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Part 16

Maan was in his room.He was thinking about the differences between Geet and city girls.City girls of her age will be busy in shopping ,having fun with their friends or dating with their boy friends.But this girl playing with ball with his brother..how funny'He changed to jeans and wearing his shirt. He heard the screech sound of a car tyre and Geet screaming outside.He didn't think much..He came running outside the house .He saw Geet on the floor near the entrance of the farm before their car.Vicky was helping her getup.He came near geet and started shouting.

Tum kabi dekhkar nehi chalti hai kya' Do You always keep your eyes behind and walk..Agar tumhe kuch hojatha tho..

Aap firse muje dadrahi ho'mei jaan boochkar thodi na gadiki saamne aayi.I tried to catch the ball..And I slipped...she made a baby face.

That expression made him cool.

Ok.sorry.I'll not taunt you.Did you get hurt.

No.I am alright..

He failed to see some one standing beside him 'staring Maans concern .

He turned to the driver in anger ..Dont you see infront and drive..😡It was Dadis car driver and her securities at the entrance

Then only he saw Dadi standing there in surprise😲 of maans behaviour towards a girl..Dadi was also thinking that what she is seeing is real or dream'😉

Daadima ..Aap'yahaan..achanak..aapki tabiyat tho teek hai na'business mei koi problem hai kya'agar koi zaroori kamm ho tho muje phone karthiya hotha 'mei delhi aajathi'

Dadi wondered .the man who will speak only one or two words is speaking nonstop'kuch tho hua hai'let me find it'she smiled inside.

Maan beta'is all ur questions finished'or will you give me a chance to speak also..

Ji dadi'he took her blessings.and hugged her...

I am perfectly fine'..as Dr. said me to take rest.I thought of staying here for a week or more...I have made arrangements that Adi will take care of Kc in our abscence..

That's nice idea dadima'

Namaste daadi'Geet and Vicky greeted dadi..and bend to take her blessings..

Kush raho..Peir chooneki kya zaroorath hai Gudia'

Maa kehthihai badoki pau chookar aashirwad lena chahiye..

Ok ok mei jaanthi hoon you will never go against elders words..

aur beta tum dono kesi ho'

achihoon dadi..

Ok lets go inside and talk..

Daadi pehle aap DDse permission lelijiye ..andher jaaneka..warna wo aapko bi daadega'

What..Ye DD kaun hei..

DD .Dusht danav...the man infront of you'This is his house..She whispered near daadi's ears'

Daadi smiled'She could analyse what would have happened between these two..

This is my house also beta..And by the way His name is Maan..my grandson'

Now Maan knows that dadi knows them both..

Daadi saw Maan drooling Geet'Is he really watching her..aur is it my illusion..

Oh'Dadi aap itni sweet ho'aur ye hamesha itna gussa mein kyun hain'

He gave an angry look at geet and went inside..

He is like that beta..and What are you both doing here..?

Munshiji told us to play here till he returns..

Ok tum dono khelo'mei fresh hokar aathi hoon..

Ji dadima..Both said.

Maans securities greeted her..She told her securities to fresh up.. and to join maans securities..

Daadi went inside..Nakul greeted her..Namaste dadima..aap ki tabiyat kesi hain..Kala aapki saath nehi aayi..

Iam fine nakul..lakthahai tum apni patniko bohut miss kar rahiho..

Yese nehi hai dadima..I told her to look after your health and you came traveling alone..

I only told her to stay there'you and Maan are here to look after me..Ok tell me whats happening here..I didn't see any people in HP today'How did Maan allow geet to play inside..

Acha hua aap yahaan aagayi'I want to say many things that are happening here..wo bhi Maan babu ke barein mein..(thank you bapaji...Atleast you sent dadi before i get mad)😆

Nakul narrated what happened yesterday and why Geet is here and how maan said he will take care of her'

Dadi felt sad for chunni and surprised hearing about maan..😲

Ok Nakul'make lunch for everyone 'now there are more securities and we don't have to get worried'I'll go and fresh up'Get me a coffee then'

