-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END

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Posted: 14 years ago

#491

^^^^^^^^^awww...!!!!!!!!

ill feel like a part of me has ended when this ends :(

but cant wait till u update!!!!

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#492

Immortal love

John Greenleaf Whittier

Immortal love, forever full,
Forever flowing free,
Forever shared, forever whole,
A never ebbing sea!

Our outward lips confess the name
All other names above;
Love only knoweth whence it came,
And comprehendeth love.

Blow, winds of God, awake and blow
The mists of earth away:
Shine out, O Light divine, and show
How wide and far we stray.

We may not climb the heavenly steeps
To bring the Lord Christ down;
In vain we search the lowest deeps,
For Him no depths can drown.

But warm, sweet, tender, even yet,
A present help is He;
And faith still has its Olivet,
And love its Galilee.

The healing of His seamless dress
Is by our beds of pain;
We touch Him in life''s throng and press,
And we are whole again.

Through Him the first fond prayers are said
Our lips of childhood frame,
The last low whispers of our dead
Are burdened with His Name.

O Lord and Master of us all,
Whatever our name or sign,
We own Thy sway, we hear Thy call,
We test our lives by Thine.

The letter fails, the systems fall,
And every symbol wanes;
The Spirit over brooding all,
Eternal Love remains.

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-LOVE-Arshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#493

Atlast updates now I want triple :)

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kooliio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#494

Awesome update!

Geet doesnt trust maan with sia!

Cant really blame her for that...

But treating the kids differently?? 😳

That was really unexpected

Cant wait for the next part!

Please continue soon!

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Aatiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#495

I would love to read another part :)

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Hima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#496

Welcome back
Missed you so so much.
Geet accepted Maan as a husband just for her daughter.
She wanted her daughter to have a name and all the comforts.
But she couldnt let him close to her heart.
Maan hurt her too much and i dont think it will heal soon.
Though she has accepted him as a husband and had kids
she is still aloof and thinks of Sia too in the same way.
Maan must have been so pained by it.
But one has to reap the consequences of one's actions .
So he has to go through and face all that.
Hope he works hard to get her back and makes up to her.
Waiting for the next part.

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504887

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Posted: 14 years ago

#497

awesome updt
aww poor geet she thinks maan still hates sia
hope maan clears her mu
poor mia& troy
pls an epilogue
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

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lively-piia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#498

wwwooohhh di...

welcome bak...😃😃😃😃😃😃

missed u so much...

sorry 4 commenting late...apka baby stuck down wid viral...wat to do monsoon sucks...🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

update was nice but i really maan had to repent a lot to get bak his geet ...

c u soon...and yes u dnt disaapear next time...

lv u..

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#499

u finished this????
no...i wanted more!!!

n e ways...
luvly part dear!!!
geet has lost her tht trust on him..
y shouldn't she...
when she needed him the most
he just ditched her...
maan has a long way to go..
a very long way..
to regain tht trust...tht love!!!!!

thank you so much keya!!!