A Walk On The Beach..#5|AR|Link to New Thread :Pg1 - Page 139

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

res! *edited*

Sorry Sorry Sorry! I know im late and this time i got no excuse! Im just really lazy :P

I loved this part! Finaaly the confrontation happened!

Aww Riddhimas really sweet for making food for Amraan on his birthday and i love his mum..shes soo sweet! She actually acts like shes Riddhima mum which i think is great! She can rely on her soo much even when it comes to Armaan. I feel bad for Armaans mum..she feels liek she doesnt know her son sometimes but she should know that shes a fantastic mum for both AR and the reasons why Armaan keeps things from her are because he thinks they are for his own good.

I feel really bad for Riddhima she did all that for his birthdat and he didnt come! I really think that now its time for Armaan to pull his act together and realise that hes not the only one in this relationship..he shouldve realised that Riddhima would be hurt by him ignoring her!

I think this situation has really matured Riddhima and got her to know Armaan more..i mean when she was thinknig of reasons of why Armaan is ignoring her...she knows that Armaan wouldnt leave her...she knows that their realitonship is stronger than that.

Awww Riddhimas like one of the best girlfriends Armaan could have! When she was sitting there wating for him i felt so sorry for her..i felt like slapping Armaan then for doing that to her! And normally im a Armaan fan in this ff but for that one scene i was on Riddhimas side😆

Icouldnt belive it that Armaan didnt come home! i was like literally mad at him! And then seeing Riddhima that was soo upsetting..the poor girl didnt even do anything😭 I really think the way Riddhima responded when he came was totally acceptable! Some people might find it immature but i think she did right! She was hurt and the way she behaved was expected... he couldnt really expect her to forgive him did he? When he said they needed to talk, i was thinking "NOW he wants to talk he never thought about that before did he?" LOl sorry but on that moment i really hated Armaan for the first time in this ff! He really hurt Riddhima...he maybe didnt do it on purpose but he shouldve thought if it would or not!

LOL Okay the hatred for Armaan had gone now when he said all those things through the door hehe awww i felt sorry for too yaar! God i dont know whos side to pick!😛😆 For now im not on any!But i really think Armaan shouldve realised earlier all this...Couldnt he tell that she was being hurt by what he was doing? I dont know if im glad that Riddhima was ignoring him now..it might seem alittle imature but i understand why she did it. Im glad she did coz now Armaan knew how she was feeling but i feel sorry coz then Armaans hurt and i dont like seeing my baby hurt😛 OMG i totally forgot that it all happened on his bday! Ooohhh bad bday for him yaar! I hate seeing him cry 😭Atleast we knew RIddhima wasnt angry at him that much that she kissed him :D I knew she cant help it but do it! Afterall its her Peanuts 😃

LOL Ms Chadda is soo annoying with her Punjabi! Im suprised Riddhima didnt punch her one😛

Awww humari Riddhima is a hero! LOL OMG her swearing is funny! I can imagine everyones expressions hearing her swear :P

🤣RIddhimas thoughts are hilarious! Especially about the doctor! I bet the doctor did do it all by purpose to get back at her! He must have been really hating her then :P

My poor baby must have been soo worried about Riddhima! God what a birthday yaar! Woaahh i never seen Armaan be so rude to anyone! Atleast it shows how much he cared about RIddhima..aww he would do anything for her! Im glad that Armaan remembered Riddhima fear of hospitals..thank God he saved her from there

Hmmm the confrontation... In my opinion i think Armaan was being immature for the first time normally its riddhima but this time i think it was Armaan! But his immaturity showed his love for RIddhima at the same time so thats a good thing! I felt really bad when i read Riddhima break down

Yayyy after soo long they kissed!😃 Awww he finally let her get rid of all her insecurities and she got rid of his! :D

