My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter-6
Chahak was constantly looking at Geet..finally geet asked "Why are you looking at me like this dear"
Chahak"I was trying to see my mother's face in you"
Geet "Why?"
Chahak got sad"I have not seen my mom..I don't know how she was looking..You were her friend na that's why I thought she would have been looking like you..No one talks about her and there is no picture of her in house"
Geet in her mind
Why there is no picture of Sam in this house and the most strange thing they don't talk about her..Maan was loving her so much then why?There is something which is odd
Chahak brought her back to senses" Aunty what are you thinking"
Geet smiled"Nothing beta "
Chahak"No you are lying..when I ask papa about mummy he also gets silent and looks at moon ...daadi told to me he thinks that time so you are also thinking na"
Geet "Babaji ye toh Maan ki photocopy hai...til ka taar banati hai"
Chahak proudly"Afterall I am his daughter..ab stop talking to yourself aunty lets play"
Geet" what we will play now"
Chahak"I will tell you a word and you will immediately reply what comes in your mind"
Geet again got swayed in old memories "Sam used to play this game...I still remember the way she extracted from Maan's mouth that he loves her otherwise Maan and confession there was no relation between the two though he was a flirt but when it was coming to Sam it looked he was getting dumb...oh that was the day when I came to know about my position in his life...Friend "
Chahak was pulling Geet's hand..Geet"um..sorry"
Chahak"you should be ..I am shouting and you..chodo khelte hai... rain"
Geet excitedly "Bhutta"
Chahak"blue"
Geet"sea"
Chahak"sweet"
Geet"Chahak"
Chahak"heart"
Geet "Maan"
Chahak"your heart is papa"
Geet realized what she said she tried to mend her words"yes friends are heart of each other na that's why and now no game nothing..its too late now straight away to bed"
Chahak agreed on a condition that she will sleep after listening to a story..Geet agreed she sat on bed Chahak kept her head on Geet's lap..
Geet started"Once upon there was a prince ..he was handsome and charming always surrounded by girls..Among those girls there was a girl who was prince's best friend and she was in love with that prince"
Chahak snapped in between"And then the prince also started loving her both get married and lived happily ever after..hai na"
Geet gave a sad smile"no the prince always thought that the girl is his best friend..And one day when the girl thought to tell her feelings to prince but that day she came to know that prince was loving someone else... She was broken..she decided to go away from the prince's life as it was painful to see the man whom she loved with some one else ...She went away from the Prince keeping stone on her heart for her prince's happiness.."
Tears were rolling down on Geet's cheeck ..she looked at Chahak who had fallen asleep..She lied Chahak on bed and turned to move when she realized the lil girl was holding her dupatta..She sat beside Chahak after getting failed in releasing her dupatta from her clutch..Geet soon got arrested in a peaceful sleep...Maan returned from office tired ..He went to Chahak's room it was his daily schedule..lights were off ..he smiled thinking his lil angel has grown up..He sat on bed and gave a gentle kiss on Geet's forehead thinking she is Chahak..He lied beside her ...He was very tired so decided to sleep there only..He unbuttoned his shirt and kept it on side table ..He soon fell asleep embracing Chahak(Geet ) from back..Geet turned towards Maan (in sleep) and kept her hands around his neck making herself comfortable in his arms...
In morning Maan woke up first he got a shock on seeing Geet sleeping in his arms before he could do anything Geet woke up and smiled at him He forgot everything and started looking at her she was looking very innocent and beautiful..Soon Geet realized that its not a dream she sprung up ..Maan's hand was setll on her waist..He pulled his hands away
Geet "maan what are you doing here?"
Maan "This is my question what are you doing here?"
Geet'Playing basketball"
Maan"Then I am playing cricket"
Geet"Maan before I start shouting you tell me"
Maan"What..This is my daughter's room and I don't need any permission to sleep here"
Chahak asked in her half sleep"why both of you are shouting?"
Geet"Nothing beta ..you sleep..Aunty and Papa are debating"
Chahak slept
Geet"Daadima told me to stay here with Chahak and while making her sleep I fell asleep.."
Maan"I was tired lights were off I thought you are Chahak ..So I slept beside you"
Daadima entered and saw Maan and Geet are sitting and fighting
Daadima"Arrey kam se kam itna to khyal kariye Chahak so rahi hai..Why both of you are fighting early in the morning"
Both were speechless..They exchanged glances...Geet tried to change the topic
Geet"Maan wanted to show me the whole office and I said I can manage"
Daadi"You both were fighting for this ..A nursery class Child is better than you"
Maan without replying went to his room
Precap-
Maan getting angry on his employee Geet handa
Press like button and do comment...sorry if disappointing but my mood was really bad after reading the new buzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
awesome update why i do have a feelingg that chahak is not maan's and sameera's daughter as they dont have any photo of sam in home and also avoid her topic hope i m correct
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Aw! I just adore Maaneet when they fight...😆
Basketball and cricket for sure...
Aur Maan babu aapki chothi si angelek raath mein ithni badi ho gayi🤣
Geet is superb...
But soon she will meet the Sadoo Singh Khuranna, Chahak's DDP...
And shona about the buzz...
I know that many are here who love the show to the core and will miss GHSP and Maaneet terribly...
I will miss Maaneet too...
But isn't it better to preserve them in our memories, rather than seeing them distorted with many often unwanted tracks?
Answer from your heart darling🤗
The update was as awesome as usual...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
superbbb!!!!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Awesome part..
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
awesum update
luved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
suro...just read the first part...tu toh waise bhi bhagonwali hai...u dont need a subordinate bhagonwali, dear...ive told u na, u just got to go n stand somewhere...u wud end up getting 1 lakh fans at least, per day...seriously...!!!! trust me, not joking...!!!

okay, cuming to the FF...!!! i loved d first part...!!! the other parts, i wud read via my mobile net only...!!! vodafone k package ke baare mein poochha, they give some rs.98 ka voucher for 1 month n 2GB...!!!
i loved the 1st part...would read the others very soon...m restless...! jab PG walis bardi jayengi, phir se...tab main tera FF padh lungi...nahi toh usme bhi aake thousand questions poochenge...JERKS!!!!
love ya...keep writing...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Great part!!! Loved it lots!!!
Saba xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
there fight was cute but i still feel bad for Geet!
she loved him so much only to find out that he loved someone else!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Nice story concept please add me in your pm list

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