!!!!!!!!!

...

1 month passed....

a complete month passed but nothing changed a bit...
d every sec..every min...ever moment went like hell for sumehere in deir hearts...
no call..no msg...
both didn't came in contact wid each other aftr dat painfull moment...
geet once again consoled her heart to learn how to live without him...
neither she talked to uttara aur hameer aftr dat...
she engrossed herself completely in work...
sameer did try to come in touch wid her...
but she didn't even bother to ans...
nor she gave time for any appointment wid him...
sameer was left confused of her sudden attitude...
and his curiousnes about dis young stubborn lady increased..
...
but maan's condition was worse...
he hurted geet..made him feel gult...
he feel ashamed was making her like dis...
he now velieves dat he was d reason..dat geet left delhi n became so cold...
he believed he was d reason of for ruining deir beautifull relation..
he didn't talk wid anybody much n joined khurana construction..to keep himself busy...
he sumwhere dadi did contact geet and she is safe and fine...which gave him sum relief...
he even avoided talking suzeil which irritated her to d core...
she was confused and angry of his sudden behavious...
she hav already said sorry and cleare deir fights...
but him again avoiding her..was sitting on her nerves...
so finally she decided to cum india and solve everything soon as possible..

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maan was working in office...
fine..he was sumwhere thinking if geet vil be fine...
she hell dnt know how to take care of herself...
but dat made him angry of himself again...
he always knew...she cnt take care of hersekf..still he left her for 2 yrs...
wat if dadi was dere..but still he was most close to her...
he left her alone..dat too against her wish...
he would jav atlleast manaofied her and den would hav left...
but no...
hell nooo
his ego took over him...
wat has he gone and done wid deir relationship...

FLASHBACKS...

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geet crying - tu kehna kya chahta hai..me tujhe tera sapna pura karne se rok rahi hu...
...
maan frustratingly - haan...tu mere aur mere dad ke sapne ke bich aa rahi hai...ab khush...
...
maan didn't even realize his words...
he never meant it...
it just came in d flow of anger n frustration...
but dat broke geet's heart...
how could he say dat to her...
her maan told her dat she is d reason...
unaware of her situation maan continued...
maan angrily - suna liya jo sunna tha...ab mujhe aur bachpana nahi chahiye...aur khabardar jo mujhse muah fera toh...mujhe packing me teri madat chahiye...samajhi tu...
he said authoritively...
and saying so ...left from deir angrily...without even looking at her once...
unaware of d situation dat she has broken on her knees...

