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Posted: 13 years ago
double update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am refreshing the page numerous times already, :) muskaan please please post a big part!!
Edited by cyberprincess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow muskaan come on soon.. double update... super excited!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, has a small doubt ,did maan get exactly what geet wanted from him and their relation with amy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part di
so dodo did tell him abt the baby thing!!!
continue super soon!!!
waiting for next!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow one more great thank u dear, waiting pls update aparichit too.
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow multiple update

waiting 😍
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow double update, thanks so much baji 🤗
Sorry I am not able to comment lately is Ramadan so mainly inactive...

Loved the update, finally Dodo has told her genie about Amy..
And loved how he didn't question her once

Can't wait for the next update 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago


PART 67

His dodo slowly began to fade from his sight as the mist faded away, so did she fade with it.. his heart cried.. shattered.. he was the mist who faded his dodo.. her innocence.. & filled it with pain & grief.
He wanted to himself dead that very that moment ..he picked up the broken glass pieces & scared his fist every where.
Nt came from behind & pushed those pieces away.
U can't die yet she spat in anger
she lifted him holding his collar
main tumhe humsha dhokebaaz samjhthi thi..aaj pata chala ki tum khud garaz bhi ho.. & u r a dam coward.
Ek bar nahi socha tumne amy ki baren main
..
he looked at her face in shock.. realization.. striked him.. he immediately threw the pieces that were stuck in his hand away..

he smiled.. amy..
he smiled with tears in his eyes..he held Nt's hand softly that was on his collar
amy teehk hojayega na..

then..he started laughing like a mad person.. moving backward.. his steps were wobbling..shakking..tears continued to fall.. & he laughed ..laughed.. soon his laugter broke down into loud cries.. amy!!!!
he screamed. ..as he fell back on the steps.. he dipped his head at the steps & cried.
Nt slowly came beside her & patted her shoulder..
he immediately hugged her my dodo was carrying our amy..
he smiled.. pulling out & looking into nt's eyes
he bit his lips.. with a nave smile.. the thought for seeing his cuty dodo bearing their baby
Nt was taken a back.. wat is so funny..
he sighed
Nt '
it is not funny Maan.. Not funny at all
Maan looked at her
nt '
it not funny to convince 21yr old, 5month pregnant women that she is actually pregnant
he smiled sadly shaking his head.. he knew his dodo was capable of that

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Nt was drawn back to the day when Geet came excitedly dressed in her new pink skirt & white sweat shirt to start her tennis coaching. Nt looked Geet little suspiciously with her small pouch & her frequently complaining of being very tired. She ate lot of pickles ..but any way she ate lot of them.

geet - di I am starting my tenis coaching class today
Nt - achanak?
geet turned her lips here & there - actually genie ko tenis bahut pasand hain

nt wondered why did she even ask..

nt looked at her top to bottom.. & her stomach was prity obvious..she is been wanting to ask,,,but then,,
Nt ' r u feeling giddy off late
Geet showing off her sneakers
.. nahi tho
nt '
when did u get last periods
Geet causally '
pata nahi
& continued to tie her shoe lace.. she couldn't even bend down .. properly.
Nt sighed & bend down to help her tie the lace. Nt gave her a pregnancy testing strip & asked her to do the test.
Geet '
yeh kya hain?
Nt ' u didn't get ur periods na.. usike lien kuch test hain
geet - nahi nahi ..iski zarorat nahi hain..main ne mama se pucha tha.. she said new place hain na.. new place..new surroundings tho adjust hone main time lagtha hain
Nt looked at her in shock - wat u didn't get ur periods since u came to US?
geet nodded
Nt - abhi jake test karke aa
Geet ' abhi nahi.. mujhe abhi kelne jana hain
nt shouted '
get the test done now.. uske baad decide karenge ki jana hain yah nahi
Geet '
lekin di
Nt '
now
Geet '
kya kar na hain
Nt rolled her eyes & explained the procedure.
Geet made a yucky face '
can't I do it like in HP.. collecting the susu in the bottle types
Nt almost laughed ' nahi javo
Geet came out with the strip.
Nt was shocked.. she slapped Geet ..
wat the hell have u gone & done.
Geet looked at her blankly.. main ne kya kiya..& cried...
rahul just walked in.. Geet immediately ran to rahul & hid behind him
rahul '
kya huwa Nt itna kyun gussa ho rahi ho.. bahar taak awaz aa raha hain
nt ...threw the strip in front of rahul..
yeh dehko
rahul looked little confused.. & then smiled naughtily..
he hugged Nt & kissed her .. Geet felt little conscious & looked away.
Rahul ' I know rany is only few months old.. we can manage..he smiled
yeh kab huwa.. night gown allen din..he teased her
nt was furious now & pushed him away.. yeh mera nahi.. is stupid dodo ka hain
rahul's eyes popped out..
Geet looked at rahul & complained '
dehko na..mujhe tenis bhi nahi khelne de rahi
Nt hit her head & paced restlessly
...issen is halat main tenis kelna hain
rahul ' ek min, ussen ek bar puch tho lo
nt '
kya pucho?
Geet innocently '
kya?
Rahul ' who is ur BF?
Geet blinked her eyes..& then looked angrily at them '
u know I don't have any BF. aap log bhi mama papa ki tarah mujhe se baat kar rahen ho
u know very well I don't have any frds here.
She became really sad.
Mera genie bhi nahi
rahul & Nt looked at each other ..GENEI!!
nt was abt to say something..rahul held her back.
Rahul whispered in Nt's ears.. just get the complete check up done then we will talk to her.

They immediately rushed her to the hospital & got the complete check up done. Nt was shocked with the reports. She threw the reports on the table.. she is 5 months pregnant & its baby boy.
Rahul '
5 months..
Geet held her stomach & started laughing.. laughing loud..
rahul & Nt looked at each other
Geet held her laughter & brust out laughing again
nt ' r u gone mad.. tum 5 month preganat ho & u r laughing like this
Geet surpressed her laughter '
di yah baat HP kisi bhi choten se bachen ko bhi pata hain.. pregnant hone ke liyen pelne shaadi karni padthi hain. Aur meri shaadi nahi huen hain
then she looked at rahul '
sachi Nt ne aapne degree kiya kanha se.. wanha basics nahi sikathen kya
Nt..looked at Geet in utter shock.. & looked at rahul.. I don't believe this..

Precap
oops Geet realizing wat that act meant

-PREV PART 66 NEXT PART 68-

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