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Posted: 13 years ago



Part: 7

ALways helpless in front of him

Maan: Okay I surrender.
Dev: Oh no we are not letting you escape that easily Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. You called us fat! yeh lo!
They stuff his mouth with all the ice cream.
Vicky: Bro your face is burning up red, stop blushing thinking about Bhaabi. Let me help you to cool down" he says putting ice cream all over his face.
Maan's eyes popped out in anger.
Vicky looks at Dev and they both scream, "RUNNN!"





Paami was sitting on the bed quietly looking at the picture she had captured on her phone. She knew Geet never accepted her as a part of her family let alone mother but regardless she couldn't help not caring for her like she was her own. The way she would come home late that was when she started suspecting. She even noticed her one-day completely drunk coming up the stairs towards her room. She even tried talking to her when she was sober, but she screamed " Stop trying to act as my mother, you can never replace her! So please stop interfering with my personal life and mind your own business!" She then even tried to talk to her husband, Mohinderlaal, but he couldn't believe that his daughter could do such a thing.
But this time she had proof. She had taken a picture of Geet sitting on some guy's lap her arms around his neck as he sat on a motorcycle. The man's face was not visible because Geet was blocking it. She didn't know what to do. She was nervous in telling her husband scared from his reaction toward Geet. She didn't want her to get hurt. But she didn't have any other option she thought.
Mohinderlaal comes in and sees her worried face.
Mohinderlaal: Is everything okay? What are you looking at that it is making you look so depressed?
Before Paami could say anything he had grabbed the phone to see for himself as he was concerned when shock coursed his body. This couldn't be his Geet.
Paami: Please it is not what it looks like.
Mohinderlaal: It is not what it looks like? Than how does it look like. . . TELL ME! I trusted her!
Paami: Please don't get so angry. Let's deal with this in a peaceful manner.
Mohinderlaal: I know how to deal with her. She will get MARRIED now. It is no longer her choice! Call and let them know tomorrow morning that all three of us will be coming to their Business party and there they can meet Geet.
This was what Paami was scared of. Forcing Geet into something she hates will just push her away from this family and she could not bear seeing that. She wanted to help her knowing their was some pain she was hiding except she didn't know what, but could sense it.
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The next morning the Khurana family was eating breakfast. Everybody's sneaky eyes were mostly on Maan wanting to know if he had calmed down from last night's talk. Maan was kind of eating in a hurry so it definitely caught everyone's attention. Dev and Vicky had a mischievous smile on their faces.
" bro what's the hurry you can't control not seeing bhaabi five minutes late?" Dev whispers only for Maan being able to hear.
Vicky does the same and says, "What's the rush? She won't kick you out of the house after all you are Maan Singh Khurana" fighting back a grin.
Maan almost chokes up on his food and just gives both of them an angry glare.
Daadi: What are you three whispering between each other? Dev and Vicky if you are trying to get help from him about girls you are asking the wrong guy he has girl phobia.
Maan chokes on his food again and starts to get angry. Both Dev and Vicky blow out laughing.
He gives them a deadly glare shutting both of them up.
Maan: Daadi please give it at rest.
Daadi: What did I say something wrong? If not than you will meet the girl we found for you in tonight's business meeting. It doesn't even matter you already agreed.
Maan didn't know what to do. He hasn't even talked to Geet yet. Doesn't even know her feelings. So he can't tell his parents just yet. If he said no to Daadi then he would never hear the end of it. He decides to just agree to meet this girl after all the condition was just to meet her.
Maan: theek hai. I will meet her, but then that's all you can expect from me. No marriage deal after that.
Daadi to herself: We will see.
" Okay now that is settled Maan tell us what happened to your car?" Yash says trying to divert the attention to something else before the breakfast table turned into a battlefield.
" uhhh someone broke my car's headlights and it is at the mechanics right now" he says so calmly as if there was nothing weird about what he just said.
Both Dev and Vicky chocked out their food.
Everybody gives them a weird look, forgetting to even ask why the heck did someone break his headlights.
Maan: Okay I have to go I am getting late.
Dev and Vicky just give a shocked look at each other. It still felt weird to them.
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It was as if her day couldn't get any worse. She had to go to this stupid business party tonight to meet the stupid person who wanted to marry her. Ugh as if she wasn't irritated enough now she was running late too. She was cursing her fate as she was leaving out the house.

