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Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Ankuu 🤗

This is the longest you've ever commented on AWOTB! 😃 Thank you! 🤗

And yeah, who doesn't love Armaan, that's the question, isn't it? 😆

And yeah, what Armaan was trying to do did show his decency, and his idiosyncracy, LOL, and he's done stuff this stupid before, so it's pretty expected.. 😆 And oh, he definitely will make up for everything, and this time, it won't be Riddhima who'll be demanding stuff off him.. He'll do stuff on his own.. Its his Munchkin he hurt after all! 😳

Yep, you guessed right, all of this, was a way to make Riddhima a little mature and responsible.. And for the first time, she wasn't scared about losing her best friend, but was scared of losing the love of her life, so that shows that Armaan's finally crossed that line for her.. That was the whole idea, to make Riddhima realize how it would be to live without Armaan...

I'll be honest with you.. First when I thought of the track, it seemed like a very good idea, and so I elaborated on it, but then, after Chapter 33, and after writing Armaan's b'day part, the more I thought about his reasons for doing everything he did, the more stupid they felt, and I thought I had made a huge blunder by bringing this up this way...

But the mere fact that you think this was a good track, I'm just sighing in relief! LOL! Thank you! 🤗

Yeah, that's a plus, and a minus of writing the story in first person - Armaan remains an enigma, as you never know what goes on in his mind.. 😆

Aww.. Thank you so much! I've been told this before, but every time, it makes my spirits soar high! 😳

🤗

And about making them talk, oh they will, and the next chapter is only Munchkin-Peanuts - talking and romancing, that's all! 😆

And who knows, if you guys keep inspiring me to write this way, you might not have to wait until November.. 😃

And thanks again, I genuinely hope I do well in them! 😆

Hey Shrutika,

Sorry :( But this Comment can't be big. I mean I want it too, but like, everything's Going very wrong at the moment in my Life😭

Ok So I loved Chapter 34! Riddhima and Armaan going a little Aloof, then Riddhima's efforts for his birthday!! I would like to say on this context, I So wanted to cry on this One! Seriously, made me Sob !! Like when she went ," Happy Birthday Armaan" I was LITERALLY shouting to the PC, "Come on you DUFFER ARMAAN KE BACCHE ! DO SOMETHING!" I felt so bad when she stalked off like that :(

I Likey the Riddhima-Mom bonding :) Its So sweet !! Even after that drastic accident, which occured due to miss Riddhima's maha-herois attempt, Armaan's mom was So sweet, correcting her the whole time, and worrying. I understood Armaan's reaction then. It was stunning man :| I swear . I loved how he brought her home and they cried in each other's arms.

AYIE what the hell was the next part ? Oh my GOSH.😲 I never expected this. SERIOUS.😆 But the throwing things part was So Riddhima 🤣 Loved how the confession and the part ended. Munchkin-Peanut 4 everrr <3

I may comment irregularly now :( My net's getting locked from tom :(

So soweey :( But know and REMEMNER that ILY AWOTB :)

Love,

Maitree

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

OMG :| did you just say if we inspire you enough you'll update before too 😳... great then. Me and Aanya should get to work.😆

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

*EDITED*

SHRUUU 🤗

Umm a question first - Is the chapter over?! Because the title doesn't say so 😆 Chill kar, I'm editing my comment anyway :D

Okay the beginning had me laughing my ass out, seriously 🤣 The way she goes, "Bloody Firangi..." LMFAOO 🤣 She's adorable 😆

And yay! Rhea's back! I missed her! Well she didn't have much to say or anything, but still it was nice to see her after all this time. << Why am I talking like I met her in person or something? 😳

So, the whole hospital bit was funny :D And then finally, FINALLY Mr. Peanuts Malik is hereee! Weee :D The way you described him? Eyes bloodshot, pale, etc, mera toh saara gussa wahin pe utar gaya 😆 Seriously Shru, I don't think any of us can stay mad at Armaan for too long, it's kinda impossible <3 I loved how he understood her and brought her home, under his care. *Sigh* Now that her leg is broken she can't go anywhere without his help. Unless of course she gets insanely good at walking with crutches which I hope she wont so that he could just pick her up or something ☺️

*Clears Throat* Oh thank God, they started talking 😳 Though according to me, they still need to talk stuff out...like not about the issue but about stuff in general, you know! Ek mahine se they've not talked properly so they should do that. He probably doesn't know about stuff at her office or whatever 😆

😲 Their confrontation was intense! And whoa, Armaan was scared me :| Tell me how you manage to do that, Shru? Scare me through the computer? 😳

But yeah, it was SO well done! I loved it! I loved the anger, the frustration, the fury, the fear of loss, everything! It was wow :|

And then the bit after that where she spills it all out, that was OUT OF THE WORLD. I teared up. No jokes. I can't believe I teared up! You should be proud, I don't cry in books or movies or whatever! It's only been thrice that I've done that. One, in Taare Zameen Par. Everyone cried in that one :P Two, in LOOC when Sanaa would update those tortuously sad updates and Three in AWOTB :|

And then the after that, throughout the whole update I went - "I love Armaan, I can't imagine why I was angry at him in the first place!" 😆

Believe me I was SO SO SO glad that Peanuts was back, I did a little happy dance on the spot 🤣

Bipolar. Huh. Maara par hasti ti, ane pote use karyu! OMG I laughed so hard when I read that 🤣

"You idiot, I wanted to screw you, does that clear your doubt a little?"