To be honest i really think Armaans reason for all this happening was not good enough..he couldve talked it out with Riddhima before but he didnt! The reson is my opinion was immature..yes i understand he couldnt keep control but Ignoring Riddhima was not a way to fix it at all! He was scared if he couldnt keep control he would you know do it with her..but he should have known that their relationship is stronger than that and if it did happen they both were involved! LOL i dont know if it makes sense bleuggh i cant write it down what im thinking hehe its too hard! Basically he should know if they both did it..then they did and they both wouldnt have regretted it! Im glad that now RIdhhima got rid of his insecurities...that they both are in this together! This update shows that its not only Riddhima that can be unsure about hteir relationship it could be Armaan too and now we seen both of the sides..both their worries and insecurities about the relationship which i love because its good to see what Armaan thinks about the realitonship not only Riddhima plus it shows that Armaan cant think everything will go perfect, there will be times where they need to talk it through..which they did! I mean come on hes only human, he must have some insecurities about the relationship too, i dont think i know any couple who havent had any problems along the way of their relationship. So its good to see that AR are human😛😆Btw Armaaan seeing RIddhima in the bathroom naked! Hawwtt! LOL i cant believe that happened!

Finally everything is sorted! Phew! Thank God! I hate seeing them like that in that stage! Even though they went through a lot of pain through that stage the result came out good..they got rid of both of some of their insecurities..i think that this stage was needed. Coz they opened up about the physical part of their relationship now...and a bit of the emotional part too

Awww Armaan is cho cho cho chweet! <3 <3 I can tell Riddhima means everything to him! He always puts her first before anything..him ignoring her, he did it coz he thought it was best for her!

I loved the ending yaar! They are back :D Yayyy!!!

conitnue soon x

God this comment took ages to write LOL

Originally posted by: armaania13

EDITED FINALLY!!!!! 😆

Replied finally! 😆

Apologies for the delay, but I hope you are happy with the size of the comment!!! 😆
I tried my best!!!

Apologies from my side too, but you know my reasons! 😆

OK, so what was glaring in the segment where she is in the hospital after she saves Gunni, is just how neurotic and panicky her entire behavior is with being in the hospital. You have portrayed her panic, her fear and her absolute aversion to being in the hospital, just perfectly. She comes across as a very very stubborn child throwing tantrums, but you portrayed just so subtly why she feels that way and when she despises even the word hospital being mentioned, just how much it killed her to be in one.!! So Kudos to you for bringing that out so beautifully. You really really portrayed that aspect so well --- the dialogues, the expressions, everyones reactions .. just everything!!! Thank you <3 Her child-like behavior is something I personally enjoyed writing, because it cracked me up too 😆

I think even I screamed reprimanding Armaan, when he made that callous statement : "What's the point of saying sorry, after almost killing her?!"Being a doctor, that's the last thing you would expect from him.. but it just goes to show how shaken he was seeing riddhima in the hospital, with her leg broken.. Yea, exactly what I was trying to portray. He's Peanuts first, then Dr. Armaan Mallik!

I was amazed at how she managed to get out of staying the night at the hospital, but what was even more surprising was that she managed to get her way with going home with Armaan to their place and not with Mumma Pappa where she could've gotten all the care in the world.. But then, without Armaan, it wouldn't be home'as she so rightly said!!!

And now to the segment in the chapter, where they reach home!!!! And the initial outburst ----I thought that was an absolutely brilliant portrayal of feelings of anger, hurt, fear, suppressed and now coming to the fore' wanting to talk things out and yet ending up in a manner that only caused more hurt!!

Him ' expressing his feelings of angst that she was trying to kill herself over the hurt she felt on his birthday, his feelings of fear at how easily she could've been seriously injured and his emotions at what that meant for him, to the extent, that he didn't really care if Gunni was hit by the car, as long as it wasn't Riddhima!!!

Her ' expressing her shock at his ridiculous thoughts that she tried to kill herself, her feelings of insecurity asking if there was another girl in his life, and if he felt he made a mistake with her, her feelings of exasperation at why he couldn't believe that all she tried to do was save a little girls'life.

