VIRRUDH-ATOOT RISHTE( MY FIRS FF EVER!!!!!!) - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😎hey ...THUMS UP đŸ‘đŸŒ to you!!!!!😎

this chapter for me like thisđŸ„ł

vasudha falldown on sushant !arms omg yes i want đŸ€Łmore!!!!!!


heysharmaji got sry from vasudha😎

sushant switch off light before she protest wid him😍


i cant waitđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€Ł

also ice cream was so lucky 😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww thank you sooo much, i am VERY HAPPY, you liked it!!! update your ff on them with there first meeting soon,. i cant wait to read more on that!! and your ff on VaSu after marriage!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
amazing updates!!
loved Sushant and Vasudha romantic scene.
thanks for the pm.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: fri42911

amazing updates!!

loved Sushant and Vasudha romantic scene.
thanks for the pm.
please continue soon.


Thank you!!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHAPTER 9

( vasudha pushes sushannts arm away, and throws a pillow at him)

Vasudha- no way sharmaji... get up.. Aap jaisa sooch rahe hai waisa nahi hoga

( vasudha gets, up from sushant's embrace and turns on the light)

Sushant- kya vasudha... dhek se soone toh dou!! Mujhe suna hai!

Vasudha- liken mein aaise nahi soosakat thi.

Sushant- ( in an angry tone gets up) fine!! Bolo kya kare..

Vasudha- ummm hum tv dekta hai!

Sushant- t.v. ? no.. way mujhe bahout needhi arye hai.. Good night

Vasudha- sushant suno toh..

( sushant closes the light again and lays back down again, pulling vasudha down to)

( Vasudha is about to hit sushant with a pillow again, but then stops herself, she sees sushant's innocent face and him sleeping peacefully, she moves closer to him and looks at him for a few seconds, smiling to herself just then sushant wakes up, startling vasudha)

Sushant- ( in a loving tone) kya kare rahe ho... vasudha.. Tum jante hona mujhe yeh saab shaadi se phele pasand nahi hai..( Sushant starts laughing)

Vasudha- ( becomes irritated) sushant... tum mera mazak kare rahe ho!

Sushant- arye.. Mein kahan mazak kar raha hon, I am serious!

Vasudha- sushant... tum... ahhh.. Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karne

Sushant- kyuin?? Bahi maine kya kiya? Phir se jagda karna hai kya? Mein ready hoja ta huin!

Vasudha- tumhe mazak soujhe raha hai!

Sushant- hain.. Mujhe mazak karna bahout paasan hai! ( smiling at vasudha)

( Vasudha looks at sushant, and then suddenly sees something, in his pocket, something like a chain, she moves closer to him and pulls it out and it turns out to be the key)đŸ˜Č

Vasudha- ( shocked) sharma ji.. Yeh kya hai

( Sushant is to shocked to answer anything)

Sushant- woh... yeh.. Woh.. Mein

Vasudha- kya yeh, woh, mein kare rahe ho? chawi tumrae paas kaise aye...Sushant tumhe chawi milthi na?

Sushant- hain... woh mujhe milthi liken mein chata tha kya tum aaj raat mere saath raho... is liye chawi nahi de.

( Vasudha opens up the hand cuffs with the key, and gets up from the bed to leave, she is angry at sushant.)

Sushant- Vasudha suno toh...

( he grabs vasudhas hand from behind)

Vasudha- Sushant haath chodu mera!! Mujhe koi baat nahi karne... tum asia kaise kar sakte ho?

( sushant pulls vasudha back-ward and embraces her)

Sushant- ( in a loving tone, whispers to vasudha's ear) I am sorry..😳

Vasudha- ( gets goose bumps all around) Sushant... tum chode mujhe.😍

( vasudha pulls away from sushant, but sushant hold on to her firmly,
sushant moves closer to vasudha, he pulls vasudha hair back, and starts to kiss her neck, but vasudha stops him)😍

Vasudha- sushant aasa soch na bhi mat!!
(she breaks away from him and starts to leave again, but sushant blocks the door)

Sushant- vasudha.. Maine joh kuch bhi kiya woh sierf tumrahe karib aane kya liye.

Vasudha- sushant mera rasta chodu..

Sushant- ( smiling at vasudha), and moves closer to vasudha ) nahi... tum kahin nahi jawo gaye aaj raat tum yahin raho gaye.


Edited by SushantVasudha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
after i read this chapter i cant eat coz that scenes nt only in my mind or eyes its completely affcted my heart !! dnt hav hungry to eat😛


i thought hw could be like always like this ( vasudha and sushant being together )😳

happy tears in my eyes ... FOR THIS CHAPER!

ur really great puja ur last two chapter..Aowsome!👏👏day by day ur chaper is much more intresting!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SushantVasudha

awww thank you sooo much, i am VERY HAPPY, you liked it!!! update your ff on them with there first meeting soon,. i cant wait to read more on that!! and your ff on VaSu after marriage!



ok dear i ll post my chapter!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: live 4 smriti

after i read this chapter i cant eat coz that scenes nt only in my mind or eyes its completely affcted my heart !! dnt hav hungry to eat😛



i thought hw could be like always like this ( vasudha and sushant being together )😳

happy tears in my eyes ... FOR THIS CHAPER!

ur really great puja ur last two chapter..Aowsome!👏👏day by day ur chaper is much more intresting!