LMFAOO 🤣

I seriously laughed so much! Somehow I never thought he'd use those words...screw you..🤣🤣🤣

And so I wasn't surprised when Riddhima was appropriately angry 😆

But OMG the next part did surprise me!! So he saw her naked! And that's why...

But honestly Shru, the whole thing was so adorable <3 Trust me, the reason didn't sound stupid at all! I like how Armaan is so..so, decent! I love it :) And his reasons just show how much he cared for Munchkin :) Really Shru, it was freaking adorable <3 :)

Yes he hurt her, but I'm definitely not mad at him! He is a perfect fiance 😳

Although he does have to make it up to her! And he will I'm sure! Kitni badi opportunity hai, her LEG is broken 😆

And this track did it's job Shru! Riddhima has matured so much now! I honestly loved how you got to it! Had she been the old Riddhima, she'd be embodying the saying - Payback's a bitch 🤣 But I love how she didn't get mad at him, didn't fight with him and for a moment even considered that SHE could be the reason for his behavior! I absolutely LOVED how she's matured :) <3

But OMG Peanuts and Munchkin. They're still the same! I mean their relation has progressed, but I love how they're still silly & taking jabs at each other 😆

That bit where Armaan realizes that she's not angry because he saw her naked made me 🤣 I could totally imagine him, SO adorable <3 <3

I can't stop saying it man! I loved loved loved this track! It was a turning point of sorts, for AWOTB :) And I love how the story is from Riddhima's PoV but you always manage to convey Armaan's feelings effortlessly, I don't think many people can do that :)

And I love the way you write! Sachi! I could read AWOTB again and again and again simply because there is not one point in the story where my interest level goes down <3 It's all so fabulous :| *Sigh*

All in all, fantastic update! Definitely one of your best! But we'll see another one only in November... :| Ab happy ending de diya toh we've become more greedy 😆

Koi nai, I'll survive :D

All the Best for your boards Shru! I know you'll ace them!! <3 🤗

And we shall be waiting for November! 63 days to go :D

I Love Youu :D Seriously, this update ma me go - Happy in my heart 🤣

xoxo

Aanya

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

Hey Shrutika,

Sorry :( But this Comment can't be big. I mean I want it too, but like, everything's Going very wrong at the moment in my Life😭

Ok So I loved Chapter 34! Riddhima and Armaan going a little Aloof, then Riddhima's efforts for his birthday!! I would like to say on this context, I So wanted to cry on this One! Seriously, made me Sob !! Like when she went ," Happy Birthday Armaan" I was LITERALLY shouting to the PC, "Come on you DUFFER ARMAAN KE BACCHE ! DO SOMETHING!" I felt so bad when she stalked off like that :(

I Likey the Riddhima-Mom bonding :) Its So sweet !! Even after that drastic accident, which occured due to miss Riddhima's maha-herois attempt, Armaan's mom was So sweet, correcting her the whole time, and worrying. I understood Armaan's reaction then. It was stunning man :| I swear . I loved how he brought her home and they cried in each other's arms.

AYIE what the hell was the next part ? Oh my GOSH.😲 I never expected this. SERIOUS.😆 But the throwing things part was So Riddhima 🤣 Loved how the confession and the part ended. Munchkin-Peanut 4 everrr <3

I may comment irregularly now :( My net's getting locked from tom :(

So soweey :( But know and REMEMNER that ILY AWOTB :)

Love,

Maitree

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Aanya! 🤗

Maari Gujju Chorri! 🤣

Gee, I'm never going to get tired of giving you nicky-names 😃

Yeah, actually I was just trying to bring out Riddhima's discomfort at staying in the hospital - she hates them for obvious reasons.. And well now she hates the poor doctor too... But I'm sure that feeling's mutual. 😕

LOL, don't worry, I'll try putting in more of Rhea if you miss her so much! 😆

And oh yes, Armaan will make up for everything, big time.. Its not Riddhima's - Paying back is a bitch anymore, its Armaan's - Karma's a bitch. 😉

How the hell did you get scared? 😲 Elaborate.

LALALALALALALA, I made you CRY! *Does happy dance*

🤣

Oh yeah, I forgot to give you credit, I'll add that in the update, I planned to add a bracket right next to that statement, but then thought I'll add a line at the bottom as a P.S. I forgot. Cholly.

And oh, also, they will talk everything out, from Riddhima's job, to everything, don't worry.. Have plans for that one! 😳

I love it when you comment on my one-liner sarci comments! No one pays attention to the comic relief in between the confrontations. 😔 But you did! Thank you! <3

And thank you again for all the compliments *Blush Blush*

Try commenting like this again and again (not that you don't, but you know what I mean!) and I'll update definitely before November 2.. You guys comment and it makes it terribly hard for me to stop writing! Kaameno. 😡

LOL, I can't believe you're still stuck on my Dil Dance Maare Moment! 🤣

P.S. What's with the tiny font? 😳 But you still managed this uber long comment with the small font. ILY <3 🤗