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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

i am very sorry..but i only can give monthly update and promise that from now it will be big one

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

will update from january monthly twice promise

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Hmm...I am roaming around this forum and accidentally land here.But thank God!! I have found a interesting story.👏Right now I have just read its CS,Introductions,Theme and Chapter 1.Its awesome👏
...then Shatrupa called him in a low voice ..'excuse me sir'...but still didn't get response...at last she became a bit louder..'sir'...and then at last station master woke up...but as he was still not awoke properly..he couldn't locate why a beautiful girl is calling him..he thought he is still having a day dream...now Shatarupa lost her patience..and became louder..'are you listening to me ?'...now the middle aged man gained his consciousness fully and took his spectacles..and observed her again...he understood that the girl is coming outside from town...though she is wearing Churidar-kurta..but her dress up says she is coming from big city like Kolkata..but he couldn't understood what the girl is doing in this remote town..he was confused..'madum you.'...'yes me..waiting for your daydream to end...Shatrupa is impatient now...'sorry actually i am not well these days' station master is really ashamed'...'say mam how can i help you?'
@Blue is wow nad @Red is funny but fantastic.

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

bapre u??? how did u find this???😕..thanks 4 comment

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Nice second part👏But father-son conversation became little melodramatic I guess. But overall you are really great.

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

😊Third part has three different thing...
1.Shatarupa-station master-Devu.well its little mischeivious but I like it😉
2.Roro-Dev.part little melodramatic but very good.
3.Ahem.ahem...Mr. BasuMallik is late forty and Mrs.Baumallika in late thirty...when they got married?????
and now I need some 10-15days break to read and comment because I have something personal reason.so I am very Sorry in advance for be lated.

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Swati Agrawal

@swati_prithvi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Hey dear..
it's really a long tym..
we want ud..
kab de rhi ho?

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi
Hey dear..
it's really a long tym..
we want ud..
kab de rhi ho?

actually m waiting desperately to see rajat onscreen..tab tak m not getting the urge of updating..but january mein pakka dungi

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A for Arpita

@A_for_Arpita

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

~::~ RT-MC FFs Awards Voting Starts Now ~::~
VOTE PLZ😊

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Swati Agrawal

@swati_prithvi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

actually m waiting desperately to see rajat onscreen..tab tak m not getting the urge of updating..but january mein pakka dungi

ab to January b khatm hone wala he..
kb milegi ud...

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