FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 26

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

A brilliant update Jaz. I'm so glad the teaser was a FB, really hope nothing happens to this baby :( But we can never be showing knowing you're the author *glares at Jaz*

Ah, so I'm guessing there's a sort of enmity between the Khurana's and the Rathod's...

lol...true...you never know whats going to happen 😛...and yeah...some sort of bad blood between the khuranas and rathods...stick around to see what that is 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: spvd

part 15
hey dear me again... hi!
looks like u will kick me out of this thread and story for sure...
once again sorry but i still hate Maan all the more...
may be am too thick headed or i dont wanna see through it but stil Maan could have talked to Naina before actually thinking about marriage right? who says he didnt...he could have...i just havent shown it yet...he isnt oen to go into a marriage so lightly to just spite geet...so much more of the story to be revealed...just you wait!! 😛
he feels that Naina wanted a family so marriage is the only option he felt, he could have talked to her before putting forth the conditions to Sam...
but he didnt... you dont know that 😈
all he could see was Geet perferred her career more than him and more than Naina...
just tell me one thing, will Maan when he comes to know about Naina's doings, will he regret everything to date? you'll have to wait...😛
reading from Maan's POV still i feel, i accept he loves Sam, but still there is and will be a part of his heart beating only for Geet...
from my side i will this has compromise and duty towards one another and trying to mae it possible that they have provided with...
poor Sam feel sorry for the 2 miscarriages she had...
so the teaser was the second one... yup! i just wanted to mess with your heads!! 😆
with Geet maybe they might be lucky but Maan's life once again will be controlled and blessed only by Geet...
i understand Maan Sam love each other and are life partners but with Maan and Geet i feel they are connected by their souls... i dont 😆
much more stronger...
oh my god my heart is still burning...
u Maan grrr i hate u for this...
i dunno whether this resentment i have on Maan will ever reduce in this ff for once...
i maybe wrong with my judgement but i still feel its only Maan and Geet...
have no hard feelings for Sam, shes too nice but not good enough for Maan only Geet is THE one... you are so funny...i mean...on one side you hate maan for doing what he did...by moving on...yet you want this person you hate to be with geet...doesnt really make sense does it...😕
sigh...
cont soon dear...
dont chuck me out...😆
cont soon dear...
commented before u pmed me...

PS - no i commented before i saw ur pm...😆

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

Another brilliant update,Jaz!! You have conceived Sam's character in such a way that it's difficult for even the most craziest Maaneetians to hate her. She's adorable,no wonder Maan fell in love with this special woman..I'm eagerly looking forward to read the part when Maan comes to know about the real reason why Geet left him.

hehe...i love Sam too!! she came out more wonderful than i though she'd be!! 😆..same with Adi...lol...the truth will be out soon enough...just a few more parts to go 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

fantastic update Jaz... ⭐️

my feelings towards Maan has soften just a tad bit...

but whatever happens I'll always side with Geet... coz i still blame Maan for their breakup...

but i'm eager to see how Maan will react when he realises that Naina had a part to play in Geet walking away from him...

he he...as long as you can understand his pov...you dont have to accept it...lol...so go on disliking him all you want...lol...and when he finds out...his world is going to shatter!! 😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

great update Jaz.. I am happy teaser was from flashback...

you are an amazing writer Jaz. I experienced all the emotions of love in this FF. I don't know why, everytime I read about Maan and Sameera, I would make myself believe, past is past.. Sam and Maan is present and they are happy too.. I am feeling sad for Sam and she is a great woman. I would say a selfless woman. Even though I love Geet and Maan as couples, but I want every happiness in this world for Sam.

Febin

aww...you're so sweet...thanks for your kind words...and yes...the teaser was the flashback...he he...just wanted to confuse you all...😆...but im glad you enjoyed it...and yes...past is past...why dwell on it...everyone has moved on 😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: luv angel

As much i am shocked at saying this...

Maan and Sam are very cute together tooo😳

Great update... loved it all

Thanks for the pm

i love SaMaan!! he eh...glad you like them too 😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

he he...as long as you can understand his pov...you dont have to accept it...lol...so go on disliking him all you want...lol...and when he finds out...his world is going to shatter!! 😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: mymagic13

brilliant update!!
it was nice to know about sam!!she is really a sweetheart!!
sam has managed maan really well!! isnt she..i just love her!! 😳

I liked the way maan n sam's relation grew from bein friends to hubby n wifey!! yup..it was a process...not a quick thing

sam handling tara with her periods was awesome part!! some female bonding...and since Naina is most important for maan...i thought it was a good way to show why maan's feelings changed...or how they began to change 😃

The khurana's bonded well with time!!
my heart really goes out for sam after her loss!!
well most of them get lucky third time!! hopefully!! 😉

n i gues she ll be fine as geet is there to help her this time!!
as this is no maneet story they gotto ve a happy endin [ sam n maan]!!
i still dnt wana like maan even after bein in his shoes!!
he dint fall in love with geet for tara sake he didnt...but one thing that he loved about Geet was how naturally she took to tara and how much she loved tara 😛

n he dint think once before breakin up with her for tara!! of course he did...he thought many times...there is more to be revealed 😉

Maan only thought of tara's condition but not geet!! as a brother can you blame him...he's the only one there for tara...she's his sister...his responsibility...how could he not put her first...i dont blame him 😳

The proposal was unexpected n uncalled for!! unexpected yes...uncalled for...thats your opinion 😛

