VIRRUDH-ATOOT RISHTE( MY FIRS FF EVER!!!!!!)

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Hey everyone, i am puja, and this is my first ff ever! so hope you guys enjoy!

ok, my story is going to be based on the show Virrudh which used to air on Sony. i might used the same story but add my scenes into it. hope you guys like it.

CHARACTERS

Vasudha Raisinghaniya(main lead)- vasudha is a loving caring girl. she is cheerful and sweet. vasudha will do anything for her father. she worships him like god, and can't stand a word against him. vasudha is the oldest of the 4 children. she is also the illegitimate daughter of her father.

Dhirendra Raisinghaniya- ( main lead) power hungry man. father of vasudha, vedika, vedant and shreay. DRS runs the newspaper company Danik Darpan. he is a very powerful man. he uses his newspaper to either destroy people or make people. he is a ruthless businessmen and will do anything to get his way in business, yet he is a kind and loving father. ohh and by the way i will call him DRS, so i don't have to write the long name so if u see DRS that's him.

Vedika Raisinghaniya- the second oldest daughter of DRS. Vedika hates her father very much. she thinks her father is always playing games with everyone. she always tries to warn Vasudha against him saying he doesn't deserve her love. while vasudha concerned her father god, vedika concerns her father the devil.

Vedant Raisinghaniya- third oldest son of DRS. very cool type guy. loves his sisters a lot. very handsome, and loves chillings with friends.

Shreay Raisinghaniya- the youngest daughter of DRS, like all rich girls she is ultra glam and fun loving, being the youngest she is often pampered a lot by her father and siblings. she is your girl next door.

Nani- well she is your typical nani, like all nanis are.

Sushant Sharma- ( main lead) sushant works as a chief reporter in DRS office. he loves vasudha a lot and she too loves him. they have been together for 6 years, but are afriad to say anything in front of vasudha's father might disapprove. sushant and DRS never really get along, like vedika sushant also thinks DRS is a bad person and is always telling Vasudha her father will never let there relationship go any further and that he is not what she thinks he is.

Sinha- Sinha is a powerful politician whose relationship with Dhirendra Raisinghaniya goes back a long way. He will do anything to get his way. best friend of DRS. Sinha is also against sushant, as sushant is collecting evidence against him.


Devyani- She works in Dhirendra's newspaper Dainik Darpan. Dhirendra used her when he needed her & then never look back at her after reaching heights of success. Devyani is waiting for that day when she can take revenge from Dhirendra for whatever he did to her. she also has a liking for sushant, and is friends with him.


Vasudha is the dotting daughter of her father. they stand together. DRS trust's vasudha with everything. he relies on vasudha from his morning pills to handling his flies. vasudha is the illegitimate daughter of DRS, she was put in the orphanage by her mother in till 5. when she was 5 DRS fund out about her and excepted his mistake in front of the world, this is why vasudha respects her father so much and worships him. but destiny has something-else planned for her. is her father really that good of a person? if not then what will happen when she discovers the truth about her father? how will she handle the reality of a man she worshiped for 25 years.
SOO what do you guys think?? do you guys want me to write it or not? this is my first ff ever so the story might be the same as the original serial, but i will add extra scenes and stuff. maybe in the future i can come up with a new story.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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okay guys here is Chapter 1

Chapter 1

( DRS, he is in his study room reading a new paper, when vasudha comes rushing to his room)

Vasudha- " papa!! Happy Birthday" ( Vasudha goes and gives him a big hug) " Many Many happy returns of the day".

DRS- " Thank you so much" where have you been since morning i have been looking all day for you"

Vasudha- " well.. i went to the temple with nani"

DRS- " where is Nani, then"

( just then nani comes in)

Nani- " hmmm this crazy girl left me in the car" "she was so worried that her father will be looking for". she fought so much with the driver, that he quiet his job and left." " hahahahhaha"

DRS-" ohhh i see" ( eyeing vasudha")

Vasudha- " okay, what ever." Come with me papa"

DRS-" where"?

