FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

i know right... tall...sexy ... muscular...suave...with stylish square framed glasses...curly hair... sexy stubble... husky voice... 😍☺️

you know what Jaz, i feel like i just developed the character of Adi Kent for you 😲 now you just have to put it into words 🤣

lol...how am i supposed to get any work done when im just drooling over Adi Kent here...but you know what im picturing...Adi in the locker room wearing just his scrub bottoms and Geet entering...and then...bare chested hug 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: ajenn

Jaz Welcome back dear!!!!!! thank you!! 😳

Amazing update!!!! Worth to wait and read.
Truly love Sam's character.
Her past was really bad and terrible.
Plus am sad to hear, she had two miscarriage.
Maan was right at the moment to give a hand.
Thou their marriage was based on needs but am sure things would have change by years. yes...definitely..im glad that you understand that thought they started off one way...their relationship evolved along the way which is only natural...i had the best time penning down Sam's character...her life and her past...i really love her too!! 😃
Love in the air, I guess. I would love to hear that part as well. Is there any???? you mean SaMaan love story or Adeet? well...either way...you will get to see both...maybe in the next update...but not sure...it will come eventually though...how these two relations changed...😉
But am kinda confuse as why did she said if Geet was back 5 mths ago, Sam would have step aside from Maan's life?
Its looks obvious that Maan-Sam are happy with their life, but why Sam says that.
Is it because of guilty feelings?? not necessarily guilty feelings as in she did something wrong...but feelings that maybe if she wasnt in the picture these two people who loved each other so immensely would have a shot at the future that eluded them...like she said...she feels she owes her lifes happiness to geet...she feels that maybe somehow she took the life that was geets and made it hers...thats why Geet said it was destiny 😳
Thanks for the wonderful update dear.
Truly loved it... thank you so much!! 🤗

Originally posted by: ansah

Loved the update as always !!!!! thank you so much! means a lot! 😳

Ummm Sam is a darling...total sweetheart and I am sure going to love her if I haven't yet done...

Married...NO..NO happily married with a baby to come ... something don't sit right there 😳😳😳

Oh ya I will always stick to my words !!! Sam and Maan are just putting up all this as in putting up an act...well you hang in there with your delusions as long as you like...he he...have fun...😆

Adeet !!! waiting for their part/start that is for sure in next update!! 😉

*Sighs* whatever makes me happy

Originally posted by: GeetHSP

- Sigh...with your little message I got reminded right off the bat that Maaneet are not together. Thats sad...especially after reading the epilogue to the Best Friends OS. he eh...yeah...thats why i put the disclaimer...read at own risk..c.uz i dont want complaints...which i got regardless

- Geet...our poor baby. How she must be feeling...that is just terrible. Although I feel really happy that she can be strong about this and even go as far as to be sympathetic for Sameera. Way to go Geet! yes!! exactly...she's not some helpless girl who is about to cry over spilt milk...as a woman and a doctor...she feels for Sam because as a mature adult...she knows that sam, though married to maan, had nothing to do with Maneets split...which is what i love about her!! 😃

- You know whats weird? I'm kind of glad that they can behave like a normal husband and wife despite all that's happened. Even if there are a couple of awkward moments after. I mean, they shouldnt stop living their lives just because of some...problems that have happened in the past. If I'm sad its only because Geet couldn't be blessed with the same happiness that Maan has. Not that losing your baby is a good thing but you know, getting married and everything. just cuz she hasnt gotten married doesn't mean shes not happy or that she wont...😉...adi's a gem...he has a few tricks up his sleeve...😛...more on them next update...im excited to write about Geet with someone other than Maan 😃

- NOW I'm kind of angry...she doesn't have to keep reminding Geet over and over again. its one of those moments where you just cant keep your mouth shut cuz of your own curiosity..i know i've done it.!! ha ha...😆...and if she didnt...how would you know Samaan story? 😉

-"Maan and Geet may have had a past'but'they have no future," Geet said as she turned to leave.

