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Priyasi

@Priyasi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

Di aap sabse late Maitri update karte ho, this is not done. Please update it soon. Waiting eagerly to read further. Want to know how dodo will confront her genie. So pleeease update soon.

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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#392

realy sory 4 late cmmt. Nowdays m too held up wid my school n couching so m not able to comment. Hope u wont mind 4 not commenting for so long time. Now coming to update its awesome. Hope that geet reveals about amy's truth in next update so update soon nd lately HAPPY FRENSHIP DAY. Love u

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Sia89

@Sia89

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#393

Awww poor Geet, yup its really time to talk .. they have to clear things ..

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Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#394

Hi di... Im reading maitri afta so many days... Never got a chance to visit india forums... Missed maitri a lot...

Superb update... Loved it as usual...

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Deepti

@sanul

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#395

bechara maan...

love it awesome...

plz cont soon...

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#396

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#397

part 66

she twisted her lips & placed the juice on the table with a thud.. u didn't do anything
she said it angrily & left
Maan shied in relief.. & patted himself.. & drank the juice
then suddenly thought ... phir dodo gussen main kyun thi

he drank the juice. He went into the shower.. as the cold stream touched through his bare skin.. sending shivers & sharp sensation.. every nerve ends.. he pushed his hair behind..

his thought again slipped into the moment of caressing her arms..feeling her skin. He dropped his head backward letting the water splash on his face.. he remembered dipping his head in close to her neck.. slipping her gown.. touch of her skin. .. her breath.. oh god!! he closed his eyes..
yeh dodo mujhe pagal kardegi
he lathered himself with soap & softly formed his toned self.. he could feel her fingers caressing him..arousing him. He smiled at his own plight & sunk in the shower. He exhaled sharply as he came out of the shower.

He looked at himself in the mirror. Did I hurt dodo.. he looked intently at his own reflection, he splashed the after shave..refreshing his thoughts. He knew he couldn't lose control..no ..no .. he could never ...probably went little too close. He wiped himself & changed into his t-shirt & pair of jeans.

He felt meeting amy, he went to his room. He sighed & checked the time.. he went to school...is halat main..
he went looking for Geet..
dodo..
dodo..
amy school kaisen??? his voice died when he saw Geet crying ..sobbing infront of nt.
Nt ' just talk to ..
she kept quiet when she saw Maan standing there.
Nt just left them alone in the kitchen.
Geet immediately wiped her tears & smiled weakly ..

coffee she asked
he narrowed his eyes & looked at her.
She looked away & went to make coffee..he kept watching her
she placed a his coffee & sat infront of him... he sipped the coffee & slowly rested his hand on hers..
I don't need to see ur tears to understand that ur disturbed
she wiped her tears & looked at him with teary eyes
genie..
she sobbed painfully
haan dodo
genie..a tear fell from her eyes
he squeezed her hand..
she looked into his eyes..can we make a baby again
he looked at her blankly...100 ' million questions should be actually running in his mind. But no.. he was not lost... but he looked completely blank.. plain blank... nothing she said was confusing.. he could always understand her..then why he didn't this time. why he never failed to read those eyes who always looked beyonfd him..beyond his leing eyes..deep into his heart..how could he not!!!
She looked down
I know it is wired to ask like this all of a sudden
kavitha ko problem hain..hogi bhi.. kisi bhi biwi ko hogi
lekin it is just a test tube baby..we don't have to... she couldn't complete that
u need not tell her aur hum kisi ko kuch nahi kahenge.. she was so baffled.. which was evitend the way she looked here & there & knotted her duppata..she just wanted to tell him ..complete the unmatched pairs ..missing piceses.. she said it all in one breath
he was silent.. his gaze was still transfixed
when he didn't say anything..her heart sank.. tears threatened to pour
she looked at him again.. scared..to read denial in his eyes..
genie can we make baby again..for amy plz
he just nodded still looking blankly at her
a relief touched her face..delight.. it was like a spring of happiness..that was missing for so many days
thanks genie..he still stared blankly at her
his blankness was scaring her. He didn't say anything anything at all abt amy being their baby..he didn't question her ..he didn't ask anything. she was not angry..not happy either!! probably sacred..worried ..she wanted to reassure him..
hum kiss si ..then she rephrased it..main kisi se.. he shook his head..

no ..

I am not married..he snapped his hand away
I am not... he got up from his chair & inched away..
I am not... his voice faded as he ran to the lawn

Geet sat their shocked ..dumb stuck as she saw him moving away from him.
Maan screamed out loud when he reached the open space...
he punched the glass table in the garden & broke it again. There was so much of pain & hateredness with in.. he sunk on the moist ground & cried out loud.
Suddenly he could see his dodo..like he always thought abt her.. cute..two plats..patiala..starting alone on the moor in the mist he was invariably drawn to her, to sooth her pain. He froze as he could see the mist through her & he could hear her calling out to him.. always in those 8 yrs..the call that never reached him, the cry that was so fearful... Maan stood their transfixed by her innocence & listening to her pain her grief finally reaching his ears. His dodo slowly began to fade from his sight as the mist faded away, so did she fade with it.. his heart cried.. shattered.. he was the mist who faded his dodo.. her innocence.. & filled it with pain & grief.

Precap
Nt shouting at Maan

-PREV PART 65 NEXT PART 67-

thanxs a lot for all the comments
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muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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