FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 3

Originally posted by: love2_soma

im not happy with dis update...hw can maan do dis...im totaly heartbroken...i cant tolerate anyone in maan's life rather dan geet n dat too at dis extent...he's becoming father...if its before geet den i can tolerate it but not after geet in his life...its tooo mich fr me...
plz dont b angry or upset...ur update is lovely...but i told what i feel...actually i love maan n geet tooo much...so its impossible fr me to see dem in pain...i always want dem together as MAANEET not as MAAN n GEET separately...n saamera i maan's life getting so much importance is more dan anything fr me...im totally shatered...i thought just may b dey r posing as husband n wife but dey r really husband n wife...its reaaly tooo much fr me to digest...

if you cant tolerate it or are not happy...why are you reading...im asking because i want to know...so many people are complaining about the story which apparently hurts them and all that...why read something you dont enjoy...i dont get it...i really dont...and where did you see pain in Maan and Geet? confusion...yes, by all means...but pain...except for a few instances in the earlier updates...they arent in pain...geet isnt dying for maan and maan isnt dying for geet...how can maan not give sameera importance...SHE"S HIS WIFE!! dear lord...im going insane!

JAZ

Originally posted by: mchopra

Ok done..and by god u saddist lady i need to read remembrance also word by word..i just scrolled and last line he set the fire to the pyre..and that dialogue..i was like ek aur..and i started crying..so i need to read that too..but that i can do tom..hehe

oh...you havent read it properly and yeh haal hai...eeks...sit with 2 boxes of tissues...he he...phir i want proper comment!! 😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Haila ye kaise hua! :O Bookmarking 😆

And I shall book a ticket to Cali the day you decide to kill Maan in HS.

Z

hey...dont tell me...tell shreya...she holds the fate of Maan in her hands alone...so go harass her!! 😆...vaise...IM DYING...DYING for your comments on EVERYTHING 😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Oh Oh Congos on thread 2 ! 🥳 Here's a gift .. a yummilicious Maan .. don't you just feel like eating him up!?

JAZ DROOLING!!! 😍..i want him!! only GC can do that barely-there smile that has us going weak in the knees!!
JAZ

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

This is what comes to mind, when Adi Kent is mentioned 😍








Jaz, Adi Kent has to have a sexy stubble... ☺️

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ok i'll stop there 😍😍😍

😲 are you trying to make me hyperventilate!? but raaz ki baath bataoon...i see the same thing!! he he
JAZ

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Wow...Jaz this was a great update...a lot of stuff makes sense now. My heart really went out to Geet...not only have to meet Maan's wife, but to find that they are pregnant and treat her as well...gotta say that's one STRONG lady there...what composure she maintained through out the whole check-up ordeal. My GOD...how difficult must it be for her...her dreams of becoming Maan's wife...of carrying his child...and now having to see all of this with her own eyes...and be a part of that in whatever small way...KUDOS to Geet!!! yes yes yes!! kudos to geet...so glad you see her strength over it all...i think she handled it well...not only that...but the fact that she also sympathized and felt for Sam's condition (miscarriages) speaks volumes of geets character!! i love you for seeing that...only a handful of people saw it that way...i knew you would!! 🤗

Gosh..you weren't kidding when you said Sam will be a positive character...wow what a nice lady...loved how even in her moments of despair...not knowing the viability of her pregnancy...especially after 2 miscarriages, she still offered GEET a way out of this tough situation...that is SUPER COMMENDABLE. And to top it all off, had she not been pregnant now...she would have walked out of Maan's life...to allow for a future for Maaneet...that is hugely MAGNANIMOUS...Kudos to Sam too!! i love sam...i think i love her more than geet...well..not really cuz geet is my little doctor baby in this story but sam is a very close second!! as a woman she understands geet and she has what geet should have had...what was "rightfully" geets...so on some level...she knows that she holds that happiness in her hands...she wouldnt want geet to suffer on her behalf...or on maans behalf for that matter...😳

