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Posted: 13 years ago
part 35
nice part...
hope this doesnt complicate Maan's case...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 36

After 50 mins she called Yash

Y: Geet

G: jiju, how is he?

Y: he is not well, Geet, he is not able to open his eyes, he is rubbing them again and again, and he is not even able to speak properly, it seems that he is also having severe headache

G did not say any thing

Y: Geet, are you there, Geet

G: jiju, where is he at present?

Y: at the Police station

G: not at the court

Y: no, Vikrant and uncle have gone there along with Brij, Maan is in the lock up

G: jiju I am coming

Y: but Geet

G: no jiju he needs me, wait there I am coming

She cut the phone and ran to Maan's room

NT: Geet what happened?

G: NT, please ask the driver to take the car out, I have to rush to the police station

NT: but Geet

G: NT soon

And she went inside grabbed some things and stuffed them in her bag and ran downstairs and sat in the car

NT: I am also coming with you, DM please see to things here I am going with Geet

DM: but beta

G: IDK DM but I will not let her go alone

At the Police station Geet rushed inside and went to Yash

G: jiju where is he?

Y: inside

G: I want to meet him

Y: they will not allow

G: who's the in charge? I'll request

Y: no ways Geet

G: no, I will

And she went to Inspector Sonny

I: who are you?

G: sir, I am Maan's fiance

I: so

G: sir, I want to meet him

I: why?

G: sir he is not feeling well sir please

I: maximum criminals we catch don't feel at home here

G: sir please, sir, sir if you ever have loved someone more then yourself sir you could understand sir please once only once

I: ok but only for 5 mins

G: sir I will not lie but sir I will need minimum 20 minutes

I: why?

G: sir, if you want you can accompany me

I: that I will

As he took Geet to Maan he wondered why he was allowing her to meet this Khurana

As soon as she saw Maan she rushed to him and hugged him, he moved his hand on her arm not opening his eyes and said GEET

Sonny wondered why he was not opening his eyes

G: relax Maan I am here, nothing will happen, trust me

M: I trust you Geet

She extracted the things she had in her bag, Yash and Dev stood there watching them wondering what she was doing

She took a hand sanitizer and washed her hands and his, then she cleaned his face with a soft cloth, she let him rest on her lap and she dropped a drop of some eye drop in his either eyes, she gently massaged his head, then she opened a box and again washed her hands and gently removed the lens from his eyes

Sonny was taken aback that Maan was wearing lens and that's why he was behaving irrationally, first he was drugged and second his eyes were itching, he wondered how Sameera can frame a man like Maan who was so nave.

Meanwhile Geet again applied an eye drop he turned and hugged her and wept she cradled him in her lap like a baby, after few mins

M: Geet I am sorry

G: no Maan, its not your fault, I should never have left you and gone to HSPur, I knew this Sasha was up to something, but Sameera will join her and play so low, I never thought on these lines

M: Geet, you trust me

G: yes, I know you can never be wrong

M: and if I did that when I was drugged

G: you will never ever touch any women other then me, even if you are drugged

M: so much trust

G: yes, I know my man, he can never touch any other woman even if he were not in his senses

M: but how will you prove that in court?

G: we will find ways, truth never hides

M: Geet you still love me

G: even if you choose no to love you will end up being trapped in mine, I love you Maan whatever comes

Sonny looked at them and thought was he wrong in not trusting Maya? Why did he not show this trust in her which Geet is showing in Maan? May be that is the reason why she left me.

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow loved it 😊
Edited by zaara2212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsome update didi ..
geets love made even sonny to think ...
do update soon ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Don't u think dat was short part... Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upd yar...
lov it...
i m proud of geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for a short and sweet update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful update
loved it
geet know his man and loved him, understand him, trust him, care for him
this is love
love based on trust, care, understanding for each other.

now soni also shocked and think about his decision towards maya
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tat was awesome ...& lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
i comp forgot abt his lens...
well i am amazed that u used that in such a situation to show their love and trust...
waiting for more...
pl cont soon

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