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Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Shru before I start writing my essay , I am so Sorry I can't find m reserved spot for this one , I swear I had but since I can't I am just writing my comment here now. 😛

Ok can I start with a dance first AHH PEANUTS IS BACK =)

More then that Munchkin and Peanuts are back 😃.

When I was reading the part, the only thing I said after every paragraph got over was, 'I LOVE Armaan.'

🤣 I was waiting to not feel angry at Armaan anymore, even though more than half the times I was hoping that he was ignoring her for her mistakes. I am Sorry.. that I am so team Armaan, but I can't help. I don't think many of us can. 😆

And you've proved it too Shru. Because the way you've put this all seems extremely genuine. This is something you would expect an Armaan Peanuts Mallik to do. What he did just showed his decency, love and loyalty towards Munchkin. No doubt he hurt her, by talking to her the way he did, but at the end of the day, it turned out making their relation stronger, and making her realize the importance of this relationship.

Riddhima has always been a little immature when it came to this relation,she loved him no doubt, but she has always done things the way she wanted, not thinking it from his point of view. After this incident,even though she didn't really deserve this treatment, Armaan did end up making her realize the value of what she has.

But as much as I love Armaan, he DOES need to make up for it , and he can simply do it all , by being with her, and giving her all the due pampering,which she rightfully deserve this time.

Honestly I don't believe I felt angry at Armaan for doing all he did, but I always thought that whatever he is doing, is either because of that night or her job.But Peanuts love us way beyond that to hamper her career because of such a trivial issue and a jerk in office LOL.

But I want to ADMIT, that I loved how you've taken Riddhima's character to a better place. I am sure this entire story was for Riddhima's character to grow and mature. And I have loved the way she kept her spirits up, trying to give Armaan all the time, understand his emotions. Gone to the extent of even blaming herself for all of it. She learned cooking to please him and dealt with him so patiently, JUST because she feared losing him, which just shows you achieved what you had to, by getting this track 😆

I must say , just like Peanuts I too am proud of her.

I am sure Peanuts and Munchkin are you going to be doing silly stuff over and over again. But I am even more sure, that it'll never put their relation at stake.

And even though Armaan did behave like a jerk, but then when Riddhima gets down to being one, she is worse 🤣

Plus like Riddhima said,this was something typically Peanuts style , so its forgiven.And after all no one is God... even if we think Armaan Mallik is very close to being one, but he is human 😳.

I loved Riddhima's reactions here, when she starts to throw stuff at him, and the cutie Armaan thought she was doing it because of *ahem*, and he yet couldn't believe she wasn't angry with him 🤣

I must give it to you for bringing this track in the story, Shru, because it was very much needed. From here on, Riddhima will realize where she had flawed and try and correct it, because she knows losing him because of those flaws is not worth enough. And Armaan will realize that distancing him from her will not help in anyway, and talking it out would be easier.

Honestly Shru, I am amazed at how you've blended this story , to take it ahead , make sure the story and the relation matures , and also kept up the intrigue level You're one smart girl 😉

And you've always kept Armaan a mystery ROFL. And even though we all crib when we don't get enough of him in a part, you do always make up for it. And you have to haan, like when you start posting in november again .. we need lots of munckhin and peanuts 😳

I love love love the way you write Shru, your words, vocab and the flow in which the part goes is really amazing. I've always loved the story, but more than the story and characters, its your writing that makes me want to read AWOTB over and over again.

I have a little demand, for whenever you start writing, I want them both to spend some good time together, talking 😳 LOL

I love the installment completely Shru, and thanks so much for completing it, even though you were busy and tired. 🤗

Best of luck for your exams, I'm sure you'll do really well. 😃

Waiting eagerly for Novemeber 😍