Vasudha- " to your boss"

DRS- " you are my boss"

Vasudha- " well then do as your boss say and come with me"

( vasudha takes DRS to the temple, and does tilak on him)

Vasudha- " ask for anything you want today"

DRS- ( laughing) " what do i need to ask for? i have everything". " but there is one thing that i would like to ask him".

Vasudha- " and whats that"?

DRS- " that in every life time give me a daughter like you"

( Vasudha gets teary eyed)

( Vedika comes in clapping)

Vedika- " Wow!! just wow", i feel like i just saw some scene from a movie" " wow, what emotions"

Vasudha- " vedika" is it necessary to drink this much?"

Vedika- " of course not sweetheart, but what can i do?' " being drunk makes all the sorrow go away"

Vasudha- " it is papa's birthday today"

Vedika- ohhh, yup sorry, "Happy birthday papa"

( vedika moves toward DRS almost falling, and is about to give him a hug, but DRS stops her)

DRS-" Forget it", " there is no need for that, i would have appreciated it better if you came here sober, but you are clearly drunk" ( walks away)

Vedika-" Come on papa", i know you hate me, but at least give me a proper hug?

( DRS keeps walking)

Vedika- " what ever", its not like you have ever loved me before" so why now"

Vasudha-" vedikaaa!!" was that necessary" " you could have spread him today" " you know how much papa has to bear because of your behavior?

( Vedika gets angry"

Vedika- " PAPA HAS ENDURE A LOT"???????? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?? if anyone has suffered in this house then that's my mom!! she stood there, in that corner slowly crying to death", and you're telling me papa has endure a lot"??? ' he doesn't care for anything". "he is a SELFISH MAN"

Vasudha- "VEDIKA" enough! i don't want to hear a word against him"

Vedika- " Really, and why is that"??? " i am telling the truth, open your eyes!!! or you will regret this later" " i am only doing this for you, i don't want you to end up like me"

Vasudha- " why are you hurting papa, everyday for me"??? " if you think that by believing you, i suspect him, then i am sorry vedika, i can't do that" " anyways, why are we having this conversation" " you are clearly drunk, go to sleep"

( Vasudha starts walking away, and vedika follows)

Vedika- " don't walk away from me"!!! " you can run away from the truth"!!! " who are you to tell me what to do and what not to do" you have no right" " forget me you don't even have right in this house"

( Vasudha turns around)

Vasudha- " and you have a right"

Vedika- "yeah, of course i do" i am Dhirendra Raisinghaniya legitimate child" " and you are illegitimate"

( Vasudha hearing this gets upset and walks away, just then DRS comes out of his study, and walks toward Vedika)

( DRS slaps vedika)

DRS- " GO TO YOUR ROOM"!!!! NOW!!!

( vedika, walks toward her room, and falls in bed)

Vedika-" what ever, i am used to this now anyways".

( DRS comes to vasudha room, where she is crying, and sits besides her)

DRS- " Vasudha, i should be the one saying sorry to you" " this is all my fault" " you have to endure all this because of my mistakes"

Vasudha-" no, papa it is not your fault" " what you did, no other father would have done" excepting your mistake in front of the world, takes courage" " i will always be thankful for that"

DRS- " vasudha, by excepting you, i didn't do you any favor, it was your right"

Vasudha- " i don't understand, why vedika can't see you're kindness"

DRS- " she has always been like that, but come on now, are we going to celebrate my birthday like this"? in tears?" forget what happened" " and besides aren't you you going to serve me breakfast" " i am starving"

( vasudha smiling gets up)

Vasudha- " of course, i will just get to it"

DRS- " and by the way, where is vedant"?

Vasudha-" ummm he is probably on his way from the gym"

DRS-" as soon has he comes home, inform me, i want to talk to him".

Vasudha-" okay"

so what did you guys think?? is it good? please tell me if i am adding to little details or to many details or if it sounds realistic or not. and any suggestion you have plzzz do say!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2

(episode starts with Vasudha serving breakfast to DRS , when vedant comes rushing in)

Vedant-" papa! papa! happy birthday! ( he bends down to touch his feet and hits his head on the table)"

DRS- " ummm hmmm, kya kar rahe ho"

Vedant-" sorry papa, galte ho gaye" " ouch"

DRS- "tumne apne career kay bare mein kya socha hai?"

