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Posted: 13 years ago
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y r u making us wait for sooo long itz nt fair...plzzz update...
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nice concept...do continue soon...do pm me when u update next pls...
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Part-41

Soory Guys for late updating...😭😭

Part-41

Mr. & Mrs. Khurana come to the Malhotra Menssion'..

Mr. Malhotra: Welcomes them'

Heer & Prem takes the blessings from Mr & Mrs. Khurana

Mr.Khurana: so how is my Hitler Now?

Mr.Malhotra: She is fine now'.

Heer: yes uncle she is fine and she is coming downstairs'.

Mrs. Khurana: Did she ate something from last night

Mrs. Malhotra: No just take a glass of juice'

Ramukaka: Comes with breakfast''.

Mrs. Malhotra: Kaka Geet is waked up can u plese give her a glass of juice'

Raka: yea sure'

Kaka: brings the Juice for Geet'

Geet: Noticed him.. but ignores..

Kaka: beta I bring Juice for u'

Geet: Din't reply'

Kaka: beta what happened to u '. Are u alright'

Geet: again din't reply' she ignores him and went downstairs'

Kaka: what happened to her' she never behave like this befor 'what I had done why is she ignoring me

Geet comes down'..

Mr. Khurana: So hitler how are u now'

Geet: I'am fine Papa'

Prem: saali ji aap ne tho humsab ko dara hi diya tha'

Geet: sorry Jiju..

Heer: tu soory kyun bol rahi hain teri koi mistake thodi naa hain'

Kaka also comes downstairs..

Mrs. Malhotra: saw the Glass of Juice is full'..

Mrs. Malhotra: geet u din't have the juice..

Geet: nahi Maa man nahi kar reha'

Mrs.Khurana: beta it good for u'

Mr.Khurana: haan agar hum hote naa tho humko ko death kar pila deti hai '

Mr.Khurana: takes the glass from the tray and gives it to Geet..

Geet: Papa I don't like to have..

Mr. malhotra: Beta aaj tho koi bhi tumko nahi chodnae wala'

Geet: ok'. She take sthe Glass and gulp it'

Geet: now happy'

Everyone together: very happy'.

Ramukaka: smile to see all this but hurt also as she talking to everyone but not to him'

Ramukaka: went inside the Kitchen'

Kaka: akhir kyun vo mujhse baath nahi kar rahi' aisa kya hua hain'

Heer comes to kitchen: kaka breakfast ready hain kya'

Kaka: haan beta bas abi lagata hun'

Heer: ok '

In Khurana Menssion:

Maan Yea Mom Dad subha subha kahan chale gaye'

Dad itni jaldi office tho nahi jaa sakte' or agar office bhi gaye honge tho Mom kahan gayi'

Call kar ke puchta hun' he calls'

Maan: Dad aap kahn hain'

Mr. Khurana: beta hum Geet key gar par hain'.

Maan: ok'

Mr. Khurana: u are also coming''..

Maan me

Mr. Khurana: yes come Heer & Prem are also here'.

Maan: ok I am coming'..

In Malhotra Menssion'..

Everyone having breakfast'

Geet is also sitting there but not eating anything'..

Heer: chutki tut ho kuch kaa hii nahi rahi'

Geet: Di mera man nahi hain' Mian baad main kaa lunga'.

Mrs. Malhotra: beta jut have one tost u also have to take medicen'

Geet: But Maa I'am fine now, so no need to take medicen now'

Mr. Khurana: beta jab hum bolte hain ki hum theek hain tho tum maanti hoo'

Geet: but Papa'..

Mr.Khurnana: NO if no but sirf jutt.. and all laughs''.

Heer: auncle you are right with a huge laugh'

Geet: its not that funny'.

Heer: chutki teri tabiyat kharab hain naa is liye tujhe hasi nahi aa rahi iska matlab tu theek nahi hain' chal tost kha or medicen le le' nahi tho tu normal kaisey hogi aur tujhe aisey aache wale jokes par hasi bhi nahi aayegi..

Heer and mr.Khurana make a high five and laugh..

Geet: main upper jaa rahi hun agar aap logon ney mera majak bana hain tho..

Heer: ok ok soory but u have to take ur medicen'

Geet: ok I will'

Heer: wriks at Mr. Khurana and smiles'

In the kitchen'

Ramukak with selfthought'

Yea Geet ko hua kya hain' yea aaj phele vali Geet nahi hain'

Kuch na kuch tho hua hain'. Jo yea sab sey chupa rahi hai'

Outside Maan also comes to Malhotra Menssion'

Maan greet Mr. & Mrs. Malhotra'

And meet Heer and Prem and relaxed to saw Geet fine'

He said hi' to Geet but Geet din't answer him'

Geet ignores him' and leaves to her room'

Heer: chutki tu kahan jaa rahi hain'

Geet: dii Room main' I'am having hedache

Heer: ok go to room and take rest'

Geet: went up to her room

Maan: yea itni chup.. phele tho yea mujhsey ladney kaa koi maukaa nahi chodti thi phir aaj kya hua'

Mrs. Malhotra asks ramukaka to give Geet her medicen'

Ramukaka: main'

Mrs.malhotra: haan aap' vo aap kii baat jaaror manegi'

Kaka: ok'.

