dooriyan...bhi...hai...jaroori !!! pt 22 -pg 128 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
nice characters ...continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
nice...

geet is handling the empire...n poor her...lost her parents at such a young age...😭

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

this is so so so so

awesome

loved it yaar

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Congrats On The New FF
Happy Friendship's Day
Amazing Update
Cont Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
part 2


geet was crying her heart out..as she was deadly missing her mumma papaji...dis was d 1st time..dey ever left her alone...
" y dey left me alone...
wen vil dey b back...mumma ko pata hai na..mujhe akele dar lagta hai..to fir...
agar mujhe raat me dar lagega to...tab papaji aur mumma wapas to aajayenge na..."

she was asking millions of questions...to d tree n jhula...who were d only supporter she felt her own...
coz dey were letting her cry..unlike others...
other dnt tell her anything about mumma papaji...mujhe...
she was sobbing...sobbbing n sobbing...
wen suddenly her eyes fell on a boy busy playing his football...

...

PRESENT

...
a tear rolled out of her eyes...bringing her back to reality...

" rahe aisi jinki...
...manzil...hi nahi...
dhundo mujhe ab me...
...rehti...hu wohi...

dil hai kahin...
...aur...dhadkan hai kahin...
sanse hai magar...
...kyu...zinda me nahi..."


she wiped it off immediately...b4 any one sees it...which was nxt to impossible...
entering her cabin without her permission...no vil dare it even in his worst dream...messing up wid dis stubborn GEET HANDA...
NO WAYZZZ !!!!!
...
geet went back to her mob..checking mails...only to find 3 missed calls from UTTARA...
she immediately called her back...
uttara - kahan thi yaar...kab se try kar rahi hu tujhe...
geet smiled - gussa mat karna..meeting thi..bata kya huva...
uttara wid her serious tone - geet..i actually...
geet - dnt tell me u n hameer again fought...godd...grow up guys...
uttara - no silly...its iportnt...actually...maan is back from london...
geet - dats a good news...finally dadi vil b out of tension...
uttara was just taken aback wid her reaction...
no question..nothing...no single inch of pain she felt through geet's voice..like she doesn't care anymore...
uttara - geet tu thik hai na...
geet smiled - haan sweets...tum log kab mil rahe ho ye batao...i want u all in mumbai on dis weekend...
uttara - vil u listen to me...its importnt geet...u didn't even ask how do i know...
geet - tu bina bataye rahegi kya..chal bata...
uttara - actually me n hameer went to meet dadi ysrday...n den dadi told dat he just came ystrday...
geet least interested - oohkk...aur dadi kaisi hai..dadi ki tabiyat thik hai na ab...
uttara - haan dadi thik hai..we usually meet dadi across a week...
geet - u better..or else i vil kill u both vis my bare hands...
uttara - ok get serious now...
geet was however wanted to drop dis topic...so she started playing wid words...
geet - tu aur serious..okk...finally hameer tujhe doctor ke pass le hi gaya...
uttara - geet sun na...
geet - ok so its done..u guys cuming dis weekend...
uttara - geet MAAN...
geet cut her instantly - uttara..u r cleaver enough to understand..dat m trying to drop dis topic from so long...but as u r not stopping..i shud cum to d point directly...if u dnt want me to stop talking to u either...den...
uttara - okkk..okk..i got it..gussa mat kar...i love u...
geet smiled - i love u more..ok..i hav to go now..work time...
uttara rolled her eyes - fine..vil catch u on weekend...
call hanged up...

...
IN DELHI...
A SRTONG MAN...
at d age of his 25...
entered d HANDA HAWELI...
rajjender n malini were busy wid sum iportnt chat wid deir low voices...which was suddenly disturbed wid dose strong footsteps...
dey just kept staring as dat person made his way direct to geet's room...which was locked...

n here came MAAN
...
he didn't like it...
y geet's room is locked...
in past 18 yrs..he never find her room locked ever...
where is she...
she must b knowing...i hav cum back...
she didn't even bothered to meet me...
she didn't miss me...dumbo...
but sumwhere maan did miss his geet...so he decided to ask rajjender...
maan - hello..uncle...
rajjender a bit surprised dat MAAN SINGH KHURANA...who hardly talks to dem now greeting himself willingly..okkk
rajjender gave a forcefull smile...
maan - uncle where is geet...
rajjender's n malini's face filled wid hatredness...
malini forcecefully replied - wo humare sath nahi rehti ab...
throwing dis few words..both walked in wid strops...
maan gave a weired look...making his way back to khurana mansion...
he was about to enter his room...
his phone rang...
maan - wat is it...
suzeil - y my maan singh khurana is alws in bad mood...
maan smiled - hav u called me to fight...
suzeil - ofcorse not...i was missing u...
maan - miss u too...wen r u cuming...
suzeil - soon as i vil get time...u know dad...he is alws aftr me..goshh...
maan - alright...catch u soon den...
suzeil - love u
maan - love u too...
hanged up...

