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Posted: 13 years ago
I Know all are Mad At me ..So you Read the post below it ...Its a must please dont ignore ..i want equal number of likes on my both posts ..to make me feel myself that i am able to explain at least a little ...

And this story is a complete one ...

I cant easily modify it ..still i did ...to my maximum ...but the rape is inevitable ...



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Chapter 31:The Blessing Of Getting Punished

18 August 2011

13:45


Story Intro

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

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  hey ..its so cute Right ..Not deleting
Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

A Heart Like Crystal


Story Intro

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

 Please Join My Event Here following this link on facebook

to get Daily Updates ...Love U ..Please Motivate me With your Likes as It became essential to survive here in India Forum since Maaneet gone off air  

Please Visit My Blog 

If you Really want to Read This FF

I have been waited for you enough Here ..Less likes ..and ..ok 


press likes ..and come to my blog ...OK 😆

Blog Link ...


Its all Pink Beware !😳


  hey ..its so cute Right ..Not deleting

Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god!!!... buddy u r successful in explaining that Geet tried to get rid of her guilt by accepting god's punishment...u r very much true in telling that experiencing punishment would shed away the guilt feeling👏
Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..amazing;D
glad Geet is happy;D
loved it;D
continue soon;D
thanks for the pm;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear..there is nothing to be nervous of...
this was perfect..u r doing complete justice to the story..
on cant expect the story to be fairytale like...coz life is anything but a fairytale...as u said...all i care is a happy ending..
i mean its really sad and disgusting to see that this things happened to her...but u have done complete justice and made it look realistic...so def i am not complaining..had it been like maan popping all of a sudden and saving her from sajjan, it wud have looked very filmy...
i am glad that this incident has just made her stronger from inside and shows nothing can break her...
i am sure maan will accept her no matter what, coz he love unconditionally and irrevocably...
so from my side this update is simply fabulus..
so just chillax

10/10 for u

reva
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Posted: 13 years ago
understand ur view and it's realistic
actually this is very hard to as woman like geet being raped it's
don't worry I have full faith on u and u showed us realistic but
on req for u
just beat that animal sajjan sing by maan or whoever right left center
give him punishment like he or his family or any one think 1000 times before doing such things
continue soon
kya aur ek part milege
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved both the parts...

Amazing.

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the PM n lovely update ...
I am releived to see Geet coming bc to her normal state ...
I have a queston is she still living in the Haveli?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan jaldi karo yaar, Geet ko bachake le jaawo...

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