The only character that seems the weakest to me in this FF is Maan...weak in his character, allowing his EGO to get the better of him...so mush so to force the love of his life to walk out of his life!! Weak in stature...for the 2 women in his life are so BIG...it would DAUNT him...had he heard their conversation...his Ex-Love accepting a PURELY PAINFUL PRESENT situation, and rising above it all to offer the best of treatment for his current love, so that he could find HAPPINESS as a HUSBAND and as a FATHER...And his Current-Love...offering to have walked away from his life (were it not for this baby) so that he could find TREASURED HAPPINESS with the first love of his life!!! maan's place in all this will be the first chunk of the next update...you will get to see the demons that make him weak...it didnt just slip past him that the girl he'd shunned how was responsible for the lives of the people he now loved...

Wow...how will ever make Maan add up to these 2 GREAT WOMEN??? simply...he never can...usually its always MSK that is the strong one in stories but here...these women give new meaning and definition to strength...emotional and personal...the size of their hearts dwarfs that of everyone else...especially MSK...

PS...even as STRONG woman reader of all of your Maaneet FFs, just FYI...it was hard to read this...and to accept that Maan and Geet don't have a future together. i can accept that...i totally can...and i get it...had i been the reader instead of the writer...i would probably be on the same boat...but what bugs me...is when other people keep saying how horrible they feel and how they cant accept it...and they dont want to read it...my answer is..THEN DONT!! why complain? dont like it..dont read it...chaddo..im venting other peoples frustration on you...

Someone proposed that perhaps Geet and Sameera would establish an ongoing friendship...Plz...spare both of them that pain...for not when together...but when alone...each would have too much to deal with their hearts ...Geet's unfullfilled dreams of a future with Maan would continually be in her face, and Sam's guilt of coming in between the First Love of two people... it would be too burdensome to a friendship...no? i never thought of it that way...while they my not turn into "friends"...they will on some level be acquaintances for a very specific reason...why...you will have to wait and watch..errm...read...ha ha 😆

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

In all honesty...Jaz...you know when I read the update...I had a sour taste in my mouth...due to Maaneet not ever being together again...and as such I didn't write my comments for a long time...I just kept reading other's comments...and yes most readers were resentful for the same reason. In fact, I even thought about not commenting this time...then I thought that that would be the chicken's way out...I mean if I felt resentful...then at least I should have the courage to say so...and so I began typing...and As I started thinking about what stood out to as I read the update...the whole resentment thing took a back seat...and what became GLARINGLY evident was the STRENGTH of these 2 women...that even in the most thought time of their life...their essence and their character stands out. im going to be honest...im glad that you focused on other things rather than on what you didnt like...im so tired of people saying the dont like the way im taking the story or how they dont like Sam/Maan...its like they are saying they dont like my creativity and my work...which is fine...because everyone is entitled to their opinion...but for me...i dont want to hear how horrible they think my work is...my heart/mind isnt equipped for that...creative criticism is one thing...flat out saying im bad is something else...

Thanks for writing about such women because I truly do think that they really exist...in fact the probablity of having women like Geet and Sam in real life is way higher than having a man like MSK...the larger than life MSK that is portrayed in most FFs...at least. yes...very true!! men dont come like him any more..which is a shame...😉

Kudos to us Strong successful women who rise above the adversities of life to make the best of what Destiny has in store for us!!!👏 yes!! i agree completely!! 😳

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Hi Jaz,

I hope I didnt offend you...your tone seriously seems so...

Just wanted to stress on the fact that nobody is asking you to cater to all maaneet fans - you choose to write your story because you enjoy it and we choose to read them because we enjoy them... so there's no harm in losing a reader ...

There is no comment I have made about your writing or the story - its just my point of view that I have shared - just to say that i cant handle this content...

So no offense meant to you or your story... apologies if you felt that way...

i wasnt offended...just tired of people saying they are going to stop reading because im not doing what they want me to do...so thats fine...if people dont want to read...thats just fine with me...im just so tired of hearing the same thing over and over again...if a ff i was reading wasnt going as id like...id just stop...i wouldnt go out of my way to tell the writer what i didnt like and that i wouldnt be reading it...im not about negativity...im all about positivity...i wouldnt want to bring that person down...

JAZ