Phir Mohabbat - Maaneet ff link to nxt thd pg 152 - Page 46

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsum update
luvd da way geet slapped sasha
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt part x
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm nice going do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved it dear
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
till part 13
nice story...
poor Geet...
now she has got Maan and his family...
and also her bros...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
luved da part
finally sasha is fired
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!
loved it!
awww how sweet of maan to make her meet his mom!
ha ha that kali kaudi part was hilarious!
maan's self talks are too good! lol!
omg geet slapped sasha good one!!
just loved the way maan makes her blush by calling her "mishty" and punishing sasha
oye hooyyeee maan wanting to be with geet only n searching for excuses!
cupid daadi at work again!
awww so sweet of shilpa!
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm!
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Awesomeee SS..:)⭐️
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PART FOURTEEN

The next day was a sunday n so everyone got up late. They had a gala time during breakfast n then Shilpa n Geet started talking about the functions to be held for the upcoming wedding.

Shilpa "Geet tum saare functions ke liye kaunse dress pehen rahi ho???"

Geet "Bhabhi mere par main meri Maa ki ek Purple net saree hai jo main shaadi main phenugi aur woh dress jo maine raksha bandhan ke din pehena tha woh sangeet main pehen lungi aur haldi main koi bhi yellow colour ka suit pehen lungi"

Dadi who had just sat with Geet n Shilpa said "Arre Geet aap kyu koi bhi suit phenegi. Aap ek kaam kijye aap, Shilpa, Maan aur Armaan jake shaadi ke liye mall main shopping kar lejye"

Vicky who was playing along with Armaan with his XBOX 360 said "Arre Dadi aap toh mujhe bhool hi gayi. Main bhi jaunga aur latest games ka version dekh ke ayunga. Mujhe ab koi nayi game chaiye."

Dadi "Haan aap bhi jaye aur kuch ache kapade bhi leke aaye. Pata nahi aap kyu yeh phate huve jeans phente phirte hai"

Vicky "Dadi yeh phate huve jeans aaj kal ka fashion hai"

Maan who just came down after finishing his work in study said "Yeh kaisa fashion hai Vicky. Isse acha toh mera wardrobe hai atleast koi phate huve kapade toh nahi hai"

Armaan "Maan tum last kab shopping karne gaye the???"

Maan "Yaad nahi hai re par tu yeh kyu pooch raha hai???"

Armaan "Aur tu chala Vicky ko fashion ke bare main gyan dene. Tu kaam ke alawa kuch aur sochta bhi hai kya???"

Maan "Haan sochta hu na..." looking towards Geet n winks n says "Aapni Mishti ke bare main"

Vicky dropped the remote from his hand n said "Jiju aap mujhe pinch kijye kahi main sapna toh nahi dekh raha na???"

Armaan pinches him hard n he shouts "Ouchhh. Jiju itni zor se pinch karne ko nahi kaha tha maine"

Meanwhile Geet had turned red hearing Maan's answer but soon composed herself.

Shilpa "Bhai yeh Mishti kaun hai???"

Maan "Hai koi... main nahi batane wala"

Daadi in her mind "Ab yeh Mishti kaha se agayi kabab main haddi banae ke liye. Uff Geet ke babaji ek toh inki love story hai ke shuru hone ka naam nahi le rahi aur ab yeh bich main ek aur archan...Mishti. Ab main kya karu???"

While Daadi was lost n her thoughts Maan asked "Waise kya baat chal rahi thi???"

Shilpa "Kuch nahi bhai bas shopping ka plan bana rahe the Geet shaadi main ja rahi hai aur aap bhi Mumbai main ho toh aap bhi jaunge na uske saath. Bas isiliye"

Maan "KYA??? shopping nahi mujhe nahi jana koi shopping whopping main aap log jake aao aur waise bhi meri aaj ek important video conference hai"

Geet "Lekin jahan tak mujhe yaad hai aaj toh koi meeting nahi thi" making a confused face while Shilpa n Dadi smirked seeing Maan caught.

Maan felt like hitting his head to the wall n said in his mind "Uff Mishti. Tum todhi der chup nahi reh sakti thi kya ab mujhe shopping pe jana hi padega"

Dadi "Maan hum koi baat nahi sun rahe aap ja rahe hai bas"

Maan sighed n said "Theek hai. Aap log jaldi ready hojao"

After getting ready all left but Dadi refused as she wanted to relax n told them to enjoy.