She didn't even have a car and she forgot to charge her phone last night so now how was she going to call a friend to pick her up. . . their phone numbers were in her cell phone's phonebook. She was going through her handbag trying to see if there was any phone number, but when ever was luck on her side that it would be now?
She looks up deciding to walk until she found a taxi, but that's when her feet get glued in place. Her eyes travel up from his perfectly black polished shoes up his perfectly toned torso to his breathtakingly handsome face who was nonchalantly leaning against his motorcycle.
5 seconds . . .10 seconds. . . 20 seconds none of them uttered a word. . . their eye's locked in place. Geet looked captivatingly beautiful in her green salmar kamiz making Maan lose himself to her.
Maan finally breaks the ice, " Whenever you are done checking me out pagli I will drop you off at your college?"
An irritated Geet blurts out, " Checking you out my FOOT! Oh and what makes you think I will let you drop me off? I never want to see your face again!" she says walking away.
Maan quickly grabs her wrist. "Ithni gussa? I am sorry sweetheart next time I promise I won't be late!" he says with a sexy smirk.
Maan: By the way if I were you I wouldn't be rejecting such a nice offer after all I am not the one that is going to be late you are?
She stopped trying to fight with the grip he had on her hand as his words sink into her. Oh gosh Why was she always helpless in front of him! she thought.
Maan let's go of her and sits on the bike.
Maan: Pagli let's go.
She mentally swore inside her head to get revenge from him one day. She hated how he took advantage of her helplessness. She goes and quietly sits behind him putting her arms around his chest. Geet knew what a crazy driver he was and therefore did not want to risk falling and dying again. Maan closes his eyes as she snuggled closer arousing his body with desire. Maan snaps out of it and mentally yells at himself to control.
Maan: Which college?
Geet: XYZ college.
Maan: What a coincidence that was where I went.
Maan to himself: so she is also studying in the business field. Yup we are meant to be.
And then presses on the gear speeding away and Geet clinging on to him as much as she could bringing a naughty smile onto his face.
They finally arrive at the college obviously late.
"I am so screwed," she says as she gets off the motorcycle as fast as she could without saying a goodbye or even a thank you. She just ran before she got a month detention. Maan just looked on.
She arrives at the door of the class. Trying to calm herself down before she went inside. She tries looking through the glass part of the door to see if the teacher would notice if she just sneaked in.
But before she knew it Maan entwines his fingers with hers, opens the door, and pulls her inside.

Pre-cap:

Drop dead silence surrounded the huge classroom. The chalk slips from beneath the professor's fingers and he had to straighten his glasses to make sure what he saw was reality. One of the guy's in the classroom who Geet dated fell of his chair seeing what was in front of his eyes.

(There are two main reasons why everyone is so shocked...not just one can u guess what they are?😆)


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Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Zee...

M first again...yay...!!!

Awesome part...

Vicky n Dev busy pulling Maan's leg 😆

Pagli...!!! 😆
Maan is becoming naughty day by day... 😉
Good going Maanu jaanu...

Oh ohh...Geet's dad wants to fix her marriage...but with whom...? 😕


N this is not fair...you cant give precaps like this...
Now what does this mean...??
Why are the shocked...???
Me confused... 😕


Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.
Edited by Vidushi89 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff
loved it
add me to ur pm list plzz
loved the update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 123pritha

awesome ff

loved it
add me to ur pm list plzz
loved the update
continue soon


sure dear!
i will gladly add u to my pm list.
happy to hear u loved the update 😳
plz hit the like button and always comment thats all i ask😳 😳
THx!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update sooory couldnt think of some poem as i m reading it for the very first time i'll definetly try next time reallly thanx for the pm and u ramazing...tc😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part n two reason for precap umm my guess would b 1.geet in shalwar suit 2.maan a person wid girl phobia😉 holdng a girl hand dat to a girl lyk geet u knw spoilt brat type
P.S plxxx do tell me if n e of these r ryt or not
pp.s update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...reasons hmmm
fist will be Maan
and second is Geet in Shalwar Kameez
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 7
nice part...
so is the alliance between Maan and Geet?
cont soon...
the class is shocked to see Geet in Salwar?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...

Enjoyed...

Do continue soon...

Thanks 4r pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updated my comment on pg 61...

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