I'm still so proud of her. i knew...KNEW that if no one else picked up on that line...YOU TOTALLY WOULD!!! 🤗 ...that has to be my favorite line in the update!!! 😃

- You know, after reading the end of Sameera and Geet's conversation I realized that Geet doesn't need to be married to live a happy life. She is already so independent and hard working...she's fine the way she is. And I love her for that :) However...this Adeet thing...I'm not too sure about. Well I guess Maan and Sameera have had their scenes so its only fair if Adi and Geet have their scenes too. oh...now jaz so proud...you figured out that geet's happiness is in the life she already leads and not the one she missed out on!! 👏...haye...*jaz cries kushi ki asoon!!*...😭...yes...Adi and Geet have their past as well...and...if i get my way...soon you'll be very proud of Adi...if not slightly impressed by him!! 😉

This is a really special FF Jaz. Not only because Maan and Geet arent together but the way you've shaped each character through their experiences and hardships. Its wonderful...thats all I can say. THANK YOU!!! thats what i love about this story because its not really about love...its about each character on his/her own...for the most part...all my stories always have maneet tied as one person...here...they are individuals...and i love that!! 😳...omg omg...guess what im listening to!! he eh...😉

Originally posted by: jnawaz

lol...how am i supposed to get any work done when im just drooling over Adi Kent here...but you know what im picturing...Adi in the locker room wearing just his scrub bottoms and Geet entering...and then...bare chested hug 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

^^ aare ruk yaar...kya kaar rahi hai...either he is Adi Kent or Adi Steamy...he cant very well be Adi Kent-Steamy or Adi Steamy-Kent now can he...or wait...could he? haw!
JAZ

Originally posted by: sruthi_m

Recently started reading your FF and a very different concept... Feeling sad that maneet weren't going to be together in this one😭...still trying myself to get out of their lost love(not sure if this is the right word..as I believe they still have love for each other...couldn't think of anything else too)

But still love to read this FF for the characters itself as they were protrayed very beautifully and for the conflicts and emotions involved and how they unfold in the end😊

well thank you for continuing...and i think your phrase "lost love" is somewhat accurate...because the DID love each other...but they dont now...more on that later in the upcoming updates...he he...looking forward to your future comments 😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: Limerance

Wonderful update Jaz! thank you yaar!! 😃
I'm not going to lie I was originally very devastated with the whole no Maaneet thing but no so much anymore. no problem with not liking Samaan or being upset that its not a Maneet story,..i mean...we are all crazy maneet fans...its only natural... 😉 Yes i admit I would love a happily ever after for my favorite couple but this story has made me realize a different perspective. You have brought some reality to this fictional story. Just like in real life nothing is ever perfect and thats what you have shown. Only because Geet and Maan at one point in time loved each other doesn't mean it can last based solely on that. Life is about choices and circumstances that we must deal with and a lot of the times they don't work out the way we planned but I believe at the end of it all everything works out one way or another. that is mainly what the point of this story has turned into...originally i had planned on bringing maneet together in the end...but as the story unfolded...it just didnt seem right to go down that path...the characters here are so different than in most stories...they are truly independent from each other...they are Maan and Geet...not Maneet...know what i mean...😳...things happen and life goes on...we cant do anything to change the past...so why dwell on it...right? 😊
I'm sure a part of Geet feels pain within but slowly she's moving on and I'm looking forward to it. of course a part of her hurts...but not like some people are making it out to be...she hurts but she not in crippling pain...know what i mean...😕 As for Sam I feel for her as surprising as it maybe for some to believe. The things she has gone through are unfortuante. And had Geet and Sam's roles been reversed a lot of people would no doubt feel the same way. if geet had been in sam's place the reaction to this story would have been completely different!! if sam had been geet and then geet been sam...i think most readers if not all would have been a lot more accepting to the story!! 😆It's also good to see Maan being a caring husband. I can't to see how the dynamics are in the upcoming updates. And especially looking forward to the next one especially since I want to read some Adeet now! some more of SaMaan's relationship to be revealed in the next update along with some important information about Adeet's past and how they came to become Adeet...so stay tuned 😉
Once again great job! :) thanks so much!!