Orion Mall,

As they reached Geet n Shilpa got all excited for shopping n they decided to go to the traditional outfits store though Shilpa wanted to go to a designer shop but Geet refused n so they decided to go to a different traditional outfit store. Vicky told that he was going to the video games shop n to give him a call when they were finished. When Armaan n Maan tried to go to a watch shop Shilpa glared at both n told "Bhai aapko bhi shaadi ke liye kapade lene hai toh aapko chala hoga aur Armaan tum mere aur Geet ki help karne CHALO" Armaan groaned as he knew what was going to happen next n silently followed while his mind was formulating a plan to get back to Shilpa for this torture.

As they entered Maan saw a pretty green saree n he liked it instantly for Geet n he went to the manager n told him to show this saree to those 2 ladies pointing towards Shilpa n Geet n not to tell he had told. The manager knowing Maan Singh Khurana did as told n as Shilpa n Geet were seeing some sarees he showed them the saree n Shilpa told Geet to try it on.

As Geet went to the trial room along with some sarees Shilpa started seeing some Anarkali suits for herself. As Geet came out wearing a Black saree with blue embroidery she called Shilpa n Shilpa saw it n she was liked it on Geet n as Geet was going to select it she saw in the mirror Maan was shaking his head to tell no n she told Shilpa that she would try other sarees n then decide n left to try another saree.

After this she tried a red gold colour saree with red embroidery work n when she saw in the mirror Maan showed his hand as OK-OK n Geet went to try another saree.

As she came out Maan was mesmerised seeing her n thought that she looked more beautiful than he had thought n was lost in her while she blushed a little seeing his intense gaze from the mirror n then she asked him through her eyes as how is this one???

Maan smiled n showed a pefect sign in his hand n she smiled n while she was talking to Shilpa that she was going to take this saree Maan clicked a pic of her in that saree in his mobile.

Geet then changed n came n as she was coming out she saw the price n then thought "Arre yeh toh bohut mehangi saree hai. Main yeh nahi koi dusri dekh leti hu aur waise bhi mere pass Maa ki saree hai na toh mujhe yeh nahi chaiye" n told Shilpa "Bhabhi mujhe yeh bhi itni khaas saree nahi lag rahi aur waise bhi mere pass Maa ki saree hai toh hum na mere liye koi suit dekh lete hai"

Shilpa "Arre par Geet tumhe toh yeh saree pasand thi na phir kyu nahi le rahi.Shaadi main nahi toh phir kabhi pehen lena"

Geet "Arre chodo na bhabhi. Mujhse saree sambhalti nahi toh main nahi le rahi. Chalo hum suits dekhte hai" n pulled Shilpa n Armaan before they could argue more.

But her seeing the price tag was not missed by one n it was none other than Maan n he thought "Mishti tum yeh saree kyu nahi lena chahti yeh mujhe pata hai toh kya huve agar tum nahi logi toh Main toh le sakta hu na tumhare liye aur sahi waqt anne pe main tumhe yeh saree bhi dunga" n told the manager to pack the saree n keep it separately n he would collect it later.

After that Geet selected a beautiful multicolour anarkali dress n then they went to the men's section to select some outfits for Maan.

Maan went n selected a black sherwani n tried it n Geet smiled seeing him.

n then selected a silver colour sherwani n then they paid n went to buy jewellery for Geet n she buyed some light jewellery as she didnt like much heavy jewellery n then they called Vicky to the restaurant n they had their lunch n then they left for home as Maan n Geet had to pack their bags also.

While they were having lunch Maan called the manager n told him to keep the packet along with his sherwani n then Maan went n collected all the bags n they left.

As they reached home Geet n Shilpa along with Dadi opened all the dresses n saw but somehow Maan took away the packet before they could see it n went to his room n kept it in his cupboard.

After freshening up Maan, Armaan n Vicky sat to play the new game which Vicky had brought while Geet went n did her packing n Shilpa helped her n they talked about many things.

Later they had early dinner n went to sleep as they had a early flight the next day to Mumbai.

Maan packed his bag n kept the packet also n then went n slept. The next day they woke up early freshened up n had breakfast n then left for the airport.

As they checked in Maan went n brought a coffee for himself while Geet refused n then as they boarded the flight Geet was all nervous. Maan seeing that slowly slipped his hand into her hand n held it. As the plane took off Geet held Maan's hand tightly n after few mins her fear went off n she dozed off listening to songs on her mobile but was very uncomfortable. Maan seeing this slowly kept her head on his shoulder n she fell into a peaceful sleep. Maan smiled seeing her smile n then got busy reading a business magazine. As the plane landed Maan woke Geet n they collected their luggage n then went out n called out for a cab.

