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Posted: 12 years ago
at last updated..don't kill me for boredom or leave the ff , from next update you will get what you desired
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res

It's quiet long update, will read nd commentb

Well well I m v happy to see this pm in my inbox, thanks for updating it.

My Shari is in India nd my hero...

Oops Shatu ka hero USA me 😭

Jaldi se mila do na inhe... Tab jake asli maja aayega

Nd its better if I don't say anything abt ur writting, qki me chah kar bhi itna accha nahi likh patip
Edited by samu_khamkar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
awesome
fabulously written👏

but but but
no rtmc scene😭

i know story establish karni padti hai.
script strong hogi tthen aage jake mazza aayega
koi baat nahi "jab tak hai jaa" hum RTMC ke romance scene ke liye wait karenge. thoda jyada filmy ho gaya😆
Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya mast ud it was
loved it
loved it
res karna padega di
ud itna long tha to cmnt v to long hona chahiye na
will edit it 2morrow
luv u

res

hiii di dekha mein aa gyi apna comnt lekar

pehle yeh btao ki boring update aise hote h...to interesting kise kehte h????/
tell me???tell me???

chodo rehne do mein btatati hun

im in love with ff
especially with raj n rupa😳

rupa was sweet n rajjj😡mr.attitudeyyy kahin ka😳but i like him

kyunki jb rt gusse me hota h ya attitude dikata h to bada hi cute lagta g by god😆

so our rupa is dance teacher here wow accha h raj ko bhi dikha degi thoda bhot😆

waise bhi rajjj kuch dino baad uske ishhaaaro par nachne wala h😳

feel bad for debuuu...he is gud boy n discipline kitna h bande me😲bahar hi khada rha

mein aisi bilkul nhi hun😆

" Miss Shatarupa Mukherjee, dance teacher of Kalabhavan, you were supposed to join last week , isn't it?? " Krishna madam threw the question to Rupa while checking her certificates.
for the first time after coming Ichagunj Rupa faced feelings of hesitation and awkwardness.(lo bolo awkward to feel karegi hi na jab bechari bacchi se aisi khadus teacher baat karegi😡)

Rupa suddenly felt thirsty as her throat dried (mere saath bhi aisa hua tha ek baar jb mera viva ho rha tha last yrbut wo teacher bhot acchi thi 😃)


"alright , you must know its not a govt. job as Kalabhavan is private institution unlike the school, in spite of being school's part.so you won't be offered a govt. teacher's scale..your monthly salary will be not more than 16,000 k ..if you are agree then sign on the letter "(congooo rupaaa👏)


. Mr. Dev sits one corner of Roro's bed. Roro's usually has tight sleep so he didn't get disturbed with dad's presence. Mr.Dev affectionately stroke son's head. No matter how arrogantly Roro behaves when he is awaking but in sleeping he looks like same innocent and beautiful kid what he looked 10 years back. (jb rt sota h to bhot cuteee lagta h😳...actually i loved this scene vry much...where his father sat near his bed lovingly so cute..our rajj is apple of everyone's eyesss')

soon he became the apple of our rupa's eyes also😳

me waiting for that time


rajjj ke dad ki to badi hi dhukh bhari kahani thi...n the best part is that ki aapne bhot acche se likha h diii...it reflects his emotions,pain n love for his scene

aap bhot accha likte ho dii

abhi mein aapki bhi fan ho gyi hun

mene yeh part 2 baar pada just becozzz i love ur writing

but mein aapki itni tareef kyun kar rhi hun aapko pata h na????

aap bhot smart ho diii samajh gyi na???😳

love u a lot
ud soon

muahhh😃


Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww finaly i got ur up wow
wow what a description yaar,i found myself in debs memory
again our rtmc dint meet
now can i ask u for how many months i have to wait for ur next up as i think there will be a romantic scene in ur next up
plz up as soon as u can or i'l say tomorrow only plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
aye haye di apne mere nanhe nanhe dil ko tukdo main baant diya...dekho kaise bikhre pade h...
pure update main debu n raj k dad ki history thi...that was nice no doubt but still main jiska wait kar rahi thi...wo tho mujhe dur dur tak nahi dikhayi diya...raj n rupa kaha the?????
acha bahut drama ho gaya ab thoda serious...
update was really nice...description was too good...but plz next part main meeting...waiting it for so long...
update soon
luv u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
waise ek baat bolu raj ke dad ki kya solid thinking h...i mean he already new that their is someone in ichagunj who will change roro to rituraj...kya baat h...maan gaye boss...apni hone wali DIL p itna believe...
n anu...wah kya baat h us zamane main bhi itni himmat dikhayi n bhag k shaadi ki...
n roro blames his father for his grandmother's death...haila raj unhone thodi na mara h...
poor deb was so helpless...but anu is really a nice wife...
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Posted: 12 years ago
radhika i told na that part would b boring but kya kare it was necessary warna tumhe raj k har activities ko kaise justify kar pati?? aur nahi rupa k steps plan kar pati ichagunj aur unke logo k idea diye bina

aur mr.dev ko lagta hai bas k achanak roro k aise apne root k paas jane mein koi na koi destiny to zaroor hai..aur vo wish karte hai k aisa koi ho jaise unke liye roro k mom hai..nothing else..

sultana aw dear thank you and i will update on mid october..pakka
Edited by aru_86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aru Di apne pm mein ish update ko boring kaha? Kya di jish update mein alu chachari fulko luchi n rassogolla ho o update boring kaise ho sakta ha?? Apko pata ha mujhe ye sab kitna pasand ha? Fer kabhi boring kaha na to dekhlena...

Chalo abhi khane ko side mein rakhke me back 2 update... Outstanding n mindblowing description di mujhe to sab apne ankhoo k samne dikhraha tha khub valo di loved the update next part thoda jaldhi dena ok...?

Love u di...btw di aap bengali ho kya??
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Posted: 12 years ago
make ur promise pakka as i have already started counting the dates nd yes is destiny connectoin ke baat ate hi hamara dil garden garden hogaya nd plzzz yeh up boring nahi hai as ihave finished my 4th reading

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