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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
thnqqq frndsss for such sweet comments...

but mishty is sad...
100 pms n only 36 likes n 22 comments......
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part 1


DOOR OF CABIN BANG OPENED...
a long footstep...wearing high-hill n very professional clothes (formal black colored) came out...making it's way out...
every one's eye's went lower..dropping deir head down into deir files...
till dis storm goes without firing anybody...
n here she was...
GEET...
enters conference room...
every1 held deir breath till she comfortably took her place...
none of her staff dared to do a single mistake which vil eventually cost getting fired ond spot...
d clients very well aware of d stubborn attitude of dis 23 yrs young lady...
she couldn't possubly refuse d deal any moment is she dn't like anything...
geet - shall we strt...
clients just nodded wid a big smile on deir faces...
y would not dey b happy...its hard to get a single appointment of dis beautifull n stubborn n 1 of most successfullladies...named GEET...
n ofcorse dey vil b on 9th cloud if dey vil get dis deal..coz its not possible for all...
its been 2 yrs she was handling HANDA INDUSTRIES...n seems like dis industry cnt even breath properly of geet vil not b dere...
...
as d meeting went...
mr.suri started to bcum litle scared noticing d straight face of dis MD...as it was impossible to understand wat is going on behind dis staright face...
as meeting finished...
mr.suri - thnq for ur time..ms.handa...we alwz had a very good relationship wid ur father...
geet - we shud get back to d deal now...
mr.suri litle uncomfortably - so wat is ur opinion about d deal ms.handa...
geet - i need to think about it...vil get to u by dis evening...
mr.suri - v vil b waiting for ur answer...
geet hand-shaked wid her staright mysterious face...
left conference room wid her big steps...keeping d clients in shock watching dis new fire stone...

geet entered her cabin..standing near d window...looking out..
loving her power...
as her thoughts went to her past...

" mujhe yuhi karke...
...khwabon se juda...
jane kaha chhupke...
...betha hai khuda...

janu na me kab huvi...
...khud se gumshuda...
kaise juyi ruh bhi...
...mujhse hai juda...

kyuuu...

ye rahe...
...mujhse puchhe...
...ghar kahan hai...

kyuuu...

mujhse aake...
...dastak puchhe...
...ghar kahan hai hai..."

...

FLASHBACKS...

16 yrs back...

GEET - papaji dhire...
mohinder - beta dhire hi chala raha hu...
geet - papaji hum kaha ja rahe hai...
rano - airport ja rahe hai beta...
geet - kyu...
mohinder - hum delhi ja rahe hai beta chacha aur chachi se milne...
geet - par hum pehle to kabhi nahi gaye...
rano - haan beta..isliye to ab ja rahe hai..unse milne...
mohinder - wahan aapke sath brij veerji aur sameera didi b hongi...
geet - ye log kaun hai papaji...
mohinder - aap ke bhai aur behen hai beta...
geet - papaji dhire chalao na...
rano - ji woh keh rahi hai to dhire chalayiye na...
mohinder - break par paw pad hi nahi rahe hai...7 saal rano...us sham ke baad...
geet - sham..??
rano - kuchh nahi beta..aap abhi so jao..baad me bhayya aur didi ke sath khelenge na aap...
geet - ji mumma..bahot maja aayega na...
mohinder - to chalo so jao..humari pari ne ankhen band ki ya nahi...??
geet - pari ne ankhen band kar li...

...
rano - us sham ko jo huva..uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha ke vapas ye sab...
mohinder - haan rano.mujhe to yakin hi nahi ho raha ke rajender ne khud phone kar ke hume bulaya hai...
rano - babaji ki kripa se..sab phir se thik ho raha hai...
mohinder - par ek dar b lag raha hai..darji b nahi hai..ye sab achanak...
rano - achha sochiye ji..sab thik ho raha hai..yahi kafi hai...
mohinder - shayad tum thik keh rahi ho...VED ke baad GEET ne humari dil ki sari kadawahat khatm kar di...
rano looked outside from window...
mohinder holds her hand tightly...
rano smiled wid teary eyes...
...
rano - aap kitni tej chala rahe hai...bachhee fir se uth jayegi...
mohinder - pata nahi..jara ajeeb lag raha hai..break thik se...
ohhh shttt...heyy vahe guru...
rano - kya huva...
mohinder - break nahi lag raha hai...
rano scaringly - kya..koshish to kijiye...aise kaise...
...
rano - aap speed kam karne ki koshish to kijiye...
ouuchhh...
mohinder - kuch nahi ho raha hai...sambhal ke...
rano - meri bachhee...kuchh kijiyena...
mohinder - ha me woh...
...
suddenly a truck from front n crashed dem...
booommm...

