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Posted: 13 years ago
hey all
i m really really sorry for such a delay
i promise to give you daily updates from now on.
here is the udpate
plz enjoy and dont forget to comment
and those who want pm plz add sschPm in your buddy list

Part 12:

Next morning.

10 am. Maan was still sleeping peacefully as he was up till late. Geet was sleeping while hugging him with her head on his chest.

Arey ye maan kaha reh gaye aaj. As dadima kept on waiting for him on breakfast

Ajeeb larke hai ye dono abhi tak niche nahi aye 9 baj re hai.

Arey nakul zara daikhye dev or maan kaha hai

Dadima dev sahib to apne kmre me nahi hai or maan sir abhi tak so re hai shaid.

So re hai. Is waqt unki tabiat to thk hai

Pata nahi dadima. Guard bata raha tha k maan sir 2 baje raat ko bare gusse me thy . phle bhagte we out house gae or phir kafi dair wo lawn me bhi phirte rhe kuch pareshan lag re thy.

Aisa kia hogya aap chahiye me daikhti ho

Ji dadima

Maan baite kia hua. Dadima entered his room.

She stood roted on her spot dev was lying on the couch maan on bed both fast sleep

Maan uthiye dev aap bhi. Ye sab kia horaha hai .

Dev being fainted did not stir while maan woke up .

He lazily opened his eyes and first thing he saw was geet's face he smiled looking at her angelic beauty.

Maan baite khud ko daikh k itna muskara q rahe hai. Ye sab kia tamasha hai

Or puri raat ap ghar k bahir kia ker re thy

Maan at once straightened himself he tried to push geet away from him without making any obvious movements but geet was fast sleep and refused to budge.

Maan hum yaha khare hai or aap uth k baith bhi nahi sakte.

Wo dadima wo he again tried to push geet away but geet clinged to him.

Omg aap ki tabiat to thk hai.

Nahi ha wo thora

Hame pata tha aik din aye ga k apka ye haal hoga. She sat on his bed and started wailing.

Maan rolled his eyes inki kami reh gai thi

Sare drame mere hi life me q hai. He pushed geet away and got up.

Dadima me bilkul thk ho bus uthne ko dil nahi cha ra tha.

Oh acha. Or ye dev yaha q hai. Or ye aise q so ra hai.

By now geet woke up too,

Good morning maan

Morning

Maan me ap se poch ri ho ye aise yaha q so ra ha or aap mujhe bata re hai k morning.

Hahahahahaha phans gae subah subah

Tumhari waja se hi

Kia kaha apne

Mene kuch bhi to nahi

Nahi mene suna apne kuch kaaha

Arey kuch nahi kaha dadima aap jaiye me iskko le ker ata ho.

Jaldi aye hum ap dono ka wait ker re hai

Ji dadi

As soon as she left he jumped off the bed and tried waking dev up. He was calling his name again and again.

When geet came and started sprinkling water on dev

Geet ye kia ker ri ho.

Maan daikho na itna maza aye ga

Geet tum use hosh me ane do ge k nahi

Kia faida abhi behosh ho jae ga

bro

lo agya sambhalo apne bhai ko me time note krti ho

kis cheez ka

is k behosh hone ka hahahaha

geet shutup

dev tum thk ho

bro plz tell me raat ko wo sab nahi hua tha I was dreaming

geet smacked him from behind.

Maan ye to bohat hi fattu hai

Geet hatto waha se

Ahhh

Dev screamed and ran out of the room.

Maan followed him calling his name again and again

Geet ran after him laughing madly

As they crossed the dining area and went out of the house dadima cdnt help but stare at what just happen.

PRECAP:
tere to..

Geet stop it maan was holding her from back it was getting hard for him to control.

Maan is takle to to maza chaka k rakho gi

Mr khurrana ye kia ker re hai aap.

Maan looked at him helplessly

Ye nai yoga exercise hai aap bhi kijye sehat k liye bohat achi hoti hai.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet getting more and more naughty😉 ek minute... are I am the first one to comment!!! now I will faint like Dev😆
Bechara Maan aaj toh bade bure phase, ek toh subha subha dadi ka chakkar and Geet is completely out of control!!! precap is also not promising for him😉
Edited by maanhar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆 poor MAan

loved the update

continue super soon

love
Sana
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww awesomeee
n i think dev will faint in 15 sec
but awesomeee
n wonderinggg wt drama will unfold in frnt of dadiii
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome brilliant part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

Geet getting more and more naughty😉 ek minute... are I am the first one to comment!!! now I will faint like Dev😆

Bechara Maan aaj toh bade bure phase, ek toh subha subha dadi ka chakkar and Geet is completely out of control!!! precap is also not promising for him😉

hhahahaha
thankyou so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rofl!!!
Dev ki tu tabait set kar di hai Geet naye
OMG!!!! yoga
Poor Maan i so pity on him
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
sam so love u
4 this update.thank god
u update this otherwise
i start thinking that may
sam already forget to write
all these ff.u write so
wonderfully this .u bring
smile on my face again.
sam always remember
that what u can do
nobody else can so
u cam make a laugh with
ur writing.that not all
can do. so love this update.
now please update others too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simm28

sam so love u

4 this update.thank god
u update this otherwise
i start thinking that may
sam already forget to write
all these ff.u write so
wonderfully this .u bring
smile on my face again.
sam always remember
that what u can do
nobody else can so
u cam make a laugh with
ur writing.that not all
can do. so love this update.
now please update others too

awww thankyou so much
that is so sweet.
i will be updating regularly now its just that i might not send pm daily so you guys wd have to keep a check on all the threads daily.
as i dont have so much time these days and sending 200 plus pm daily i cant so i will be sending pms weekly and updates daily. plz convey this msg to others too if you find them on my thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazin update luvd it
poor dev lol he keeps on faintin
n poor maan 😆 lol
luv da precap
plzz cont soon x fanx 4 da pm

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