~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 8

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PoojaMishty

@PoojaMishty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#721

Geet.. such a cutie pie... Loved her very much..😊😳👏

Little Geinie... How cute... 😳😳

So finally she realised that they both loved each other...😉

Loved the Geet's reaction... cutest reaction ever even if Geinie is not with her...

How i wish Geinie to be with her to solve all her confusion...

Loved the NT--geet bonding..

Pls Continue soon..

waiting for Maan talking with his dodo after knowing the entire truth...

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#722

Ohh!!what abeautiful update muskaan!!u jst described each and every aspect of geet's realization of their luv and acceptance of their baby soo vividly!as a reader i don't have any kind of complaint regarding understanding geet's pov bout the matter!in my opinion ths aspect of ur writing makes u a succesful writer!really,amazing part,hats off tou!!
luved it to core!i'm now eagerly waiting for maaneet's confrontation after ths revealation when they both are quite aware bout their feelings towards each other!tc:*

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Posted: 14 years ago

#723

Loved the update.It was a great idea to add Maan's thoughts while NT was narrating. I liked that we could see his reactions while the story was being told. LOVED dodo. There is so much of a dodo in us bholi-bhali types that at some level most women feel that there is a dodo in them. Can't wait for Maan Amy milan. Love these 2. Muskan please don't end it too soon. Love your characters and stories muskan...

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DASTAK..

@DASTAK..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#724

oh...
dodo is so so cute...
luvd it
cont soon...

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#725

FOR DODO!

She was the one

The only one

One of a kind!

She was as innocent as a new born baby

As naive as the first dew drop on the grass

As plain as the clear blue sky

As understanding a human can ever imagine

As truthful as the words of God

As believing as your faith can be

She was the one

The only one

His dodo!

She was unaware of what happened to her

She was unaware of what the future will bring for her

She was unaware that she was carrying a child

She was unaware that she was an unwed mother

She only knew one thing

That he was her Genie and he was her world

He could never do anything wrong

Her blind faith in him always reached its infinity

She loved him, loved him to the core

Her love for him had no boundaries

She only knew one thing

That she was his and he was hers

The sun blessed her with his shine

And the night cocooned her with his love.

She was his and only his

She loved him, more than he loved her.

She was the one

The only one

His dodo!

---Rachana---

(I had tears in my eyes...while typing)

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#726

Awesome update...

Awww am really in luv with geet's innocence..

luved the way NT handled her...

continue soon

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#727

hey musu di
that was superb u know i feel good abt nt in ur story
she has done so much to geet and helped her to be matured a lit bit
i know she is still dodo
but i like her innocence and naive which u show to her character
it just giving a good impression on story di
cant explain ur work hard with the words
loved it

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#728

wow muskaan di... lovely awesome woderful update...
i dont have words to say...
love u di 4 such an awesome update...
loved geet s innocence... hw cute she is...
she realised that she loves her genie... in between maan s expressions r awesome...
wow di... a big hug 4 u 4 such a wonderful part...
continue soon...:)

jyothi