FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 25

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Moi here too 😃

edit...hello hello...i am here now to comment away...i crashed last night after reading ur updates...well technically 5 hours of sleep doesn't count as sleep but that's all i am getting nowadays...not cause i need to wake up early...but because i just wake up...and u know...just the other day..i was laughing at you for hurting your back...well...they say karma is a...u know what...i am not suppose to be swear in this month 😆..so you know what i mean...but the reason i am talking about karma is because i ended hurting my back somehow...and ouchhh...it hurts...oh lord...i talk about myself a lot...let's get onto the update... yaar i know the feeling for just waking up for no good reason!! ...doesnt matter what time i go to sleep...im up at my usual time!! which sucks cuz i have the time to sleep in!! 😉...and ya...no swearing...we are to be perfect little angels this month!! come back with swearing next month!! 😛

firstly...a big jappi 🤗..for giving us a full on SaMaan update...they have grown on me like you don't what..and i am just saying this to make you feel all happy happy...but i honestly feel that what Sam and Maan share in this story is special..and worth loving their characters over...There was a point in the story when i refused to believe Maan was married but the entry and their relationship has changed a lot for me as a reader... yay!! im so happy you liked the snippets of SaMaan's life together...how their relationship changed...everyone kept thinking that he just up and married Sam like Geet was nothing...like he'd moved on at the drop of a hat...but aaisa nahin tha...SaMaan getting to where they are now was a long process...i just had to show it!! 😳

You have done a fab job with explaining their journey from 'being married' to 'really being married'...the transition was over a span over time which made it real...love the way they came together over emotions...after her father's death...not someone physical based on hormones...for me...emotionally bonding is more important before physically bonding... me too!! and no matter what Maan did to Geet cuz of his bruised Ego...he's still a nice guy (over all...lol) ...he'd never get into a physical relationship with Sam just cuz he couldnt keep it in his pants 🤣...he has a long relationship with her...one of trust and friendship...he wouldnt turn it into nightly booty calls...tauba what am i saying!! 😲

.i was right in saying that Sameera really does have a heart of gold...the way she cares for Naina is wonderful...and the most important thing is that she doesn't except anything back...but when the woman talk came up...and Maan mentioned that Geet already talked to Naina...i couldn't help but feel a little nostalgic with the past...but i am sure Maan and Geet would go through these short moments too... i felt like i had to put Geet in there because of the relationship she shared with Naina...they were like sisters and shared everything...and she did have the birds-bees talk with Naina remember...when Maan ran away!! 😆...and Sam knows all about Geet...there is nothing for Maan to hide...and thats what i love about Sam too...she loves unconditionally...how awesome is that!! 👏

and my heart breaks🥺 and breaks 🥺...over the pain Maan and Sam have through over the miscarriages...come on Jazzy...let them have a baby...a proof of their love...that will bring them closer...u will let them have their happiness right ? * batting eyelashes cutely* abhi tak toh...this new baby...#3...is still in good health...and our super doctor is with her no? keep the faith!! 😛

Now...we might get to more spicy things...so Khuranas and Rathods have some sort of connection..and maybe Arjun is taking some sort of revenge...hmmm...interesting...bring it on...i wanna see Maan kick their asses...can't wait for the next one... next one is all Rathods...something will come into the lime light...he he...just you wait!! 😈

This update was awesome...as always from your side... thanks luv!! 🤗

Originally posted by: bansipatel

Brilliantly written Jaz...!!
feeling really sorry for sam n maan...they lost their baby twice...oh god...sam has gone thru the loss of their baby...its really painful......hope geet saves this one n fills them with happiness by bringing their baby safely into the world...
so all the teaser was of the flashback...Jaz ur such a tease..😡..!!
nywy looking forward to the next part now..!!
but i loved the update...😳 😳 😳

yeah...i felt bad for them two...killing their baby twice...but kya karoon...had to do it 😉...and yes...teaser as a FB...i love seeing you all flip out over Sam loosing this baby as well!! ha ha 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: sindu555

since this update laid out Maan's POV relating to the breakup .. I dont hate Maan any more ... I hate Naina all the more 😡 ... just because of her insecurity Maan & Geet suffered so much ... and I guess are still suffering ... lol...i dont think that Geet is suffering...yes seeing maan all moved on was shocking and emotional...but i think that has passed...but maan is definitely suffering...because all these years he's thought that the woman he loved didnt love his sister enough...but he doenst know the full truth

though I still want Maaneet to be together (😃 sowwie I cant get sudhrofied ) .. but I truly felt bad for Sameera and Maan for loosing their babies ... loosing a baby can never be justified .. no matter how bad the person is .. in their case its all the more painful ... in Sam's case .. as a mother loosing a child is the harshest thing that cud happen ... and in Maan's case ... apart from being the father .. the child wud've brought the non existent happiness and peace in his life ... you really cant help it can you... ...saying you want Maneet in every comment 🤣

in case of Naina .. Karma is indeed a bitch ... she caused two lives to be ruined just for a trivial thing ... just to prove who's more important in her brother's life ... she dint realize at that time the cost his brother and GG had to pay for this ... she was childish was was looking for instant gratification...she didnt think of consequences for the future...which is the price she's paying now...