Thank you so much, for your comment!!!! and i can't WAIT for your chapter!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi


sushant started his explanations abt system files and file details ( he suddenly stand up from .and goes close to vasudha .,vasudha felt happy and bit neverous) she also got some nice feelings when sushant near wid her sushant also felt happy

within few mins they started same lovable looks as eye to eye! they looks very close wid love!!!
they are forgot themself few sconds.,after that they back normal!

they feels abnormal,

sushant:oh ab apko thoda pata chal gaya hoga,he looks vasudha wid some uncomfortable feelings
( but vasudha felt she needs t learn more from him)


vasudha: nai abhi ajeeb lakta hai( sushant understand her feelings)

sushant:koi baat nai apko batha hu ga( he sees vasudha's hair style when she moves her hair wid her to the
ear side wid her fingers,he loves that style)

vasudha:ji ( vasudha's heart felt happy when sushant looks at her)

sushant:phle app apke ajeep soch ko chodna hai aur fir sab ka badhe sun ligiyeh likin faisla app
kiji yeh apke dil ke khe ne par

vasudha:par dil tho bhut koch kaha tho...
sushant:tho iska matlab app khud mein analsis kar na pade gha .kya news hai..news apko akabar ko
kya hoga, news kaise kis tari ke se log ko ponch na hai ,.is mein sare news ek baar thodsa pad
ligiyeh.,
is mein linka kya us mein kuch eraze kar na hai ya nai..like that!(she got some confident and idea
from sushant( vasudha loves his stlye of exaplanations.,he likes every bit manarisoms of sushant her
eyes follow him his eyes ..his hands movement..his speech stlye everything )

vasudha:agar meri waje se koi kabar galat tari ke se publish hoga ya tho mera matlab mistakes sahi tari
kese pechan na payegi tho!,

sushant:aisa kuch nai hoga phle maan me aur dhimak se negative thought ko nikal dhi gi yeh sirf
apni papa ke lieyh soch kar kaam ki giyeh..usko ideal lekar kaam shuru ki ji yeh

( vasudha gets stunned on sushant for give her right way,,this idea coz this the way hav to go for
everything)

then vasudha apko bhut thanks sushantji muje ab acha lak tha hai(she want to speak something to him)

sushant:ab mein chal tha hu koi madat or kaam hai bulaligiyeh!( he leaves,,but its seems tough for hm
felt something affect him)

then sushant goes to his cabin its lunch time! both started eat launch in thier cabin ( sushant heart felt hard
to eat lunch...otherside vasudha feels tears but she cant cry..but she also feels that something she
want.coz its difficult for her ...love.emotion happiness..desire,like war in her heart ..she sit
calm try to eat but cant eat even bit!(after lunch time she goes to sushant cabin want to see him

sushant thought to ask abt his report to see vasudha!but vasudha comes there!!

( she stands infront of sushant,,sushant felt some relif from love pain!)


vasudha:woh mein apse kuch baat karni hai apke report ke bare mein..

sushant:ji khahe yeh!

vasudha:woh meine papa se baat kar liya! woh maan bhi liya.tho apki report
hum chap kar sak tha hai..

sushant:ji thanx..again see each other eye to eye wid love..vasudha expect sushant to talk something
to her ..she waits but sushant also cant speak her..

in the evening vasudha reach her car to go..on the other side devyani in tension and she talked wid phone
to car serive!

sushant also comes there to start his bike to go for somework..,

sushant:devyani.,kya hua?itni tension kyu hu tum..

devyani:sushant meri gadi ko serice ko baja hai tho soch that gadi ajyagi likin ab tak nahi aya,

sushant:koi baat nai mein tumne drop karunga!,(vasudha noticed that)

devyani:nai sushant tum chalo na..

sushant:oh common devyani..zid mat karo and chalo.,(vasudha feels insecure something she lost..)

then devyani sit in sushant;s bike( vasudha completly breakdown by her heart,she cant bear that)

then sushant and devyani leaves..vasudha get into her car ..she thinks y she feels like this ,she hav no idea
but she feels cry..wid so much pain even she cant cry..she goes to her home ..nt to talk anyone!!she goes to her
bed even hav nt take her dinner!!

Then mid night sushant calls vasudha,

vasudha:(pick ups phone) hello,(she hear sushant voice ,she is out from her love pain..,

sushant:sry is wqt mein apko disturb nai kar na chay tha..

vasudha:aisi koi baat nai ,,kha he yeh kaisa phone kiya

sushant:kya ghar theek se poch gayi..kyun aap akele rehe ke dekar parishant lag raha tha...fir socha apko gadi hai tho muje
acha laga..app theek tho ho na...(he asked her wid much care)

vasudha:ji mein theek hu( now vasudha understand and felt better
few seconds both nt cut thier phone.talk wid as their heart)kuch khe na he?

sushant:ji good night!

vasudha:ji apko bhi! (both feels better now...:)















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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWWW, that was too cute!! OMG... i loved it!!! continue plzzz

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