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Magicia

@magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: sldeeps
oh my god!!!... buddy u r successful in explaining that Geet tried to get rid of her guilt by accepting god's punishment...u r very much true in telling that experiencing punishment would shed away the guilt feeling👏

Originally posted by: Danina
wow..amazing;D
glad Geet is happy;D
loved it;D
continue soon;D
thanks for the pm;D

Thank you for quick commnets

so finally relievd ..

Danina Thanks ...

Buddy as usual lub you

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Auj Halim

@Moon002

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Posted: 13 years ago

#802

ahhh that was quiet a relief...

That was a brilliant update!!!!

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Magicia

@magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
understand ur view and it's realistic
actually this is very hard to as woman like geet being raped it's
don't worry I have full faith on u and u showed us realistic but
on req for u
just beat that animal sajjan sing by maan or whoever right left center
give him punishment like he or his family or any one think 1000 times before doing such things
continue soon
kya aur ek part milege

😉

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Magicia

@magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
hey dear..there is nothing to be nervous of...
this was perfect..u r doing complete justice to the story..
on cant expect the story to be fairytale like...coz life is anything but a fairytale...as u said...all i care is a happy ending..
i mean its really sad and disgusting to see that this things happened to her...but u have done complete justice and made it look realistic...so def i am not complaining..had it been like maan popping all of a sudden and saving her from sajjan, it wud have looked very filmy...
i am glad that this incident has just made her stronger from inside and shows nothing can break her...
i am sure maan will accept her no matter what, coz he love unconditionally and irrevocably...
so from my side this update is simply fabulus..
so just chillax

10/10 for u

reva

and for your comment my love 10/10 .i have no words to explain ..because after posting it i just bite all my nails ...lol'

so much happy that i feel my herat fill and not getting words to commnet

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Magicia

@magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Loved both the parts...

Amazing.

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.

thx vidushi the brilliant women or educated ?whats the meaning?

Dilsay she is still in havely

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Magicia

@magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
understand ur view and it's realistic
actually this is very hard to as woman like geet being raped it's
don't worry I have full faith on u and u showed us realistic but
on req for u
just beat that animal sajjan sing by maan or whoever right left center
give him punishment like he or his family or any one think 1000 times before doing such things
continue soon
kya aur ek part milege

😉

Edited by magicia - 13 years ago

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
understand ur view and it's realistic
actually this is very hard to as woman like geet being raped it's
don't worry I have full faith on u and u showed us realistic but
on req for u
just beat that animal sajjan sing by maan or whoever right left center
give him punishment like he or his family or any one think 1000 times before doing such things
continue soon
kya aur ek part milege

😉

Superman is just wore his pants ... now he is going to wear ..hmm u know...he is getting ready