And when Riddhima breaks down completely --- it was just heartbreaking to hear her pour out her anguish, her insecurity, her fears, and how she was willing to do just anything that would get him to love her back, the way he used to.

Nothing made me happier than the way Armaan just shut her up during her outburst!!! It was just so heartwarming to see him hug and kiss his Munchkin and say all she wanted to hear , about what he felt about their relationship. That was just such an AWWW moment!!! Yay! Armaan was finally doing something to make everyone hate him less! 😆

And so while I had guessed the reason why Armaan was behaving the way he was, it was such a funny read that the two of them could be such daft-heads!!! ! Seriously!!! "I underwent a month of torture, pain and hurt just because you happen to be a prude?" I seethed. He looked at me confused. "What? No! Riddhima, I'm not a prude, and I don't regret what happened that night at all!" He said exasperated. I looked at him as if he were mental. "I don't regret that night at all, that's what scares me!" He said. I continued giving him a blank look. "You idiot, I wanted to screw you, does that clear your doubt a little?" He said, annoyed. I looked at him with raised eyebrows.

I always thought Armaan was being simply ridiculous about feeling so guilty about that night in Vegas!!!And boy, was I so glad that Riddhima thought the same thing too.. that he hurt her so much over such a trivial or non-existent issue!!! Her reaction to his confession on what brought all this about was simply hilarious!!! And just So-Riddhima types----- "You idiot, I wanted to screw you, does that clear your doubt a little?" He said, annoyed. I looked at him with raised eyebrows. "If you ever use that phrase again, I swear I'll never let you do it!" I muttered angrily, tears drying on my cheek and plopping myself back on the bed, trying to get away from him.

"I saw you naked." He said after a long pause, in a monotone, giving up his secret. I sat there on the bed transfixed, while he stood with his eyes shut.

"Tell me you didn't." I groaned and saw him open his eyes one at a time. As soon as he had, I picked up the object closest to me - the remote control, and threw it right at him. He ducked in surprise, and to my great pleasure, throwing things at him made me feel better. And so I reached for anything and everything in my vicinity, which could inflict life-long wounds on him - all my books which lay on the side table, the remote of the heater, my teddy bears, my pillows, while he ducked to counter the assaults. I stopped when I reached our picture frame; I didn't have the heart to throw that.

"I'm sorry, I didn't mean, I honestly didn't know you were in there, and I walked in and you'" He trailed off, while I just stared at him. "You honestly think I want to kill you because you saw me that way, and because you couldn't keep control?" I asked softly, as he stared at me confused.

"That isn't it?" He asked uncertainly. "No." I shook my head. "Its because you think that's a reason good enough to keep distance from me and hurt me like you did." I stated. I saw his guilt-laden eyes leave mine and fix themselves on the floor instead. "Why couldn't you have just talked to me?" I asked, in a voice filled with utter disappointment.

And I have to add this --- I especially loved the way you wrote this bit: It brought about just the right touch of guilt, the fear, the awkwardness that Armaan felt : Yea, since it was a very small reason for all that drama, I thought I would make Riddhima feel the same way about the whole thing, so the issue looks more real, in the sense that the whole pettiness of the issue was not lost or ignored!

What was I to say? How crazy I went when I saw you wear that dress that day? How it got so difficult for me to breathe when you kissed me that way? I just never wanted to let go of that feeling! And then you fell asleep'" He looked at me exasperated, while I bit my lip sheepishly. "And I still wanted to' It was the toughest thing to do, to stop and to' let go.. Especially when I all I wanted to do was just'" His voice trailed off. I felt my cheeks inflame, but smiled softly. He was adorable; no amount of anger could go against that. "I just keep thinking if I had gone overboard' I mean you were drunk, and it was almost like taking advantage of you, and that's not it' I still managed to get some control, but then I saw you' that way' and it just brought all of that back.." He said helplessly. "I felt like a complete loser, and I was afraid of what you were thinking about me, because I'm not in this relationship for physical needs Riddhima, I never wanted to make it seem like that, I love you for everything and'I was just trying to keep myself away, because I knew I would lose it if I as much as held your hand, and its actually your fault, every little thing of yours just makes me crazy, and I just wanted to keep away for your sake.. And I don't want you to get any wrong idea about me and-" He rambled.

