dooriyan...bhi...hai...jaroori !!! pt 22 -pg 128 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
loved the way u used the flashback scenes
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...

the fb scene reminded me of parineeta...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di...it was really fantastic...

feelin very bad 4 geet...

hope deir misunderstanding ll b cleared soon...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update 😊

I am still inquisitive abt their past, I know you will have a time to tell that 😊

the flash back was cute 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
osum. . They are made 4 each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updateloved the cute flashbacks 😳loved maan's care towards little geet in childhood locker scene reminded me film ''PARINEETA''it was awesome , loved itstill waiting to know why geet went away from maaneagerly waiting for sameer's party 😉thanks for the pmplease continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, amazing. want to know soon what went wrong that geet has cut of ties with maan and dadi.
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Posted: 13 years ago

What a start Mishty...

first of all apologies ti strat reading this so late...I follow your LBL on facebook but never got chance to read this. But I like reading on IF as formatting is better and also I am able to comment. So i will read all the chapters and comment individually.

Chapter one - great start Mishty...my heart broke reading a small girl's plight

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 2 -

Maan seems confused...so he doesn't know what is wrong with Geet

Is she hurt because of Maan...is she hurt because of her uncle and aunt...waiitng to read more

btw I love the poem you post along with your updates

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