Out side the farm house was two head securities Bahadur and Ragav'Other securities were inside the farm .. .Dadi's securities were interested knowing about geet 'And maans securities were busy narrating about her' Geet and her brother were busy playing with their throw ball'Vicky throwed the ball with full pressure and this time it went outside the farm'Geet went out insearchof ball..Vicky was watching her from the farm.She saw the ball on the opposite side of the farm'She walked towards it.When she bend to take the ball ,Someone closed her mouth from behind .His face was fully covered with a black clothexcept his eyes.She struggled to get rid from him..she was not able to shout ..but a small cry..mmhhhmm... escaped from her,which made the securities notice them'They started to run towards them'The man pushed her inside the nearby well ..Vicky noticed it and shouted didi'Whereas Bahadur and Raghav followed to catch him'They made an alert whistle to other securities

Somone save geet' others follow me.Four of you stay here...He cammanded while running behind the man.But the first sentence was not heared by anyone'they all ran behind Bahadur.Bahadur took his gun and started shouting Don't run or I'll shoot you..But the man never stopped..Bahadur started to shoot aiming the man's leg.There was a sudden tension in the surrounding'

Maan came running outside hearing the sound of the gun shot'

What happened'?

Don't know sir?Bahadur and Ragav are running behind someone'They made the alert sound'

where is Geet and her bhai'?

Yehi tho thi sir'pata nehi kahan cheligayi'

The he heared Vicky crying outside Didi..didi..some one help my didi..

He ran there .

Geet kahaan hai'

Vicky pointed inside the well and cried..

Didi'didi..He is crying...usey bachao..

Maan looked inside the well'He saw Geets duppata floating n Geet drowning inside the water.

Precap: chi chi bapaji😳

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Part 17

Maan looked inside the well'He saw Geets duppata floating n Geet drowning inside the water

Please mera didi ko bachao'vicky was crying..

Maan doesn't even hesitate for a minute.He immedietly jumped into the well'But now he could not see her ..The well was deep indeed.He went inside the water and searched her..after some time he found her at the corner base of the well.He grabbed Geet by her waist and came up..But there was no way to come out of the well.He saw the securities throwing the rope.but it was too small compared to the depth of the well.

Sir.we'll get another one..one of them said..

Now he saw geet.She was unconscious.Her body was chilled.Her every part was visible as her dress was fully soaked.. He looked for the duppatta.But that was far away from his hands.Seeing her cleavages Maan got little uncomfortable.He dont want his men to see her like this.He removed his shirt and weared her.He patted her cheeks,

geet hosh mei auo ..geet.

Then he heared the voice..sir pick up the rope.(This time a lengthy one.)

He picked the rope and tied around him..He placed geet over his shoulder as a sack..The securities helped them coming out..He took her inside the farm and placed on the floor..Vicky was still crying near her .Didi..uto na..didi aakhein kholona..

Geet..Geet..He patted her cheeks..there was no response..

He pressed her stomach to puke out the water..Only a little came..Then nothing.He rubbed her palm..and told Vicky to rub her feet...

Sir.Its cold outside..This air will make her more cold..take her inside..She needs warmth..One of the security said.

Yes you are right..

He took her to his bed room and placed her..Nakul came running after him..

Nakul get me a towel.

He covered her with the spread.. .

you keep on rubbing her feet..

He rubbed her palm.to create more heat.Still there was no response..Nakul brought the towel.He whipped her face.and dried her hair.

Nakul close all the windows and make something to heat this room..Get me some more blankets.. He was ordering..

He touched her foreheadto see if she has some temperature.But now he could feel she was cold than before.He turned to her Vicky and said

Take my car and get a dr. soon.

O.k'He ran through the steps.

Nakul covered her with more spreads.He was still rubbing her palms and feet.Nakul..Dadimako bulao'jaldi..

He shook her..Geet..hosh mein auo..Geet..she fell on him like a dead body..He got scared..seeing her like this half dead made his mind stop thinking.He hugged her tight to give his warmth..His hand went under her tops rubbing her bare back to create some heat.still she was cold.He checked her pulse..it was low.He kept his index finger near her nose to feel her breathe..nothing he felt'He was mad feeling helpless.losing her..His heart was bleeding .He will do anything to save her..He brushed his hair backwards seeing geet.The next minute he thought of something..He neared her face.Took a long breathe inside..he opened her mouth and filled her with his..He repeated the process to make her alive and get her conscious.He stopped at one stage.His eyes was filled with tears.😭He broke down as he felt he failed to get her back.Unknowingly,he kissed her all over the face and gave a mouth full of kiss.🤬 .(Their first kiss..chi chi bapaji..I didn't see.I kept my eyes closed).