...
2 days passed...
geet didn't cum to knurana mansion...
maan's anger was boiling like hot oil...
its been 9 days geet didn't cum dere...
2 days back..maan had fight wid her and told dat he needs her for packing..and still she didn't cum...dat frustrated maan even more...
dadi had gone to meet geet every day...checking if she is fine...
but didn't ask..as his ego was taking over his care for geet...
he had taken 1 step and gone to meet her 2 days back...
but he cnt adjust wid his ego every time...
dis time she hav to cum to me and apolosize for being si kiddish...
...
just 1 week left for him to leave for london...
and d thought sumwhere didn't sound good to him...
he very well knew how neive and innocent geet is..
and leaving her alone in d same house where dat brij lives..was unacceptable for maan..
he very well knew..how scared geet gets about dat brij...
coz he never leaves any chance of scolding her..taking care maan is not dere...
dat was d reason rajjender uncle had sent him far from house for his studies...
but he would cum in vacation and dat was enough for geet to get scare...
but dis stupid geet is not even talking to him...
otherwise he might hav convinced her to start staying in khurana mansion wid dadi as d again vil be alone..
...
2 more days passed...
but geet didn't cum...
he didn't hav any clue about her...how is she...and all...
and maan's ego stopped him for going to her..
he did notice dadi was angry wid him..
but he didn't know d reason..so he concluded to be his getting angry on geet..
on top of dat...
he needed to strt packing..and hell he didn't know wat to take and wat not...
coz whereever dey all went out..geet would do his packing...
all his stuff was settled by geet and its only her who knew..wat is where...
he giggled to himself remembering how he would sgout her name from balcony wen sumthing vil be missing..
and geet would cum running in his room and would find out dat thing in matter of 2-3 minutes..
stupid geet...
y cnt she just cum once...
ok i got angry on her...
but it doesn't mean she should behave like dis...
stupid duffer idiot...god im already missing her...
how vil i stay in london without geetu...
dats it...
silly maan...u urself r scared about thinking how vil u stay without her in london...
so think about geet...
wat she vil be thinking...
she is smaller than u and is neive and very innocent...
how scared she must be thinking u r leaving her for 2 yrs...
damn u maan...
instead of consoling her and making her understand...
u got angry on her...
she calls u right..u r a dusht danav...
maan singh khurana is a dusht danav...
ohh godd geet..im sorry..very sorry geetu...
i got angry on u wen u needed me d most...
and without thinking much he ran for her house...feeling very guilty...
...
and d moment he entered her room...
he found his cutie sleeping on bed cutely...
he smiled at d sight...and went closer...
he sat beside her..and bent closer to her...
he felt more guilty noticing dat quite dried layer of tears on her pink cheeks...
he carrsed his thumb gently and wiped it off...foloowed by a soft peck on her forehead...
maan whiepered softly - im sorry geetu...maan is very bad na..always hurts u...im sorry..yaar maaf kar dena...tujhe pata hai mujhe kitna gussa aata hai...(he immediatelt held his ears)..dekh mene kaan bhi pakad liya...sorry na..aaj ke baad me kabhi bhi gussa nahi karunga tujh pe..sachhi...( he left his ears and tucked d loose starnds gently behind her ear)...tujhe kitna miss kiya mene..tu ghar kyu nahi aayi..mujhse baat bhi nahi ki na...etna bura hu me...(she wriggled in her sleep..feeling cold)...(he immediately pulled d duver over her..till her neck..)...(she smiled in her sleep)..meri geet muskurate huye hi pyari lagti hai..im sorry mene tujhe rulaya...me promise karta hu me jaldi vapas aaunga...me tere sath kabhi kuchh galat nahi hone dunga geetu,..kabhi bhi nahi..me door huva to kya...meri nazar humesha tujhpar rahegi..me sab sambhal lunga..tujhe pareshan hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai...( he pecked her kiss lovingly and whiepred sweetly)...GEETU...

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and wid dat he left from dere not wanting to break her sleep...
as he came out..he saw malini aunty...
maan - aunty jab geet uth jaye..to usse kahiyega ke mene usse bulaya hai...
malini - jo beta...me use keh dungi...
maan - umm..aunty..mene suna brij aa raha hai...
malini - haan wo next week aa raha hai...
maan relucantly - aunty..mujhe galat mat samajhiye..par ap janti hai..brij's behavious towrds geet...plz uska jara dhyan rakhiyega...
malini smiled sadly - tumhare hote wo kuchh nahi kahega usse...um pareshan mat ho..
maan - actually aunty me london ja raha hu 2 saal ke...
malini - wattt..umm mera matlab achanak beta..
maan - haan wo post graduation complete karne ke liye..esliye mene kaha ki uska jara dhyan...
malini - tum fikar mat karo beta..hum sab hai na..
maan smiled - thnq aunty..ab me chalta hu aur haan geet ko jarur keh dijiye..wo mujhse thodi naraz hai...
malini - haan haan..me bol dungi..

...
maan threw d flower vass angrily on d floar..breaking it into peices...
he cnt believe...
he just cnt believe his geet did dat...
he hav told malini aunty to paas his msg to geet...
and geet..being idiot..ignored my msg and went out for shopping wid uttara...
how can she behave like dis...
she is my geet who can never ignore my command..
n now wat just wrong wid her...
y is she behaving so different..
stupid..showing me her anger..showing me attitude...
fine..
if she dnt care...
den y d hell im waiting for...
NAKULLL
shouted maan on top of his voice...
nakul came running in scared...
maan angrily - sham tak mujhe mera sara saman packed chahiye...2 din baad mujhe jana hai...
nakul - par geet baby..
maan shot a deadly glare...
nakul gulped and nodded his head in yes...
maan left from dere frustrated...