So geet had react tat way!!
he should ve waited or convinced geet atleast once before breakin up!!
breakup was not the only solution!!
he is one selfish man but a lucky one to have found a first love like geet who stood by him every way n now a wife like sam!! Who loves him deeply!!
both r angels in his life!!
geet never failed him it was maan who failed her geet did fail him...he thought geet loved not only him but Naina enough to do anything for them...but she didnt...he may not know the real reason behind it all...but from his pov...geet failed him too...

n when maan gets to know the actual reason he might feel bad for his doings but wont be broken as he already has sam beside him no matter wat!! yup..he will always have sam!! 😳

I gues he wont even know the pain geet felt!!
but geet was alone with her pain all the while! no she wasnt...she had Adi..

he should ve spoken to geet or tara before marryin sam!!
now there is no one to blame but himself!! wow...you really hate him...the majority of this comment was about how maan did everything wrong 🤣

Am glad adi stood by geet n been there for her like a true fren!!

There goes my longest comment !!

waitin for the next!!

i still wished it to be maneet story!! now its impossible i gues

Originally posted by: justme_12

I want to say in the very beginning that my comment is not meant to hurt you in any way. I am commenting as an average reader. oh yikes...why do i feel like this is going to get me riled up again 😕

I guess I am one of those very few who did not want Geet to go back to Maan ever. May be forgive him but no reconciliation. that group is growing...😆

So, I was totally hooked to the story till a point where Geet behaved strong and professional. Adi-Geet story was wonderful as well. the way you phrased your comment makes it seem like you dont like Geet being strong and professional...you said you were hooked until that happened...so im confused...

But, the best character you have created in this story is of Sameera. My point is does Maan deserve a life with her? why not...one mistake should make maan be miserable the rest of his life?

Your story started with "karma is a bitch", so what happened to Maan's karma in the story? first of all story isnt over yet...there is a lot left...secondly, Maan never purposfully hurt anyone...Geet just happened to be a casualty from the situation his sister gave rise to (which he has no idea about)...yes...he hurt Geet...but that doesnt mean that he didnt hurt as well...just cuz he proposed a contract marriage to sam but that didnt mean he just up and moved on like geet was nothing...that was the whole point of this update...

I know its your story, you have every right to direct it the way you want to, but I request you to understand the average reader's sentiments as well. Almost every member here breathes Maan and Geet together. Them being separated under circumstances is fine, them not getting together ever is also fine, but please understand, together or not we expect Maan-Geet interaction. well...the average reader has come to understand by now that this isnt your average run-of-the-mill Maneet story...because Maan and Geet are tied to other people...those relationships take precedence over everything else...and the average reader seems to be doing fine without the Maan and Geet interactions because the story is nowhere near finished...and they also understand why such interactions would be difficult and why they arent coming up...their lives are no longer tied together like the used to be...Maan is simply the brother of a patient that geet is treating...thats all...she's kept him up to date as needed...she doesnt need to buddy up with him

Maan-Sameera love story depicts Maan being happily settled in life, this is something I just cannot accept given the circumstances. I guess you have noticed from most comments that Adi-Geet are accepted and loved, but not Sameera and Maan. accept it or not it is what it is...i feel with those readers...it wouldnt matter what justification i give...for them Maan is the culprit and will always be...i can say maan had a brain tumor that effected his judgment and people wont care...so i cant cater to everyone

I request you to do an introspection as a writer and decide.

I know people might find me mad writing so much, and come out with the solution : DONT READ, WHO IS FORCING YOU. seriously...thats my take as well...as a writer i dont want to read about the pit falls of my stories and how unrealistic they are for the "average reader"...like ive said a gazillion times...im not a professional writer...im totally amateur...you cant expect things to be perfect like you might want...

But I am sure you understand, once you start reading a story, it becomes difficult to detach no matter what. You are a wonderful and gifted writer, but I request you a final consideration. there are a lot of stories i've read where i cant understand the plot or the stories just stop to entice me...so i just stop...and there is nothing to be considered...the story will play out like i've always had planned

Maan and Sameera is just not happening. No Maan-Geet, thats fine.

Most importantly, in the last few updates its all about Sameera, wasn't Geet supposed to be the protagonist? i dont know what story you are reading but part 14 was ENTIRELY based on Geet...this story is about Maan and Geets lives after their break up...that life includes other people...so those people deserve their dues...

Had this story was written on an open forum, things would have been different. Please understand this, we love Geet Maan as our protagonist. and i dont know how many times ive said it for this story...BUT THIS STORY ISNT LIKE THAT!! i can yell it from the roof tops but people dont get it...and i dont know why!! its so damned frustrating...if you cant deal...like you said...dont read

Maan Singh Khurana should actually be left alone to regret his lack of trust. He does not deserve the life he is leading with a lady like Sameera after he did what he did with Geet. you're seriously telling me that a person who made a bad judgment call...or made a call he thought he had to make...deserved a life of solitude...with no love...i know the world is cruel but even the worst people get second chances

And if talk about redemption, then why not Maan and Geet together. but why...people are so fast to point out how horrible Maan is...and how he doesnt deserve any happiness...but they are just as quick to ask for Maan and Geet together...does Geet deserve to be with a man who didnt trust her at the time? and to answer your question...why cant maan and geet be together...because i said so...simple

Dont get mad at me. I am a loyal Geet fan as everyone here, so its actually painful and borderline frustrating, hope you understand where I am coming from. dont read is all i can say...why torture yourself...and get frustrated reading something that riles you up? i dont get it...i dont get why people come and complain about how they dont understand the story...how the story has pit falls...how the story isnt progressing as they want ti...so why come back and read!!