Maaneet OS: Mujhe Haq Hai Updt Pt 5 Pg14

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

awesome update...loved the punishment of geet

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Radhika Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Awesome part...
Thanks for the PM

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jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

wowww just amazing ending. maan took his revenge in a very sweet manner and then geet took charge😆😆😆
/ tooo hottt and nicely written👏👏👏👏👏

or unki family planning was😉😉 good tooo

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Bye_Bye_if

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Awesome...

loved the ending

SR wa hoottt...!!!

very nice OS altogether

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Ratna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Madhu 🤗...thank u for the lovely updates and PM...finally Maan confessed and in what a way...at the last moment and in front of everybody...no wonder he was teased 😆...Maaneet SR was awesome 😍...and now he wants 4 kids 😲 ...i bet with all that practice that wish will be fulfilled soon 😳...do we get an epilogue...plzzz...love u...TC 😊

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

awesome ...superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

1 of the Best 👏 👏 👏 ; I love your OS-es . All of them . Each one is unique , very touching & penned don Beautifully .

This one too was no exception . Loved the concept you chose to make Maan confess his love . The pain of Maan knowing his Geet becoming someone else's in the very same mandap & his relief to see her once she lifted her veil was superbly structured .

I loved the tease part 😆 ; trust me I simply loved the way Geet & her gang played havoc with Maan's emotions to make him concept ; even I had an evil smirk throughout 😈

Awesome flow & loved n enjoyed it till the end Glitter Star Pink