...

AIRPORT...

dadi maa - bete aap thik hai...
maan looking away - mujhe kya huva hai...me bilkul thik hai...
dadi maa - aap etna naraz hai usse...
maan angrily - me kyu usse naraz..ussr koi farak nahi padta..to fir me kyu...
dadi maa - maan...
maan - to me kya karu dadi...2 hafte ho gaye...me uska paas 2 baar chuka hun..ab aur kitni mafi mangu...i just cnt believe dadi wo mujhe last good bye bolne tak nahi...
dadi closed her eyes sighing...
maan - mene to socha tha..air port mujhe tight hug karte huye aayegi...aur mujhe chhodegi hi nahi...royegi chillayegi..mujhe dategi..maregi...par wo to ek baar milne tak nahi aayi...
ddi maa - maan..humne bhu usse 2-3 din se nahi dekha...may be sumthing...
maan - kuchh nahi..sab natak hai uske..usse achhi tarah pata hai ne ke i cnt handle her silence...esiliye...usse lagta hai ke agar wo mujhse baat nahi karegi to me nahi jaunga...
dadi giggled wid tears...
maan baby angrily wid tear - kyu kar rahi hai wo mere sath aisa...
dadi maa smiled wid tear - aap hi ne usse etna ziddi banaya hai...aaj tak uski har wish aapne puri ki...aur kabhi galti se apne usse mana kar diya to w mood mod leti...apna jhootha gussa dikhakar..wo aap maan lete...
maan smiled wid tears - mene hi usse etna ziddi bana diya hai...dadi me kaise jau..usse mile bina...
dadi sighed - bethe mene uske ghar phone kiya tha..par malini ne kaha ke wo ghar par nahi hai...
maan angrily - usse hazar baar bola mene ek mob lelo..me deta hu...par ye ladki kisi ki koi bhi baat nahi manati...
dadi - maan..me hu na uska khayal rakhne ke liye..aap kyu pareshan ho rahe hai...
maan sighed - dadi aap uska khayal rakhna plz...us pagal ko to etni si bhi akal nahi hai...
dadi giggled - me aa uski phone par baat karwa dungi...ab jyiye..flite ka time ho raha hai..
maan hugged dadi tight and d tears rolled out of his eyes...
maan - dadi aap apna bhi khayal rakhna..warna ab me nahi apko geet ke gusse se bachane ke liye...
dadi - heyy babaji..ab mujhe kaun bachayega...
maan giggled - dadi aap bhi na..me chalta hu...aur haan plz use mana lijiyega..plz plz..
dadi giggled - maan singh khurana saying plz..ok...
maan smiled and left...
...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

1 tear rolled out of his eyes..bringing him back to reality...
how much he wnted to meet her once dat day...
wanted to take his geet in his arms..giving her a bear hug..a kiss on her cheek...
just once atleast...

he wiped his tear and about to go back for his work...
wen d door banged open and dere she stood...
maan looked at her shocked...

" tum..."

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
humein lagta hai k abb maan ko sach pata chalna chahiye...geet aur maan k vich k sare dooriyan mit jaye...aur woh chudail suzeil ko hata dena chahiye...dat will b better...its my request plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update simply loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet ghar pe nahi he matlab, Chachi ne usse kahin bhej diya kya? And ye kaun aya he Maan k office, Suziel?
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...😊.continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part...
who came???? is it
suzeil😡...
waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
cont soon
give one more update na
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, khahi maan aur geet ke ye doori mei aunty ka haath tho nahi,waiting to see suziel and maan clear everything of their relation and suziel out of maan's life forever.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 d apm 4 parts 20 n 21. Jus read both nw...sory 4 late likes n comments! Superb updates! update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
did chachi give msg to geet? he went to meet her...oh...he tried...bt words spoken in anger...dont knw hurts d most...

his gf is der or geet??????? i dont want any of dem to suffer...pls update soon...

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