-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END - Page 52

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the bc to bc lovely updates dear...
love to see Maan's concern for Geet ...
Cannot see Maan going through so much of pain...
Plz take him out of this...😭
I want all ur FF updates...
me greedy😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
how sad yaar...

very very sad part

i hope maan will b able to gain the thrust back

update soon

waiting for moreee


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Posted: 14 years ago
me typing... ... :)
wont be long with the 2nd one :D xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

me typing... ... :)
wont be long with the 2nd one :D xxx

hw mean di...u r nw bribing me wid d update...
ab toh medicine bhi asar nahi karegi...
ab muje neend kaise aayegi...means half and hour more...
no plzzz...dnt do dis to me...
me crying see...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update!
I really dont like this geet
I can understand her behavior towards maan!
But the way she is behaving with mia was 🥺
How can she ignore one kid for another?? 😳
My heart went out for mia when she said she wanted her "mamma"
Cant wait for the next part!

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...waiting 4 next...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lively-piia

hw mean di...u r nw bribing me wid d update...
ab toh medicine bhi asar nahi karegi...
ab muje neend kaise aayegi...means half and hour more...
no plzzz...dnt do dis to me...
me crying see...😭



u take sleeping pill?????
how old are u NAD WHY?????
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful emotional part.
Maan wanted her forgiveness.
He was trying his best to erase the pain.
But its not easy for Geet to forgive and forget.
She has really been through a lot.
She was always on the receiving end be it pain or love from Maan.
How about her feelings which were never cared for.
Not then and not now too,
When she was loving and vulnerable he inflicted pain on her
made her terrified beg for not leaving her alone.
He crushed her innocent heart which even now longs for him.
Now when she is insecure trying to get over her fears trying to protect her vulnerable self he
expects her to accept and reciprocate his love.
I dont feel it is fair.
Her feelings need to be respected too.
Maan needs to make her trust him with her heart and with Sia too.
Nothing can be done till he gains back the trust.
Hope he does it soon.
Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 14 years ago

IMMORAL WORLD

Part 39


Maan "tum aisa ku bolrahi ho?" a tear dropped down his eyes, oh how much she hated that... How much the girl inside her wanted to hug him, sooth him, how much she missed that geet who trusted her blindly, her hand came up, holding his cheek, yet not fully showing her self...
Her fear was still visible... He freed her instantly, walking backwards... He feared her with each second by. He feared his own ideas. Its backfiring. Love is sweet, innocent but here, love is cruel... Maan couldnt understand her situation.. Nor his mind wanted to, what if it hurts more.

Geet stood there, glued her self to the wall. Fearing his each gesture...

Maan "why are you so scared of me?" he took deep in her eyes.. Came close... Holding her tight. He wanted answer tonight... He wanted to speak his heart out.. He wanted to here her side.. He couldnt gather why she is like this.. Yes its his fault but here... He cant do anything... It's killing him. "why you are not answering me?" he shouts... "why you are so indifferent to our kids? Why you behave with me like that? For last 4 years I have been living in this false hope that you will come back to me .. You will be that old geet again... Then why I feel empty even when you are there with me? Why this loneliness hunting me?"

Geets eyes looked at him non stop his each question, she have answer yet she didnt want to express... It feared her further... What will happen then... Will he accept her fear? Will he?

Maan "WHY?" he shouts... Demanding an answer. He comes close, holds her firmly, shaking her to wake up, wake up in to the reality... "I find no difference between sia and our other children then why you look at them with different eyes?" his answer brought her back in to the reality... No she dosn't. She would never... But will he...

Geet "no- no I - I don't..."

Maan "don't lie geet... In everything, ... In every thing you always divide or create a line... Why?" geet wasnt sure what to answer... He wants to know she though... First time in 4 years he have asked...

Geet "ap sia ko pasand nahi karte... Pher ay dekhaba ku? Hame pata hi, ap islye usko apnya ku ki wu apki choti bhi ki bacca- hi..." it took her lot of courage to say those words... Because everytime she thinks like that only the brutal rape becomes visible that's why she always conseles her self.. Its maans baby.

Maan " NO NO NO,, sia is my. She is my baby. I have been with her since the day she learned to call papa. She is my! I always been there for her" geets heart wanted to belive this.. But her mind told her something els... Of course he would say that, ... Why wouldn't he..

Geet "you were never there when she first learned to walk.. When... When she said her first word.." maans heart ached... "ap kha thi tab??" she softly questiones him... Relaxin... Maan didn't show his agressive behaviour.. He was angry but not out of his mind... A tear rolled down geets eyes, like almost after 6 years she had this courage to question him... "you were never there for us" her heart cried to say those word... She knew well how much this will hurt him... The women inside her always observed his pain, and she cried with him silently, but the mother always created a barrier.. And its still to strong to break...

Maan "I was always there..." geet nodes a no with non stop tear dropping out of her eyes... "I was always there..."

Geet "no... No you were never there... Not like mia... You never took her out anywhere... My sia used to be outside of that hut.. Shouting ... Mama hame papa chahiye... Tab ap kha thi? ... When mia took her first step you were there for her... Toh ap sia ke lia ku nahi thi?" she cried.. Non stop tear rolling down her eyes... "me ku na sia se jyda payer karu? ... Usne apni papa ka payer kabhi masoos hi nahi kia... At least mia having both of our love... Per meri sia, au toh akeli hi na..."

Maan "no.. No.. No please don't speak like that.. Mane hamesha sia aur mia ko ek jasi payer kia..."

Geet "nahi.. Nahi ap jute bol rahi ho... Ap kabhi use payer nahi kia.. Kabhi nahi..."







hay you all.. firstly sorry... had no internet so no update...
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now as i am back.. now seriously please press the like if yo would like me to carry on...
otherwise i wonder.. are there any point to update...
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now here... hehe


ENIGMA

Part 83/84

AROMA- (SSEASON 2)
AROMA- PRT 1


RESEMBLE
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6


here.. 2 more parts :D...

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Though it hurts to see maaneet like this...but i feel Geet is right.
She has suffered a lot coz of Maan.
N m sure she will forgive him.

Updt soon.

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