all dis discusiion was heard by dadi maa who was just passing by him...
she was about to walk of...
maan trapped her - dadi maa...me kal se aaya hu..aur aap ne mujhse baat tak nahi ki thik se...monday se me KC join kara hu..so i hardly vil get time for anything...
dadi giving faint smile - beta...u handled london busyness superbly...just take rest for sum day...
maan - dadi me kya puchh raha hu...aur aap kya bol rahi hai...btw...suzeil vil b here soon...
dadi just nodded as ok..n was about to leave...
maan trapped her again - dadi..geet kahan hai..i mean..her uncle said ke ab wo unke sath nahi rehti..usne yahan shift kar liya kya...
dadi said sadly yet litle sarcastically - wo yahan kyu shift hogi...mujhe b jyada pata nahi hai..par shayad wo apne ghar laut gayi...
maan didn't like it..
ghar laut gayi matlab..he didn't understand at all...
but he failed to realize dadi is taunting...
maan - apne ghar matlab...
dadi - humne kaha na beta..hume b thik se pata nahi hai...
maan find all litle odd..
so he made his way to his room...
...

MUMBAI
evening...
all staff was standing all around geet..shivering...
geet retored - i want d person to cum out in nxt 5 min...
sasha - mam...r u sure...d news...
sasha words went back into her mouth wid d glare of geet...
geet - i dnt hav to tell anyone..dat i never take any action..until n unless m sure enough...
sasha went silent..dipping her head down...
geet - d file is lealked to mehta company...by ystrday only...i want d person who is resposible for dis...
no1 dared to cum out...
geet - 3 min...agar agle 3 min me.i didn't get d person..whole staff vil b replaced...
everybody's breath chocked in deir throats...
dey knew...its not just a threatening...
a person like GEET HANDA...can do dis..n already hav done it b4 also...
...
a man came out..dipping his head...
knowing dere is no escape now...
geet looked at him wid her furious yet winning eyes...
like she won..yet again...
man - mam..i vil never repeat it again...please mam...one last chance...
geet laughed loudly making everybody get scared like hell...
geet - u r working in dis company for past 1 n half yr..still u dnt know dat d word "second chance" doesn't exist in my dictionary...
ok...dat's againa crime...she said sarcastically...laughing again...
" pinky "...geet's voice changed to her cold serious tone suddenly...
pinky made her way straight to geet wid a paper in her hand...
man more threatened.. - plz mam..one chance...
geet - u r fired..not for leakking d information...but for asking second chance..knowing how much i hate dose two words...
man felt like he himself spoiled everything taking dose words...
geet was about to get back to her cabin...
she again turned - btw..agar mujhe pata ho sakta hai ke infomrtaion leakk huyi hai..so obvious i knew..who it was...just wanted to listen from ur mouth..now dnt worry...ab tumhe aaram hi aaram karna hai...coz no company in all mumbai vil dare to give u job...as u know me now atleast...
laughing geet made her to cabin...

...
her wide face instantly zipped as she entered her cabin locking d door behind...
remebering her hatredness towrds d word "second chance"

" bheg bani hathon se...
...yun...beh gayi...
takdir meri...
...bikhari...hai jahan...


kaise likhu...
...firse nayi...DASATA...
GUM ki siyahi...
...dikhati...hai kahan...


rahe jo chuni hai...
...meri thi rada...
rehta hu kyu fir...
...khud se hi khafa...


aisi bhi huyi thi...
...mujhse kya khata...
tune jo mujhe di...
...jine ki sajah..."


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mishty

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
yyyiiipppeee me first
awesome update👏
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Loved this a lot
cold n mean geet wow
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Awesome Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
Tyro thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
nice part,...

it seems geet loved maan...but maan did not ...he has a gf...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
I am curious to know what went wrong with Geet, woh aise pattar dil ki kaise ban gayi...

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