He realized his feelings towards her..that he is in love with her.He needs her in his life.He hugged her tightly and said,

Geet,I lost everything in my life'but I'll not lose you..i'll not let anything happen to you..I saw a light in my life after seeing you...you must come back for me.I love you Geet.

He once again neared her and gave his breathe and closed her mouth with hands.He heared a sound at the doorsteps.He saw Dadima facing her back towards him.She was embarrassed and shocked seeing maan close to a girl😳.Maan was not in a position to think. He didn't feel guilt for what he did.He only wants his Geet back. .

Dadi..come soon..see her..

The tension in his voice stopped her.She came near the bed.

Kya hua.

She was drowning in the well.I saved her.But she is not getting her conscious .Her body is getting cold..

He said in one go.His voice was trembling in fear.Then he heared Geet coughing.He could feel her breathe in his hand.He turned to her.

Geet..geet..Are you alright.He patted her cheeks.

Vicky came with Dr.Lakshmi.She checked her and gave her an injection.

Dr.aunty..didi kesi hai...what will I say to mama n papa..They asked me to make her happy and what i have did.He still had tears .

Dr.how is she?when will she get her conscious..Why is she still cold?

Dr,patted vickys back.Kuch nehi hua.tum ro math

She is Out of danger Mr.maan.thodi dher mein hosh aajayegi.You have done the first aid..i don't have much to do. She still remains cold bcoz of it .I think we must change her wet clothes..Warna usey recover karneka time lagega.

I think you must also change..you are also wet.

He sighed in relief.He went to his wardrobe and took 1 one of his kurta.then he thought it is not thick to warm her.he put it back and took a jeans pant and a shirt .He took one set for himself. He gave it to daadima.

We have no option..change her to this clothes.I will get changed in another room.saying this he left .

Daadi and Dr. changed her clothes..Maan came back to the room.he saw alittle moments in geet.Her hair was still dripping water.He took the hair drier and gave it to Daadi.Daadi dried her hair. Now only Maan saw her in his dress.She looked like a city girl in jean n shirt with free hair.she looked beautiful in this costume too.Maan, what are you thinking .you are admiring her beauty in this situation too..He smiled inside.

He saw her brother still crying.Dont cry.She is ok now.

ye sab meri wajase hua.na mein ball farm se bahaar phekthi aur wo insaan didi ko maarne ki koshish kartha..Agar aapna hothi kya ho jaatha.He was sobbing.

Maans anger had no boundary now knowing that someone tried to kill geet.He went to the balcony.

He shouted All securities in position now.

Even the Dr. got scared at his shout.Dadi was used to it.so,she remained silent.

He came down .All were standing in a straight line in fear.They all know Maan always wants everyone to be sincere in their duty.

Is this the way you are doing your duty.I told you to look after the girl and the boy till munshiji comes.you can't do this too..Infront of you someone tried to kill her and what are you all doing. Shame on you.

What do you all expect me to do for what you all did...I'm thinking of Firing you all immedietly. That will be the best choice.

He turned to Bahadur and Raghav,who had bleeding intheir hands and legs..Did you got the man.?Do you know who he is?

Bahadur was more than 5yrs with Maan as his security.He knows a little to cool his anger also.And only Bahadur had the boldness to speak before maan.

No. sir.He ran away.he had a vehicle on the other side.So we are unable to catch.,but I ve shot him.he must got injured. Some how he needs a dr.s help .so,We can get him soon'

And as I am the head of the securities here,I take the responsibility sir.The others deserve punishment,but not to get fired.All have families.Please apologise them.I failed in protecting her.I am the one at entrance.If you want to fire someone,then it must be me only.

Maan had a soft corner towards Bahadur.He has saved him many times from his enemies.(specially once when Maan was kidnapped by their business enemies 4 yrs back)

Hmmm.The girl is safe.,so iam forgiving you all.But you all deserve the punishment.You too bahadur.All will go around the farm 50 times and make sure this type of mistakes never repeats again.All are standing in a stiff position.They all said in chorus..Yes sir.

Precap:Geets family was once again threatened by Dayalnath..What will Maan do?

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