My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 41

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Posted: 13 years ago
just came through this ff..
read it in one go...
awesome story...
nice updates...

chapter 19 is confusing...
update soon..
eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing ff dear..
add me in ur pm listt..
NidhaA thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Confusion hi confusion...
Solution kuch patah nahin...
Badi babhiji...
Apne tho humein conpused kar diyan...
Geet madam kya chupaayi beti hain...
Aakhir Sam mein ithna interest...
Kya pak raha hain aapke dimaage mein Sur di...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice FF... waiting for Geet's mystery to be revealed..
-Mishu- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for next part
Please update soon dear
sur001 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello friends ...I am really sorry as I was not able to update since months ...hope you will like this part...where the secret behind Geet's coming back in Maan's life will be revealed
Your comments and likes always encourages me...do shaere your views-
Friends A new character is making entry ...Meet Viraj Dobrial
Chapter-20
The Stranger
Geet was making coffee in kitchen when Maan peeped inside and found her lost in her thoughts...He came inside and cleared his throat bringing Geet back from her world
Maan came beside her and said"Geet ,I had heard girls get lost in the dreams of their future life but I had not heard they boil coffee to such a level that everything gets evaporated leaving the left out coffee particles..."
Geet gave a look to maan and then to the pot in which she was making coffee...then again she gave an innocent look to Maan which made him laugh...
Maan felt like caressing her cheeks but controlled his emotions and said making his voice serious"Miss Geet handa you cannot do anything properly..you always need someone's help...so you are fired from this job..I order you to sit and learn how to make coffee"
Geet pouted"Karwi jaban do you even know how to make sweet coffee"
Maan pulled his collars up and said" better than you"
Geet sat down and after some time Maan had prepared coffee and sandwich for both of them...
Maan"Breakfast is ready,Madam...now tell what were you thinking?"
Geet"you were right I was thinking abou Sid and our marriage"
Maan"Geet you cannot lie to me then why you always attempt it instead of saying the truth..I know something is troubling you since last few days..Is it related to Sid?"
Geet instantly replied"No ,Sid is a nice guy..He loves me a lot"
Maan"This is not an answer to the question I asked...I had not asked he loves you or not"
Geet"um..Maan everything is fine"
Maan"Ok if you say so"
Maan(st) "no geet there is something which you are not saying but I will find out.."
Geet "maan, I need to leave ,Sid wanted to see me"
Maan"He is taking you away for the whole life ...cannot I get few moments?"
Geet stood and said"why not but now I need to leave"
Geet was on her way to Sid's hospital and Sid's words were ringing in her head...she parked the car and straight away went to Sid's cabin...How is Sona?..Is she fine?We are doing everything as he had said then why ?
Before Sid could say anything a man entered the cabin and settled himself on an empty chair then said"Why are you bothering the restless soul ..he is already tensed so I will answer you sweety"
Geet held his collar"Viraj,I wont leave you..where is Sona?"
Viraj made himself free of her clutch and replied with a wicked smile"Sona..she is great you know she cries and shouts to leave her and let her away from there but no one replies to her plea...Last week I had went to meet her you know I felt so pity for that young lady who is paying price for her to be sister-in law's friend's deeds ..poor girl"
Geet"It was Sameera who betrayed Maan and you had said Maan killed Sameera but the truth is that she is alive"
Virat's smile faded for a second but he again covered it with the same wickedness"Geet Handa listen carefully...dont forget why I had sent you there..It was not destiny but I who sent you to him so that I can destroy him and take my revenge for snatching my Sam from me, for misbehaving with my sam, for beating her, for using her and for killing her after enjoying her beauty , her body and then dumping her..."
Geet"It was not Maan but Sam who was wrong"
Viraj kept his finger on her lips and gave a fierceful look to Geet while saying"Sid tell your fiance to keep quiet when I am speaking...If I get irritated then your sister can be in trouble...you know like Sona kahin so na jay(making his voice serious) hamesa ke liye"
Sid pleaded Geet from his eyes to keep mum...
Virat caressed geet's cheek"That's like a good girl...now tell me where are the papers I had asked you to bring?"
Geet said with determination"First you tell ,where is sona?"
Viraj"In my pocket...Geet,Geet you know I like you for your this attitude that's why I had proposed you for marriage to make my plan easy obviously but what you did you ran away with this doctor...First give the papers and then I will give your sona "
Geet"I don't trust you"
Viraj"I never said you to trust me ...now I will take your leave you both plan for your mehndi and one more thing welcome as I know you wont thank me for fixing your marriage so early"
He left with a grin...Geet hugged a broken Sid as soon as Viraj left
Don't worry Sid...Nothing will happen to Sona...she will come back but when he came?"
Sid sighed"Yesterday when I was returning back he called me and asked if his work is done and if not then I should be ready for the worst result thats why I had come to you last night "
Geet sat down on a chair and Sid sat beaside resting his head on her shoulder..."Geet ,I am sorry but I am helpless"
Riddhima knocked the door and Sid stood up...She greeted Geet with a smile and informed Sid that they need to leave for an important meeting...Sid went with her asking Geet to wait for him...Geet settled herself on a chair and got lost in past..
Flashback
