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LAST CONVERSATION

Zindagi bhi kitni ajeeb hoti hai na,kan kya kaise ho jaye samajh hi nahi aata.ek hi pal me aapka sab kuch kho jaata hair eh jaati hai to sirf yaaden……..

Mrs.Ridhima Armaan mallik. ye sab ke liye ek naam hoga,par mere liye ye meri zindagi….

Meri zindagi jaise ek khwab aur uske do atoot hisse meri angel meri dil ki dhadkan meri pyariii si gidiya arima aur mera armaan……

Bohut khush thi main apni zindagi me par nahi socha tha ki agle mod par kya ho jaega..

FLASHBACK

SUNDAY-10:30 am 26th may 2010

Ri- armaaannn,,utho na….kitni der ho gayi hai..

Ar-mmm baskettt sone do na-pulling her down and hugging her…

Ri-armaannn hathooo tum sote raho mujhe bohut kaam hai…..

Ar- kaam to hota rahega abhi mujhe sona hai…

Ri- to so na mujhe kyon pakad ke kyon rakha hai.

Ar- wo kya hai na jaan ke tumhare bian mujhe neend hi nahi aati aur waise bhi tumne hi to mujhe raat ko sone nahi diya…bolo…blo

Ridz goes red with his comments………blushing badly……

Ri -Armaan tum hatho mujhe tum se baat hi nahi karna…

Ar-baba sryyy agar tum mujhse naaraz hoke ruthjaogi to meri ye zindagi mujhse ruth jaegi,tumhare bina to tumhara armaan kuch nahi..

Ridz keeps her hand on his mouth and with teary eyes..

Ri- tumhe bohut maza aata hai na mujhe rulane me…

Ar-nai baba mujhe to tumhe pyar karne me mazaa aata hai..

Just then the door opened and their angel came running calling his dada and started jumping over armaan.

Armaan took him in his arms and kissed her cheeks sloppily making her giggle.ridhima just smiled at the seen and went to make breakfast…

Just then armaan came talking in his phone..

Ar-o.k main aaj shyam tak pohuch jaounga aap ready rahiega…

Armaan came and hugged her from back

Ri- kya hua jaan kisse baat kar rahe the?

Ar- wo ridhima Mr mehra ka call aaya tha mujhe urgently kolkata jaana hoga…ek din ke liye.parso 12 baje taka a jounga…..

Ri-pakka parso aajaoge .

Ar- ha baba tumhare aur angel ke bagair main reh sakta hoon kya….

Chalo ab packing karte hai ..

After packing challo basket main nikalta hoon ,ridz just hugged him tightly and started crying

Ar-kya hua jaan mere itne saare moti kyon gira rahi ho..hmmm.

Ri- pata nahi armaan mera jee bohut ghabra raha hai

Ar- are mera bachcha kuch nahi hoga main jaldi waapis aa jaunga tumhare pass pakk.a

She smiled,angel came running

Ar- chalo meli angel dada ko bye bye kissi do aur mumma ka dhyaan rakhna unhe akele ghumne mat jaane dena..angel giggled along with ridhima..armaan left…

MONDAY-11:30pm 26th may 2010

Ar-ha baba ab nikal raha hoo,10 min baad train niklegi aur kal din me me aapke paas hounga..

Ri- jaan kal din me tum flight se kyon nahi aa rahe.

Ar- jaan flight khali nahi hai aur mujhe tumse dur nahi raha jaega.isliye maine ye kya naam hai gyaneshwari ki ticket kara li.

Ri-she blushe.s

Ar- chalo main rakhta hoon..love uu

Ri- love u too..

FLASHBACK ENDS

Ri- us waqt to main bas ye intezaar kar rahi thi ki kab ye raat khatm jho aur mera armaan mere saath ho..par mujhe nahi pata tha ki mere liye ek sapna hi bankar reh jaega.

FLASHBACK

TUESDAY-01:30 am.. 26th may 2010

Ridz woke up from a horrible dream sweating badly ..she tried to sleep but can't.so she switched on the tv….flipping channels she saw….

News- ek aur bhayanka haadsa.kolkata se Mumbai jaa rahi gyaneshwari train daril hoke maal gadi se takra gayi…kaiyon ki jaan jaane ki khabar aa rahi hai………aap humare saath bane rahiya aage ki jaankari ke liye…

Ridz just remained still not wanting to believe what she heard.