What stood out in this entire episode, was the Role Reversal of kinds!!! Usually its Riddhima who is always trying to act cute to get away with things, indulge in babyish tactics, throw tantrums etc, to get things her way and Armaan is the one who is the more mature one, who patiently sorts her out, takes care of her, indulging her etc!

This time around it was Armaan doing the cute act, trying to get away with not having to give any explanation for his behavior, feeling awkward, guilty and behaving that way, while Riddhima was the one who was the more mature of the two, making him come and sit next to her, holding his hands, and patiently explaining her thoughts on the whole intimate episode in Vegas. Yea, precisely why I got this issue to fore - to help Riddhima's character mature a little. Obviously it was all washed out by her baby-tantrums in the next update, but eh, in such cases at least, she has some sense of maturity! 😆

It was very very heartening to see her try and get Armaan rid of any guilt that he harboured and that what he saw and felt was just absolutely natural and ok with her!

"You're not giving me any wrong idea." I said softly, causing him to look at me. I smiled slightly and beckoned him to come and sit next to me, which he did like a small obedient child. Holding his hands in mine, I looked at him, while he looked at me confused. "You know you're a complete asshole?" I said sweetly, and saw him pout sadly. Resisting the urge to kiss him, I continued. "Armaan why didn't you just talk to me? You do know that none of this would've even happened if you would have just told me how you felt!" I looked at him straight in the eyes. "I can't even believe you went to this extent just for this petty little thing. Honestly, no one's going to believe this!" I said exasperated. He looked at me sheepishly and ashamed. "Armaan listen to me. And listen to me carefully." I said sternly, and he nodded slowly. "There's not a single cell in my body which regrets what happened that night'" I said softy, and he looked at me hopefully. "Armaan!" I sighed, going closer to him, looking at him straight in the eyes. "When I moved in with you, I had thought about all of this, and I knew this topic would crop up someday, I just didn't know it would be this way.. Anyway, you have got to stop thinking of this like some crime! That was the last thing it could ever be' And baby, I love you! And no matter what happens, that fact is never going to change, and nothing in this world is going to make me think badly about you, I worship the ground you walk on.." I said earnestly, and saw him smile a little. "Armaan, there s going to be many instances like these, and one day, we are going to.. you know'" I said embarrassed, and I saw a shadow of a smirk on his face. "The point is," I continued, "that it'll be right'" I said softly. "I'm in love with you, and whenever that time comes, I know I'm going to love each and every moment of it, whether its today, tomorrow, in a few weeks, months, years, 10 years-"

"WHAT, 10 years?" He jumped, horrified at the idea, while I laughed.

"You know what I mean' The thing is, whether it happens now, or later, I'm going to be okay with it.. It'll come when it has to, and we'll know when it does and it'll be right.." I said softly, caressing his cheek. "And when it does, I'm just going to love you more.." I said, as I adored him.

It was just such a beautiful read about how Munchkin and Peanuts gave into all their emotions and pour their hearts out to each other with regards to just what and how much they mean to each other and just what this relationship means to each of them. Loved seeing the emotional side of Armaan 'It isn't very often that we see him in tears either!! So this sure was a great treat!!

And this entire episode also brought about the fact, that no matter how much AR change, they still remain the same!!! And this was just so cutely brought about by this :

"You do have to make it up to me though.. Big time.." I mumbled, and heard him chuckle.

"I knew The Munchkin Gupta could never let go of something this easy.." He chortled. I hit him on his back to shut him up. "I'll do anything, love." He kissed my ear.

"You can start by putting me to sleep in your arms.." I said cutely, and parted from him. His amused eyes turned to happy, and laying me down on the bed carefully, he pulled the duvet over both of his, as he lay down, only partially. I placed my head on his chest, and held his waist, determined to never let him go.

