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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update
Fabulous

You are an amazing writer... How you blend the past n the historical characters with Maaneet.. amazing.

Geet dreaming abt Maan. Maan was there but Geet thot its her dream.

Maaneet scenes were beautiful.

Dev real colors are cuming out.

Swayam n swarna scenes were also gud.

Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
Will be waiting.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Srry for late reply dear..was stuck with exams..:)
wel update was fabb...luvd it
cntnue soonn
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..Awesome!!!
Loved the update.
It was amazing as usual..😍
Maaneet's moments were so lovely.
Devdutt and his lust..it's increasing day by day .
He got angry by just seeing Maan with Geet in Thammi's room! How will he react if he gets to know that Maan and Geet are now married to each other!!
I loved the scene between Maan-Geet and Thammi..It was beautiful.😊
Swayam-Swarna's part was absolutely amazing!!
Haaye the return of the dialogue.."I will sacrifice you for your sake"..I remember this one..It's so good..It suited Swarna as well.
About Yudhisthir..I don't know much about him but now I days I really stopped speaking about such things after a 2-hour long heated debate with my uncle..which left a bitter taste!! 🤔
Shantanu and Swayam are brothers?
So will the king reveal this truth to Swayam in the nxt part..!!
Eagerly waiting for the next update...
Update soon..pleeej!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part . Loved it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice VM 😊

The tune is so very sweet 😊

Words are perfectly chosen 👍🏼

Loved it 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
liked the story of swayam n swarna...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
HUMAN NATURE IS SO UNPREDICTABLE
WHOM ONE MAY WORSHIP COULD BE HARBORING EVIL THOUGHTS WHILE WHOM ONE FEELS IS TO BE HATED MAY ACTUALLY TEACH YOU LIFE'S IMPORTANT LESSON
DEVDUTT IS BURNING IN HIS LUST WHILE SWARNA IS WILLING TO SACRIFICE HER LOVE FOR THE PRINCE

BUT MAAN GAVE SOUND ADVICE TO THE KING
WILL HE TAKE IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Sayanee,
I came across this ff by chance and started reading it because I found the concept extremely interesting... and I must say thank god I did! 😊 This FF is one of the most beautiful FFs I have read on Maaneet on IF... :) So a biggg huggg for you for doing all the hard work and writing a story so magical that by the end of part 14, I was wishing to be Geetasri myself and belong to Maanendra... ☺️
They way you express Geetasri and Maanendra is mindblowing! 👏 It's a priviledge reading a story which depicts love and passion of an era one can only wish to belong to... (leaving aside the darkness...only keeping in mind - true love) This is the first time I have posted a comment for a FF... I have read so many of them but never given any feeback till date.. however, for Mrityunjai - I just couldn't hold back! Please do not stop writing this FF... trust me if I was you and got as much as 45 likes for an update - I would continue with my heart and soul because the 45 people who would have pressed like... would be worth the effort! 😊
Please do not leave this story incomplete... haha I am almost begging! 😉 Waiting for the next updates.. 😊
Lots of love..
P.S - I'll surprise you with this comment! Throughout the ff so far, I couldn't call Geetasri as Geet and Maanendra as Maan... 😲 I always referred to them as Geetasri and Maanendra... that's how well you have carved your characters... Geet and Maan sounded almost alien to me!
I love Maan and Geet so much...more than I can comprehend yet in this FF, I prefered Geetasri and Maanendra... 😊
Uff... Maanendra... 😳 ☺️
Also, when you update this, provide the link on the daily updates thread... I am sure a lot of people who read maaneet ffs on a daily basis would love to read your work.. ❤️
Edited by EternalMaaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
when ami getting d nxt updt say??? nearly dying while waiting.. dnt kill me lk dis...
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous works...i read all 14 parts together...

i read many historical story as well as devdasis story in bangla n always love to read them...n after reading ur fabulous works i m just overwhelmed...want to say so mch things from the beginning abt each n every part bt nw nothing cant able to say...

people give so mch respect to priest even after god bt what r they actually...during holi loved the 108 diya lighting...

geetasry ...geet is 22 years old bt she is so mch innocent n naive specially for those days...in that time usually girls were married in teen age even i read so stories girls were married at 7 years old n after marriage they were compelled to consummate also...

the sculptor...when his entry was done i m just thinking he was absolutely nt only a sculptor ... his behaviour his attitude his thinking his talking only shows some royal aura...he deserves only as a prince...

devdutt loves geetasry bt he cant go against the society...is his lv so powerful...although maaneet marriage was so romantic so beautiful bt y they married in gandharv way...maan is a powerful man...at first he would try to make her own in front of th society...nw hw he will claim her as her wife...

maan is really a knowleageable person n geet is only her kanas radha...her day start wth maan n night end wth maan...bt geet lives a royal style...that temple is just like a palace...devdutt king n geet is like a princess...i mean except morning puja there is nothing to do for geet...

maan is worried nw what would happen wth geet that maan is so restless...

i want to say so mch things...nywy waiting for next update...i know each update takes so mch time bt plz update sn...

r u an art student...i read ur 3 works...mrityunjai...kurban hua...Aphrodite...the common things there r art n culture...wth histrory...if u r then u r a true student...all r fabulous works...bt ys for loving art culture n history it nt needed that u have to b a art student...

i have a request plz dont make this saga a tragedy...i know saga means tragedy i cant able to bear see maaneets worst ending...


Edited by paponecon - 13 years ago

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