Her phone rang…it was armaans call,she sighed in relief and at once picked up the caal but once look at the screen pata nahi kyon uska dil maan hi nahi raha tha phone uthane ke liye..

Ri- hello…armaan…tum is waqt to train me hoge..network kaise aa raha hai…

Hello…..armaaan…she tried to lie

Ar- ri..dhhi…maaa.

His voice was weak..,listening to her voice he understood she had watched the tv…

Ri- Okay what joke is it this time?"

Ar-"No..ne… now..."

Ri-"Well that was just sick..."

Ar-"You really think its a joke"

Ri- main ..jaanti ..hoon ..tum.. phir.. mazaa.k kar rahe ho na mujhe sataane ke liye main ,aisi aawaz me baat kar rahe ho……jao main tumse baat nahi karoongi..

Ar- ja..aan

Ri- jaan u come home then we will talk.

Ar-"I can't... even if I '.want to..."

Ri- tum kab tak aaoge..

Ar- main… to …tumhare..saath hi hoon.

Ri- meethi meethi baaten mat karo..(tears flowing slowly from her eyes)

Ri- to khaane me kya khaoge?

Ar- tum..mera..fa..v ban..aogi..

Ri- haa baba..i love u

Ar- mee.. too… tv dekha.

Ri- ha baba kisi train accident ke bare me bata rahe hai..

Ar-ja…aa..n he said with lot of difficulty..

Ri- kya???

AR- apna….aur an..gel.. k.a ..khyaal…rakhna…

Ri- armaan tum believe nahi karoge tum bhi apna laptop me dekho accident ke bare me bata raha hai…dekho na jaldi….tum logo ki train to raaste me rok diye honge na isliye tumhe net work mil raha hai phir to train late ho jaegi ek kaam karti hoon kal main tumhe station pick kar ne aa joungi ….

Ar- l..ov.e.. .u .ba..s..ket…

Ri- (while crying )l..uv..u.. to……

FLASHBACK ENDS…

AAJ PURE TEEN SAAL HO GAYE HAI USE GAYE HUE PAR WO MERE SAATH HI HAI MERE ANGEL AUR MERE RIDHAAN KE ROOP ME.mujhe khushi hai ki maine usse wo aakhri baat bilkul waise hi ki taaki use aur takleef na ho..kyonki main jaanti hoon ki mere ansoon use takleef pohchaate hai.

HAAN MAIN PREGNANT THI US WAQT AUR MERA ARMAAN HUMESHA MERE SAATH HI RAHEGA…MERA PYAAR KE ROOP ME……..

The end

Guys don't bash me for writing this emotional one I just wanted to potray the feelings of people who loose their loved once in these horrible accident.i know this because I was there in gyaneshwari when this accident on 28th may 2010 ,only 5 of us survived In that compartment.i saw people crying and mourning over the dead bodies.

So plz pray so that this should not happen again…..

Do comment and tell if u like it or not

With lots of love


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anumeha_rajat thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really heart touching...

beautifully written..

gr888 job...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Your very lucky that u survived...God bless them..Fab OS...I loved it yahh :)
-Samica
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg that was so sad! im so happy u survived! i'm so sorry you had to witness and go through all that pain though..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!! This was so much emotional..
U've written everything so beautifully..
The last conversation of AR seemed so normal but it held back all the pain through which they were going..
MY goodness!! U were there in that gyaneshwari accident.That must have been a terrible experience.
I wish all this may never happen to anyone...
This OS was great..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww
i got no words
just wonderfulll
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

really heart touching...

beautifully written..

gr888 job...

thnx for the pm...



thankyou so much u appreciated my work.
it was my first attemt so i was vry scared
thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

omg that was so sad! im so happy u survived! i'm so sorry you had to witness and go through all that pain though..


i know it was sad but many people have to go through this pain of losing their loved ones.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

OMG!! This was so much emotional..
U've written everything so beautifully..
The last conversation of AR seemed so normal but it held back all the pain through which they were going..
MY goodness!! U were there in that gyaneshwari accident.That must have been a terrible experience.
I wish all this may never happen to anyone...
This OS was great..


thnx i just wanted to potray the feeling s of AR ..
thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very sad ff dear...i was crying ...bhagwan karey kisi ke saath aisa tragedy na ho...plz. write a happy os with ar and their kids...
punam

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