Geet returned home leaving everything behind her and took admission in her own city...Everything was going fine,Geet had started afresh though it was difficult to forget Maan but she had accepted the bitter truth ...one day , she came happily to her house and announced that she passed her fashion course with high grades...A grand party was thrown for her and Viraj her ,Maan's and Sameera's common friend came there ...Geet was really pleased to see him unknown of the fact he had come to use her as weapon in destroying Maan...He started visiting her house regularly and had impressed every single being in the house and then he went for the most important part of his plan by proposing Geet infront of the whole house...Everyone was liking him but Geet she had never thought about him in that manner...She rejected the proposal but after that whole house was behind her making her realize how good Viraj was...
One day he came to her and said "Geet,I know you love Maan but you also know that I love Sam and we both didn't get what we had craved for so I thought we can together make a life where there will be no need to forget our respective love but we can try to move ahead holding each other's hand for making a better future together...Geet, I wont force you to do anything but think peacefully...I promise I will be always loyal to you and will do anything to keep you happy..Its the right time when you should move on..I should move on...We should move on"
Flashback ends
Geet thought "How impressive his words were...How impressively he trapped me in his smart tactis that I agreed and was almost near to get myself sacrifised in his plan but its said truly God is there to protect his children that's why Sid came on time to save me
Flashback
Geet was wearing a peach colour lehenga...when two hands covered her eyes...Geet smiled and said"sid please I can recognize you even in dark.."
Sid"Kya geet kabhi toh surprise karne diya kar but yaar why you did this to me...I waited years for you and you were so eager to get married that you were unable to wait for some months"
Geet said"Ab majak band kar"
The words which Geet took as joke were the real feelings of Sid...
Sid smiled and said"acha ab bas kar milwayegi nahi apne hero se"
Viraj entered the room and said"Talk of the devil and the devil is here"
Sid smiled and greeted him
Flashback ends
Viraj even impressed Sid but Sid felt something unusual about him and he was right about Viraj...
Flashback
A day before her marriage Geet went to meet Viraj for thanking him for heading her towards a new beginning...The door was open so she entered and as she reached near his room the sight shook her...Viraj was kissing a girl ,she hid beside the door and heard their conversation ...
Viraj"Piya , everything is going according to our plan...Geet will be married to me tomorrow and she will do what I will say to her"
Piya"Are you sure she will do what you will say...she is not any puppet"
Viraj smirked and said"She will have to if she loves her life then she will have to help me in destroying maan otherwise I will torture her to an extent where she will plead for death but will not get it...He killed my Sam I wont leave him so easily..Geet will be my weapon against him"
Geet ran away from his house and reached to Sid's house...She was horrified ...She hugged him and pleaded for help..Sid who was really confused by her behaviour calmed her and asked the reason.She described everything to Sid...Sid called Rano and told her everything...Rano told them to go away as she was knowing they cannot stop this marriage until they have a proof...Family wont believe in Geet's word as for them Viraj is a person having all the good qualities
Flashback ends
Sid and mom united to save me from that devil...I still remember mom's word that Sid wont leave me alone and helpless in any situation and this is the sign of love...I will be happy if I return him the same love but it was difficult for me to give any other man same place in my heart that I had given to Maan...We left for London and thought now we are away from Viraj's clutch which was a big mistake...that day also came when Sid proposed me and I had to accept his proposal as I did not want to break his heart ..his sister my sweet little 14 year friend Sona was most happy ...We exchanged our rings then Sid planned to return back to India as it was more than an year of that incident...We came back and settled in Mumbai but we were unknown of the fact that Viraj was still in our search or better to say in my search and he found me ...His work became easier than before as his prey came herself in his mouth...I was in India..life started coming on track...I was about to marry Sid in a week but a day before marriage a phone call destroyed everything ...Viraj had kidnapped Sona and wanted me to help him in destroying maan ...we contacted police but it was of no use he warned us next time anything like that happens he wont kill sona but...Geet closed her eyes an pain and after that everything was planned ...planned by him ...from my entry to my marriage ...I was like a puppet of his hand...I joined Maan's office not to help him but to get cpompany's secrets and above all to get Khurana property transferred on Viraj's name...I cheated maan as I was helpless but now I have a ray of hope and that's to find everything about Sam...but I need to do something fast as only three days are left to marriage...
Geet turned on hearing her name called out by someone...She was surprised to see him there and felt he is the person god has sent to save me...but will he help me? Maybe but I wont back out now...I wont let anyone to harm you maan"
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Edited by sur001 - 13 years ago
sur001 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks😊
shweta1491 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my god...aftet a longgg time
its awesome dear jst loved it
poor geet sufferd a lot...
So basically sid is nice guy...
Mind blowing pls cont soon
thanks fr pm
-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just mindblowng update..lovd the way maan teasd geet sayng i heard girls get lost in thoughts thnkng abt their future bt nt heard that they let evaporate coffee in to tiny particles..lol..it made me remember my actns..i'l get scoldngs always 4 ths act..
Cntinue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb , Fantastic and amazing want some more

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