I know its not right to feel this way .. but as the story is unfolding and more things are getting revealed my sympathies with Naina for her current state are diminishing ... 😈 .. and I guess by the end of it I will be ready to kill her 😆 ...we will see about that...there is a lot more to Naina's story than meets the eye...stay tuned...😉

I dont even wanna imagine the pain Maan will go thru once he gets to know the truth ... this truth is I guess more than enuff to shatter him completely ... 😭 oh yeah...its gonna shatter him 😛

thanks for the awesome update madam jee 🤗 glad you liked it! 😳

love

Sana

Originally posted by: niddzz

hey jaz...!!😊 hi! *jaz waves*

1st thin 1st...i read all 15 parts together widout leaving mah chair even once...and i JUST LOVED IT...was lil disappointed that its not a maaneet story but still i loved it...i always thot i can never love maan and geet with sum other partners and not as maaneet...but u proved me wrong...i loved samman and adeet...i totally loved them...i loved sams character ...how m i suppose to hate her if she enters the show as negative character..i so love her here...!!! ok wow!! all 15 parts in one go!? 😲...and my parts arent exactly short are they!? you must have had a lot of time on your hands!! 😆...but im so happy that you read it...thanks!! 😳...im also super happy that i was able to make you love SaMaan and Adeet!! 😃

mah heart went out 4 that gal...she lost 2 babies...wish she has this baby safe and sound in her hand...my instincts telling that geet wont let anythin happen to sam and maans baby not to maans baby...she will bring the baby in their lives and complete them ...!!! as the doctor Geet can only do so much...who knows what the powers that be (ahem ahem...me...ahem ahem) will do!! 😛

well i loved the flashbacks...karma is really a bitch...!!!

naina was so cute but her possessiveness 4 her brother and her insecurities changed 4 lives...two lives directly and two indirectly...!!! yup...the whole premise of the story is based on that one line...because that one line give insight into the past that these three people share 😳

maan and sams was a contract marriage but they eventually fell in love...they were meant to b... yup! just like geet said! 😉

to accept the truth i did accept samaan but the line were maan realizes his love 4 sam after her first miscarriage...i hated those lines...mahn i m damn possessive wen it cums to maaneet...! lol...cant blame you there...im possessive about them too...just not in my own work...go figure!! 😆

i loved how geet was shown a way to lead a life abter the ultrasound of the baby and seeing samaan together,,,,she realized she achieved all that she desired but still she lacks sumthin...!!! thats what happens all the time right...the person with the career lacks family...and the person with the family lacks the career...each wanting what the other has...thats just how life is...
loved adi...he is so cute...he loves her since uni but din have the courage to propose her fearing her reaction and seeing how carer oriented she is...!!!

loved how geet made it clesr that this is not the right tym 4 the proposal and she wants to b sure wen she accepts him...accepts her future their relationship...!!! yeah...cuz if she said yes...it could have brought up problems in the future...and they wouldnt want that...better to take it slow...😃

arjun - yash thin is really a mystery...cant wait till it unfolds...!! stay tuned! 😉

maan hated it wen geet rejected him more than that he hated wen she denied to b wid him even 4 naina...wonder how will maan react wen he will cum to kno abt the game his lil sis played...its naina who changed 4 lives...and now her life is upside down...me is actually believing that karma is a bitch...lol im a big believer is karma...i thing what you give is what you get...and maan has no idea what his baby sister has done...when he finds out...😭

was just wondering how did i miss dis beautiful piece of fiction...but as they say better late then never and its never too late...as i m here now u better b ready to hear 4m me...lol...i love reaping the updates apart...din do that coz read 15 updates all together...!!! bring it on luv!! i love when people rip apart the updates!! cuz i love to know wht you all are thinking 😃...definitely looking forward to it!! 😳

its not that i havent read ur work before...i loved home coming to the core and bouquet of roses even more than that...have read all ur OS's till date...not to miss a single one...i voted 4 them too in the FF award...haan...!!! lol...jokes apart i love ur writing skills...me iz ur fan ...!!!

my recent fav is just ordinary...loved it to bits...can read it n no. of tyms...!!! ok that is just NOT cool...you read everything but never commented...so nto fair!!

cant wait to read more on u & i collide...cant wait 4 adi's proposal, cant wait 4 samaans baby, cant wait till naina's culprit is punished...arjun loves her like no1 but aisa love is khatarnak...lol...i really feel bad 4 her...she remembers her GG's words even after a decade...geet din mean them but karma is karma...!!! lots of story still left to be told...stay tuned 😈

all said and done...i will say sumthin...u made me cry buckets...i cried like never b4...at sum point i din even realize why d heck m i crying...was sittin wid tissue box...but got irritated wid the tissue gettin socked wid mah tears so got mahself a hand towel and not to mention two towels down till i finished part 15...!!! you cried reading this!? 😲...i dont think anyone has cried reading this ff until you...cuz usually people are to busy being mad at either Maan or Naina...😆

maan and geet will always love each other...no one can change it...1st love is sumthing one can never forget may it b wid sad memories or happy memories...1st love is 1st love...no replacements...sam and adi came into their lives and made their places in their hearts and may in future conquer their hearts too...but a part of their heart will always belong to maan ki geet and geet ka maan...they made the reservation first...even maaneet cant deny that fact...they can love sam and adi respectively wid all their heart coz the heart that belongs to each other is not theirs... !!! yes...first love is always there and never truly forgotten 😳

i loved the story...!!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 this is 4 u jaz 4 penning it down so beautifully...!!

keep rocking...!!! thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: heermeher

Does maan knows what game Naina played with geet

no...he has no idea...yet...😉

JAZ