He went up to her room'.

Geet noticed him' but ignores'

Kaka: beta yea tumhaari medicen have it'

Geet: din't said any thing'

Kaka: Geet now its enough I am noticing u from last night u are ignoring me and very rude to me what happened'

Geet: u asking me what happened as u don't know anything'

She get up from her bead'

Kaka: what are u saying I'am getting it'

Geet: waaoo so innocent'.

Kaka: can u make it clear'

Geet: why did u hided the truth from me'

Kaka: Shoked'

Kaka: with hesitating voice what truth'

Geet: u hides that Maan's real name from me '.

Kaka: shoked' how did u know that'

Geet: so u hide it me.. right'

Kaka: beta but listen to me'

Geet: no.. don't want to listen to u' leave from here'

Maan also comes there'

Maan saw Geet in anger and taking very rudly to Kaka'

Maan: Geet why are u talking like this to Kaka'.

Geet: I'am not talking to u so u leave plese..

Maan: no I'will not... how can u talk like this to Kaka'

Geet: its non of your business' its between me and Kaka and u r nobody who can say anything between us'

Maan is shocked to hear this'

Everybody come upstairs to hear the noise'.

Prem: Kya hua' geet tum itna cilla kyun rahi hain

Geet: jiju bol do apney bhai sey mujhe baat karney kii koi jaarorat nahi hain'

Heer: par baat kya hain'

Prem: champ tu bata kya baat hain'

Maan: still in shocked as what happened to her' she never talked him like this'..

Prem: Champ bata na kya hua'

Mr. Malhotra: kaka kya hua hain'

Kaka: kuch nahi' bas Geet kii tabiyat theek nahi hain naa tho thodi irritate ho gayi hain

Geet: shouts aap sab loog please yahan sey jaaoo'.

Mrs.Malhotra: I think humko isko akele chood dena chahiiye'

Prem: haa Maa aap theek keh rahe hain'

Everybody leaves''.

But Maan is still there'.

He can't belive his ears that Geet talk him like that'

He is still looking at Geet with his teary eyes'

Geet also having tears in her eyes'

Maan in his heart talking to her why Geet is iam nothing to you' I have no one to u' I thought u also love me'.

Geet in her heart' why champ why u did this to me again u hurt me' why why'

Both are having an eyelock but having pain instead of love''

Geet shut the door on the face of Maan''

Maan was hurt and having tears in his eyes'..

Geet in her room and crying remembering all the movements they spend together''.

On the background song plays'..

Dil jude bina hi tut gaye hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne

Maan Shows having tears in his eyes'. Outside Geet's room

Baar baar rod akhiyan tainu jo na vekh sakiyan
Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne

Geet is througing everything ' in frustration'

Maan on the Stairs lost in his own world

Kataan main ki ve din teri soth tere bin
Main toh jiya na mara

Maan comes downstairs'.

Prem calls him but he din't even heard him'

And goes outside Malhotra Menssion

Geet on her bed and crying'.

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna

Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

Geet is shown crying and Maan in the joggers Park''

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage reee

Suna Lage Reee

In the night Maan is in his room having Geet's breclate in his hand and watching it'.


Roothi rothi sari raatein
Fikhe fikhe sare din
Virani si Virani hai
Tanhai si tanhai hai
Aur ek hum hai pyaar ke bin
Har Palchin

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Geet seeing snaps of Maan of Heer's & Prem Marrage' still crying'..

Patharo ki is nagari mein
Pathar chehre Pathar dil
Phirta hai mara mara
Kyun rahon mein tu awara
Yahan na hoga Kuch hasil mere dil


Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage


Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage reee'

Precap: Ramukaka outsides Geet Room'..

Geet dint' answer'

Kaka: tumko pura sach jaana hoga Geet''. Aada sach hamesa dangerous hota hain'. So u have to know the whole truth'.

Geet: opens the door'''

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Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Nice part!
so sad!
cont soon!
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
poor geet cries her heart out

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally you updted.

Emotional part...

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update. This reaction was expected from Geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update! Can't wait for more! Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry Sorry for such a late reply, you updated next part and I am giving reply of the previous one!

Coming to the update😃
It was so emotional
Geet was rude to kaka, but the thing which is the main part is the pain of both maan and geet😭
It felt so bad for them😭
Hope geet comes to know about the truth early😃

Edited by murphy369 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sad update. loved reading it. poor maaneet. precap seems to b interesting. hope kaka clears everything. poor maan he was so much hurt vn she said that he is nobody.
Edited by ammu5 - 13 years ago

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