~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 8 - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear Muskan...
i hv literally turned into a very big fan of urs...
i m reading ur 2 FFs...those r Dreams n Maitri...
both r just out of this world...
commenting on Mairtri ka thread so let me tlk of tht first...
gal u r just awesome...
i read the whole FF uptil the last updated part in just some hours...
bhuk pyaas,sab bhul gayi...
once i started reading i just cudnt break the flow...
n tlking abt the next part thn i dont want Maan to do the same mistake again or if he does thn he shud remember wht he did, or the best one is Geet shud tell hm the truth abt him n amy...
awesome story line dear...update next part soon...
desperately waiting for it...thnkx for PM of other parts...
loads n loads of love,hugs n kisses...keep writing...😃 ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

where are my likes

me really upset..this is why I told the readers I shall continue one FF at a time...only 200 odd likes..main nahi bolti

i expected likes for each part
love u all for the love & support
muskan
BTW DON'T DOUBLE CLICK LIKE BUTTON IT WILL BECOME UNLIKE
& those who read .. & couldn't like because the phone..thingy.. I totally understand
hey babaji,mujhe 100 hands dedo...taki main 100 id,s bana kar atleat 100 likes press kar sakoon,n my sweet black mailer can give me an update fast fast😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
kya aaj friendship day pe update karo ge muskaan ya phir off for the weekend.😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

65


Her hands ran down his toned chest pressing flat against the muscle. She took his lips they met harsher. It was a chase and capture. Her lips closed over his upper one deeply. his tongue urged the edge of her bottom lip. Her tongue rubbed against his as ransom for her lips. He closed his eyes..dodo..plz.. dodo..
he cried & fell on his knees pleading..
yeh tum kya kar rahi ho
she fell on her knees crying aur main kya karon genie..mera bacha..humara amy..
she cried..cried like a baby.
He hugged her.. holding back his emotions..not understanding a thing wat was happening. He got up & carried her to the bed. He slipped next to her & cuddled up close to her in his arms protectively. She cried ..cried.. cried the whole night wondering how will she save her baby..she had been matured in handling amy all the while alone but now..knowing having a sibling is the only solution..she didn't know wat to do.

How to ask him to give her another little amy.. wat right she had on him. Will he even accept amy.. how will she justify her silence..her not telling him abt amy all this while..maan tucked himself closer to her.. reminding her of their night together, how he didn't let go of her. She looked at him & dossed off..


Next morning. Rahul at the breakfast table ' wat was it with Geet last night, bar bar she was coming to u. is every thing fine
nt giggled & told him the whole incedent & geets plan..
ussen ki room hain she added smiling naughtily.
Rahul got wild..he threw the napkin on the table '
r u out of ur mind NT?
Nt was taken a back with sudden rudeness
he got up & paced restlessly
nt opened her mouth to say something rahul yelled '
how could u support any of her silly idea like this? don't u have any brains. Tum khud bhi tho dr ho. For god sake NT ur a gynecologist. Even if they sleep together wat is the guarantee they will make babies. So if she fails.. she will get him drunk again & seduce..him.. & then again..
nt '
shut up rahul I was juts trying to help
rahul ' wat help .. u r only complicating things here
nt '
tumne na meri baat khabhi samjhi hain..na kabhi samjogen
rahul closed his eyes knowing she was getting personal now
nt ' I was just wanted them to get close. I thought like this they will manage to open their heart to each other.
Rahul hugged her ' lekin jaan if something happens it will only complicate things
nt ' kya matlab? Tumne hi kaha tha ki amy needs a sibling
Rahul '
haan lekin aisen nahi
nt ' kya matlab?
Rahul ' with Maan being thalassaemia minor there is a good possibility their next baby may also suffer from the same
nt got really scared '
aab kya hoga ..agar kal raat kuch
Geet came out..wrapping her night gown..
kal raat kuch nahi huwa. I told u he is married.
Both rahul & Nt sighed relief
Geet took Nt 's coffee & sunk in the chair
Nt '
then how can they have baby now
rahul '
they need to have a test tube baby & we have to take the healthy egg & sperm. Fertilize it externally making sure the fetus is healthy free from any disease & then place it in her womb.
Nt ' so Geet have to talk to Maan
rahul nodded..
Geet held her head & sat in the chair
rahul warned '
don't even try this stunt again
Geet hid her face.
Rahul teased ' he really didn't do anything
DI...geet screamed
Nt giggled '
sach main dodo..u couldn't seduce him in that night dress
Geet ran away from there
rahul hugged Nt sideways..whispered in her ears
..kaun sa nightdress..
she waked his hand..its not for u, not anymore
rahul ' umm..

Maan got up late..with a heavy head. He turned immediately & looked around.. he somehow remembered sleeping with his dodo. He held his head ..& closed his eyes tight. He remembered Geet asking him drink..he hugging her.. finishing the bottle.. then.. then..main yanha kaisen..did...

oh..god..

how did I come here..

wat did do.. did I do something to dodo

na.. I can't
or did I
Geet walked in with lemon juice
he gulped his saliva..before she could say anything..he closed his eyes..
sorry dodo.. kal jada pee leen..thi..did I misbehave
she twisted her lips in anger
Maan holly crap..I missed behaved with her..
oh god..
dodo..yaar sorry I didn't mean to do anything.. plz plz..sorry dodo
she twisted her lips & placed the juice on the table with a thud..
u didn't do anything
she said it angrily & left
Maan shied in relief.. & patted himself.. & drank the juice
then suddenly thought ... phir dodo gussen main kyun thi

-maitri part 65-

Precap
Geet talking to Maan

-PREV PART 64 NEXT PART 66-

muskan.. sad.. but couldn't get angry on friendship daY

happy friendship day

so special gift from muskan..all the 4 FFs updated
looks like muskan loves u all more than u love her
love u all a lots
muskan


Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy friendship Day muskan! We love u! Thank u so much for the great updates
Edited by Ambibamby - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the update Muskaan.. Happy friendships day to you too🤗..

And muskaan . you know well people love your updates.. it just takes time for so many people to read and besides you send the pm' in bulk a bit late these days.. i think that might be the reason why it takes longer for more likes.. but seriously.. you should know yours are the most liked FFs ever😳.. so cheer up.😃

Loved rahul in this update.. thank god for him! Really looking forward to Geet talking to Maan but I hope she does not go for other tricks.. she should simply tell him the truth... well eager to know what she does.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Awesome part
dodo sachi dodo hi rahegi
she told maan hamara bacha amy
phir bhi maan samjta hi nahi
loved it
pls cont
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey di

Thank u so much for the superb update

love u di😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks 4 the update,awesome...poor geet its so complcated,hope maan remembers soon...

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