...
hospital...
mohinder weakly- rano kaisi hai...
rajender crying - bhabhi nahi rahi bhai sahab...
mohinder - kya...nahi..wo mujhe chhod ke...
rajender - sambhaliye khudko bhai sahab...
mohinder - aur meri bachhee...
rajender - wo thi hai..babaji ki meher hai ke usse jyada chhot nahi aayi..hath me ek fracture hai aur kharoche aayi hai...
mohinder - meri phool si bachhee..etni taklif me...
rajender - ye sab meri vajah se huva hai..mujhe apko bulana hi nahi chahiye tha...
mohinder - jo likha hai..usse koi badal nahi sakta...rano...
rajender - plz bhai sahab..geet ke khatir..aap ko sambhalna hoga khuko...
mohinder - mujse wada karo rajje...agar mujhe kuchh ho jaye..to tum meri beti ka khayal rakhoge..uska haqq usse doge...
rajender crying - bhai sahab..aap ko kuchh nahi hoga..aap aise kyu bol rahe ho..aap ko jeena hai...geet ke liye...
mohinder's breath strts sinking...
rajender screaming - dr...dr...
mohinder - wada karo rajje...meri beti ko apni beti ki tarah rakhoge...usse koi kami mat aane dena...

rajender - aap phikar na kare..apni beti se bhi jyada pyar dunga usse...bas aap thik ho jayiye...
mohinder - geet...geet...usse rone mat...dena...
rajender - bhai shab...dr...
mohinder - meri bachee...geet...geet...
dr instantly ran in...
dr - ohh no..he is sinking...
nurse - sir plz go out...
rajender cums out crying...
aftr sum time...
dr came out - we r sorry
rajender fell on d floar crying - bhai sahab...
...

4 days passed...
in delhi..
geet came to conscious...
geet - mumma...mumma mujhe bhook lagi hai...
malini - beta me abhi aap ke liye doodh lati hu..aap aaram karo...
geet - mumma kahan hai..aap kaun ho...
malini - beta me apki chachi hu..ab aap ko dard to nahi ho raha na...
geet - mumma kahan hai...
rajender came in...
malini hav no answer of her questions...
geet - mumma aur papaji kahan hai...
rajender - beta me aap ka chachu hu..aur aap ke mumma papaji ko bhagwan ne bahot jaruri kaam se bula liya hai...
geet - bhagwan ne...kya kaam hai...
rajender - ab woh ton bhagwan ko pata..par bhagwan ji ka phone aaya tha bhai sahab ko ke jaldi se yahan aa jao..mujhe bahot jaruri kaam hai...to isliye mumma papaji chale gaye..
geet - to mujhe kyu nahi le gaye sath me..wo mujhe kahin akele chhod kar nahi jate...
...
rajender - wo aap ko hum sab se milana tha na...esliye papa ne kaha ke me aapka dhyan rakhu tab tak wo bhagwan se milne ja rahe hai...
geet wid teary eyes - mujhe b waha jana hai..i promise me unhe tang nahi karungi...
malini left from deir crying...
geet started to cry - mujhe mumma papaji ki yaad aa rahi hai...wo wapas kab aayenge...
rajender - jab bhagwan ji ka kaam puara ho jayega..tab...
geet - aap ke paas bhagwan ji ka no hai..mujhe mumma papaji se baat kkarni hai...
rajender - mere pass to nahi hai...aap ke papa ko phone aaya tha na..to unke paas hoga...
rajender thout of her very clever n talkative compare to her age..her thinking is very high like 7-8 yrs old child...
...
geet started to cry...
geet - mujhe mumma papaji ke pass jana hai...mujhe unki yaad aa rahi hai...wo mujhe kabhi akele chhod kar nahi jate...
rajender - aise rote nahi beta...aap brij aur sameera se mile...
...
geet - mujhe kisi se nahi milna...
she ran out crying her eyes out...
...


came out running to d garden...
near a big tree..sitting on jhula...still crying...
...
dat tree was d only thing dat was between khurana haveli n handa haveli...
so khurana made it garden types...so dat dan place vil b in use for handing out or fresh air...

geet was crying her heart out..as she was deadly missing her mumma papaji...dis was d 1st time..dey ever left her alone...
" y dey left me alone...
wen vil dey b back...mumma ko pata hai na..mujhe akele dar lagta hai..to fir...
agar mujhe raat me dar lagega to...tab papaji aur mumma wapas to aajayenge na..."

she was asking millions of questions...to d tree n jhula...who were d only supporter she felt her own...
coz dey were letting her cry..unlike others...
other dnt tell her anything about mumma papaji...mujhe...
she was sobbing...sobbbing n sobbing...
wen suddenly her eyes fell on a boy busy playing his football...

...

plzzz
do comment all
nxt prt - part 2
love
mishty

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Oho me first for the first part
Nice start for the story!!! Surprised to see Geet as a tough business women, but her past story padne ke baad patha chala why she must have become like this. Geet ke saath bohot bura huwa😭 toh Maan babu padosi hai, hmm...😉😉
Edited by maanhar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Nice ff update next part soon dear
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#25
AWESOME UPDATE …. !!!!👏

plzzz update soon ….. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Nice update Mishty. I felt bad For the little Geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
very emotional n awesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
👏awesome update👏
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Nice and a different start... continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
AMazing, surprised to see dusht danav geet.lagta hai maan ki atma geet main chali gayi hain.😆

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