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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#331

its really excllent update in every manner...

thier maan understand her through raj laxmi...

n raj laxmi decide meet his soulmate ... wow

devdutt is nice for geet be his remors 4 raj laxmi...

i wish devdutt is savor of geet n manendra from

madanmohan tample preirs or say volchres...

very impressive n thoughtfully written ...

yr gist of writing is mindblowing...

i just imagine a film on this story ... wow...

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@-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

M I N D-B L O W I N G!!!!!!

You always leave me speechless!

Loved the song sequence.

It was beautifully written.

Rajlakshmi trying to commit suicide , almost drowning herself , but her heart decided to wait for him . Her hope of meeting him kept her alive.

That ray of hope proved to be more stronger than anything else for her.

Her decision made her witness the first ray of the day.

Amazing symbolism.

So Maan drowned the sculpture in the river , along with the statue he also left his mad desires.

" If life is a river, mind is like a boat and there is two bargemen who can guide it one is Love another is God' but sometime for some people they became one .. life become so easy for them, their whole world whole life complete in only one circle. Geet was one of them. "

I read this lines thrice ,they are just beautiful .They express the meaning of love as God in simple yet amazing form.

I was simply lost in Maan's words, asking her to complete him. It was divine ,so pure. You selection of words is way too amazing to even describe.

Devdutt is completely drowned in his guilt , at the particular moment when he took the decision which was going to ruin some-one's life did it seem right for him at that moment?? .

He compromised his morality , morals for his desire.

At that moment his thoughts were clashing his morality

He went completely blind , he did something that he felt would satisfy him , that would save her , but now he is realizing his sin .It is killing him every moment.

No doubt that his mistake can never be justified , once a sinner always a sinner , but the dilemma that he is facing now is quite complicated.

The thing that is to be noticed is that he is not trying to justify his act ,he accepts it and he realizes that his acceptance can never change anything!

I'm eager to see the consequence of this realization ...will this take a form of something??

Eagerly waiting for the next part.😃

I loved this update and the song too..after rasiya ,I'm now gonna download this!! 😛

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

part 12
nice part...
whoa so Dev has feelings for Geet...
well cant blame him for falling in love with her...
but by sending Rajji instead of Geet and ruining that innocent's life is a sin and hes guilty for that...
and Rajji, Shantanu's love will keep her pure and happy...
OMG Maan finally realized his feelings and also has proposed Geet...
fantastic...
cont soon dear...

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

awesome part

finally rajlakshmi found a direection in the darkness she was surrounded

n maan proposed geet to be his soulmate forever awesome

waiting for the next part

n devdutt though he was a great n noble man but his love has made him a sacrifice an innocent girl's life but i think it was meant to happen bcoz rajlaskhmi met shantanu only bcoz of it

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

will Maaneet get married in next update...that is why next update is titled Saptapadi (seven rounds around fire that bride-groom take during marriage...those rounds are called seven steps to become one )

very beautiful update...

Devdutt was bounded by his attraction towards Geetasri that he made Rajyalaxmi go to satisfy priests...

Maan confessed his love to Geet...

eagerly waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

will Maaneet get married in next update...that is why next update is titled Saptapadi (seven rounds around fire that bride-groom take during marriage...those rounds are called seven steps to become one )

very beautiful update...

Devdutt was bounded by his attraction towards Geetasri that he made Rajyalaxmi go to satisfy priests...

Maan confessed his love to Geet...

eagerly waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...

yes u r r8... SHAPTAPADI does mean saat phere .. baki to u can understand 😉... thaks for ur comment