okay guys here is Chapter 1
Chapter 1
( DRS, he is in his study room reading a new paper, when vasudha comes rushing to his room)
Vasudha- " papa!! Happy Birthday" ( Vasudha goes and gives him a big hug) " Many Many happy returns of the day".
DRS- " Thank you so much" where have you been since morning i have been looking all day for you"
Vasudha- " well.. i went to the temple with nani"
DRS- " where is Nani, then"
( just then nani comes in)
Nani- " hmmm this crazy girl left me in the car" "she was so worried that her father will be looking for". she fought so much with the driver, that he quiet his job and left." " hahahahhaha"
DRS-" ohhh i see" ( eyeing vasudha")
Vasudha- " okay, what ever." Come with me papa"
DRS-" where"?
Vasudha- " to your boss"
DRS- " you are my boss"
Vasudha- " well then do as your boss say and come with me"
( vasudha takes DRS to the temple, and does tilak on him)
Vasudha- " ask for anything you want today"
DRS- ( laughing) " what do i need to ask for? i have everything". " but there is one thing that i would like to ask him".
Vasudha- " and whats that"?
DRS- " that in every life time give me a daughter like you"
( Vasudha gets teary eyed)
( Vedika comes in clapping)
Vedika- " Wow!! just wow", i feel like i just saw some scene from a movie" " wow, what emotions"
Vasudha- " vedika" is it necessary to drink this much?"
Vedika- " of course not sweetheart, but what can i do?' " being drunk makes all the sorrow go away"
Vasudha- " it is papa's birthday today"
Vedika- ohhh, yup sorry, "Happy birthday papa"
( vedika moves toward DRS almost falling, and is about to give him a hug, but DRS stops her)
DRS-" Forget it", " there is no need for that, i would have appreciated it better if you came here sober, but you are clearly drunk" ( walks away)
Vedika-" Come on papa", i know you hate me, but at least give me a proper hug?
( DRS keeps walking)
Vedika- " what ever", its not like you have ever loved me before" so why now"
Vasudha-" vedikaaa!!" was that necessary" " you could have spread him today" " you know how much papa has to bear because of your behavior?
( Vedika gets angry"
Vedika- " PAPA HAS ENDURE A LOT"???????? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?? if anyone has suffered in this house then that's my mom!! she stood there, in that corner slowly crying to death", and you're telling me papa has endure a lot"??? ' he doesn't care for anything". "he is a SELFISH MAN"
Vasudha- "VEDIKA" enough! i don't want to hear a word against him"
Vedika- " Really, and why is that"??? " i am telling the truth, open your eyes!!! or you will regret this later" " i am only doing this for you, i don't want you to end up like me"
Vasudha- " why are you hurting papa, everyday for me"??? " if you think that by believing you, i suspect him, then i am sorry vedika, i can't do that" " anyways, why are we having this conversation" " you are clearly drunk, go to sleep"
( Vasudha starts walking away, and vedika follows)
Vedika- " don't walk away from me"!!! " you can run away from the truth"!!! " who are you to tell me what to do and what not to do" you have no right" " forget me you don't even have right in this house"
( Vasudha turns around)
Vasudha- " and you have a right"
Vedika- "yeah, of course i do" i am Dhirendra Raisinghaniya legitimate child" " and you are illegitimate"
( Vasudha hearing this gets upset and walks away, just then DRS comes out of his study, and walks toward Vedika)
( DRS slaps vedika)
DRS- " GO TO YOUR ROOM"!!!! NOW!!!
( vedika, walks toward her room, and falls in bed)
Vedika-" what ever, i am used to this now anyways".
( DRS comes to vasudha room, where she is crying, and sits besides her)
DRS- " Vasudha, i should be the one saying sorry to you" " this is all my fault" " you have to endure all this because of my mistakes"
Vasudha-" no, papa it is not your fault" " what you did, no other father would have done" excepting your mistake in front of the world, takes courage" " i will always be thankful for that"
DRS- " vasudha, by excepting you, i didn't do you any favor, it was your right"
Vasudha- " i don't understand, why vedika can't see you're kindness"
DRS- " she has always been like that, but come on now, are we going to celebrate my birthday like this"? in tears?" forget what happened" " and besides aren't you you going to serve me breakfast" " i am starving"
( vasudha smiling gets up)
Vasudha- " of course, i will just get to it"
DRS- " and by the way, where is vedant"?
Vasudha-" ummm he is probably on his way from the gym"
DRS-" as soon has he comes home, inform me, i want to talk to him".
Vasudha-" okay"
so what did you guys think?? is it good? please tell me if i am adding to little details or to many details or if it sounds realistic or not. and any suggestion you have plzzz do say!
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