Cab Driver [C.D] "Memsaab dongiri tak jane ke liye ek sau pachas rupaye lage ga (150 rs)"

Geet "Kya ek sau pachas??? oye bhaisaab humko kya bewakoof samjte ho hum log yahi ke rehne wale hai aur yaha se dongiri tak sirf sau rupaye (100 rs) hota hai"

C.D "Arre memsaab humne kaha bola ke aap yaha ke nahi ho???Lekin main toh ek sau pachas hi lunga"

Maan tried to stop Geet from getting into a fight but before he could tell anything,

Geet "Acha aap ek sau pachas hi lenge rukho abhi aap ko theek karti hu" n starts shouting "Bacho...Bacho." As everyone gathered she faked tears n said "Yeh dekhayi sab log Yeh bhaisaab hum ko lootna chata hai"

Maan tried to stop Geet but she glared at him n told him to keep quiet. Maan went a bit back seeing her angry eyes n thought in his mind "Kya din agaye hai tere Maan Singh Khurana. Sab tere gusse se darte hai aur tu Geet ke gusse se dar gaya aur yeh dekh jab kabhi bhi tu Delhi se bahar jata hai toh tujhe recieve karne kitni gadiya hoti hai aur aaj dekh tu ek cab driver se pachas rupaye ke liye jhagad raha hai waise dekha jaye toh technically main nahi jhagad raha Geet lad rahi hai lekin phir bhi agar media ko pata chala toh naam toh tera hi kharab hoga na. Uff Mishti tum toh mujhe pura badl dalogi" Meanwhile all the passerby people started threatening the cab driver to take him to the police if he tried to act smart but before anything more could happen a guy came n stopped the passer by people n said "Aap log jaiye main dekh leta hu isse" n then went n told the cab driver "Arre bhai kyu iss se panga le rahe ho. Tumhe pata hai yeh kaun hai??? Yeh Vijay saab ki behen hai aur tum toh jante ho ke agar Vijay saab ko pata chala toh tumhara kya hoga. Iss liye chup chap nikale palti gali se" n the cab driver just went away.

The guy came to Geet n said "Chalye ji. Hum ko vijay saab ne bheja hai" Geet nodded n she n Maan went with them.

As she reached the Chol she got all the memories of her childhood n she felt tears in her eyes n wiped them before anyone could see n then they got off the car.

Geet as soon as she got off she went to the center of the chol n shouted "Ayee Kali Kaudi Bahar Aa Dekh Kaun Aaya hai"

All the chol people came out n were very happy to see Geet n they all rushed to meet her n as they were about to hug her someone from back shouted "RUKO"

All the people stopped n turned n saw n there stood Kali along with Vijay n then she went n hugged Geet n said "Sab se phele mera haq banta hai isse gale lagane ka phir aap sab ka"

Maan all the while was seeing all this from the same place where he got down n then he felt a hand on his shoulder n he turned n saw a young handsome guy who pulled out his hand for a shake n said "Vijay, Vijay Chauhan"

Maan took his hand into his hand n shook it n said "Maan,Maan Singh Khurana"

Geet then came there with Kali n introduced them n they took Geet n Maan to Geet's nani's house which was kept locked till now n then they got freshened up n went to Kali's house where all the preparations for marriage were going on.

Geet got busy in the preparations n Maan n Vijay talked n they they hit on pretty well.


Orion Mall

Black saree with blue embroidery

golden colour saree with red embroidery

Green colour saree

Multi colour anarkali suit

Silver colour sherwani

Precap -
Wedding n a Shock for Geet
Ok so here is a LONG update
n Orion Mall is in Bangalore but i just told that it is in Delhi bcoz i dont know much about the malls there so plz forgive me for it n there may be many mistakes in the update plz forgive me for it but i could write it like this only.
Plz do comment.

Thank u of u for liking the part n commenting.
Love,
Hinal
~ Prev ~ Part 13 ~ Next ~ Part 15

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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NOTE

Hey guys Im back n my exams are finished so now u will get regular updates.
Plz do tell me how the update it
n i can update the ff once a week only bcoz i have 5 ffs to write n i need to give equal attention to all so plz do wait for the updates n plz make me happy with lots of comments n likes

Love,
Hinal

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