MY Hero ❤️ UPDT Part 10 Page 82 (15 dec)

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

u r awesum...!
ab toh change karte karte party khatam ho jaayegi hain na...
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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Jazz how come I did not know of this SS?

Anyways since I saw it in ur PM I am reading all the parts now and will comment individually on each of them.

Wonderful start to the SS.

Loved Part 1.

Nice change in the characters.

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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Beautiful n enjoyable prt
geet is damn cute,bolne ka sara blame maan par laga dia.
grt prt,luvd it

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Samra

@ssch

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

loved it ...

thanx for the pm...

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

For Part 2.

Lovely part.

Loved Dadima and Geet is so very sweet and so innocent.

Maan of course is his usual arrogant self.

Guess there must be some valid reason why he hates girls and also the word 'love'.

Am now off to read Part3.

Will comment soon as I finish reading it.

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

loved the update...

man this geet she is unique piece...

maan is slowly losing himself...

i like this pace and the way u r taking the story...

pl cont soon

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

For Part3

Awesome update dear.

So Geet looks like Sameera.

Wonder how she died and why he hates to see that she resembles Sameera.

Now will read Part 4.

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

no, jazzu -- i am enjoying this pace

well, i love the way you add your touch in every part ... simply awesome ... every detail of it make it very special to read ... and as i said ear i love the way this Geet blabber as she not only brought smile on Maan's face but ours too ... they both are unique in their own way ... gosh, she really didn't think what to say ... freak, Maan is really controlling himself ... those "cute words" from her mouth -- too many ... this is their last idea ????

do cont soon & do PM me

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

Awww Geet is so cute and adorable.

Her dialogues and expressions are beautifully expressed in the update.

Loved Part 4.

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#280

oho possessive Maan...

Dekha na babaji!! Aap to sab dekh rahe hain ke koun zyada bol raha hai!! Aap gawah hain mere!! To please inko bataayiye zaraa ke zyada main nahi," she looks at Maan and said "zyada ye bolte hain!!" 🤣 🤣

awesome update...thanx for pm