This entire Chapter has been one of the most beautiful chapters of this FF!!! In Every Way ---- hurt, anger, fear, insecurity, shock, all so beautifully interwoven with Humor and above all, Romance!!!!

Thank you Kavii <3 😃

I know its not much of a reply, but I don't have anything as such to reply to, because first thing, your comment and the size of it blew my mind off, and second your comment hardly has any come back 😆

I adored the comment <3 Thanks sooo much <3 It definitely made up for the huge humongous delay :P

So better keep them coming <3 And now update your Days 6 and 7 ka comment and the one on Thread 7! :P :D

Hugs xox

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Read all the bits in Blue!

And I have to add this --- I especially loved the way you wrote this bit: It brought about just the right touch of guilt, the fear, the awkwardness that Armaan felt : Yea, since it was a very small reason for all that drama, I thought I would make Riddhima feel the same way about the whole thing, so the issue looks more real, in the sense that the whole pettiness of the issue was not lost or ignored!

What was I to say? How crazy I went when I saw you wear that dress that day? How it got so difficult for me to breathe when you kissed me that way? I just never wanted to let go of that feeling! And then you fell asleep'" He looked at me exasperated, while I bit my lip sheepishly. "And I still wanted to' It was the toughest thing to do, to stop and to' let go.. Especially when I all I wanted to do was just'" His voice trailed off. I felt my cheeks inflame, but smiled softly. He was adorable; no amount of anger could go against that. "I just keep thinking if I had gone overboard' I mean you were drunk, and it was almost like taking advantage of you, and that's not it' I still managed to get some control, but then I saw you' that way' and it just brought all of that back.." He said helplessly. "I felt like a complete loser, and I was afraid of what you were thinking about me, because I'm not in this relationship for physical needs Riddhima, I never wanted to make it seem like that, I love you for everything and'I was just trying to keep myself away, because I knew I would lose it if I as much as held your hand, and its actually your fault, every little thing of yours just makes me crazy, and I just wanted to keep away for your sake.. And I don't want you to get any wrong idea about me and-" He rambled.

Originally posted by: armaania13

OK, so one thing -- this comment below in black was for the portion in RED, where Armaan is describing what he felt.. that I thought was very very well-portrayed.. I think you thought that it was for Riddhima's reaction!!

And I have to add this --- I especially loved the way you wrote this bit: It brought about just the right touch of guilt, the fear, the awkwardness that Armaan felt : Yea, since it was a very small reason for all that drama, I thought I would make Riddhima feel the same way about the whole thing, so the issue looks more real, in the sense that the whole pettiness of the issue was not lost or ignored!

What was I to say? How crazy I went when I saw you wear that dress that day? How it got so difficult for me to breathe when you kissed me that way? I just never wanted to let go of that feeling! And then you fell asleep'" He looked at me exasperated, while I bit my lip sheepishly. "And I still wanted to' It was the toughest thing to do, to stop and to' let go.. Especially when I all I wanted to do was just'" His voice trailed off. I felt my cheeks inflame, but smiled softly. He was adorable; no amount of anger could go against that. "I just keep thinking if I had gone overboard' I mean you were drunk, and it was almost like taking advantage of you, and that's not it' I still managed to get some control, but then I saw you' that way' and it just brought all of that back.." He said helplessly. "I felt like a complete loser, and I was afraid of what you were thinking about me, because I'm not in this relationship for physical needs Riddhima, I never wanted to make it seem like that, I love you for everything and'I was just trying to keep myself away, because I knew I would lose it if I as much as held your hand, and its actually your fault, every little thing of yours just makes me crazy, and I just wanted to keep away for your sake.. And I don't want you to get any wrong idea about me and-" He rambled.

But otherwise no worries on the reply!!!
I am just glad that my comments mean something to you!! Thats all!!

Yeah, yeah, I know I have to comment on Day 6 and Day 7 plus the RES on the new thread!!! But today is Aanya's day, I am commenting on LI from Ch 24 onwards!!!!!