Vedant-" papa, actually mujhe model ban na hai"

( vasudha starts laughing)

Vasudha- " what'????

DRS-" maine tumse apne career kay bare main pucha", " naki tumhare hobbies"

Vedan-" i know papa, liken aaj kal hobbies koi be career bana ja saka ta hai"

DRS-" Vasudha, main apane study main ho, paper behjawa de na "

Vasudha-" ji, papa"

( DRS leaves from from there"

Vasudha-" vedant! idiot, ek sawal ka jawab dhang se nahi de sakta"?

Vedant-" whaaat?? maine kya kiya?, " model ban ne main kya buria hai?

Vasudha-" tum nahi sumjho gayi"

Vedant-" anyways, di, i need your help, ek problem hai"

Vasudha- ( vasudha remembers something') " problem to hai"

Vedant-" kya"????

Vasudha-" shreya" ( vasudha rushes upstairs where shreya is getting ready"

Vasudha-" shreya, kya kar rahi ho"? college nahi jana?

Shreya-" bas di mein abhi abhi nikal rahi thi"

Vasudha-" shreya, aaj papa ka janam din hai, tumne wish kiya"

Shreya" ohhh, uhhh PAPA, PAPA !!!( goes screaming downstairs)

Vasudha-" shreyaaa chillao mat"

( shreya goes to DRS study)

Shreya-" papa, happy birthday" ( gives him a hug)

DRS-" thank you my princess" " yeh kya abhi aap college nahi gaye"?

( just then vasudha comes in)

Vasudha- " aap ki princess koi tayar ho na main kitna waqt lagta hai"

Shreya-" okay, di i go to go, bye"

Vasudha-" aye ladki, breakfast kaun kare ga"?

Shreya-" di late ho raha hai" BYE!!!!!!!!"

Vasudha- " shreya suno to" "kamal hai yeh ladki"

(DRS starts laughing)

DRS- " vasudha ladki badi ho jate hai, kuch baata hai nahi chalta"

( just then the door bill rings)

Vasudha-" yeh lo, hogi aap ki ladki, saro kuch bhool gayi hogi"

( vasudha, goes to open the door, but finds sushant there, oh and by the way vasudha calls sushant sharmajii out of love)

Vasudha-" ohhh sharmajii aap hai" "ab aye ho mujhe se milne"

Sushant-" tumse"? " tumhare baap se milne aayi huin" chalo hoto"

Vasudha-" acha hai, waise aaj papa ka birthday hai, agar apne papa se mere haath mang liya, toh woh shaayad maan ja yeh."

Sushant-" actually, mujhe to yeh file dene thi, magar aap itna kahe rai hai to maang lata hai'
( sushant starts moving closer toward vasudha, and pushes vasudha towards the door, holding her tight by the waist)

Vasudha-" sushant!!!!!" kya kar rai ho, koi dekh laga"

Sushant-" dekh to dekha nai do, main kisi se nahi darta"

Vasudha-" yeahh whatever" " ab mujhe chodo na" " sushaaant"

Sushant-" bhai itni asani se thode chodo ga, pahale ek kiss toh ho jaya"

( sushant moves more closer to vasudha, in till there faces are an inch apart)

Vasudha-" sushant, chodo mujhe" ( vasudha pushes sushant away) " jis kaam ki leya aye ho woh toh pura karo" jawo aur papa se baat karo" " go"

Sushant-( sighing) " chalo, puche ti hain tumhare bapa se" " dekh ti hai kya jawab hai"

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Chapter 3

( sushant goes to DRS study to talk to him, DRS is on the phone)

DRS-" ahhh sushant, file mujhe de do"

Sushant-" ummm, mujhe aap se kuch baat kare ne thi"

DRS-" sushant, is waqt toh mein todha busy huin, office main milo"

Sushant-" baat bahout important hai..."

DRS-(sighing)" paagra badha ne hai?" "koi baat nahi, vasudha se baat karlo"

( sushant stands there disspointed, while DRS leaves)

Sushant-" dekha tumare papa ka jawaab" " maine kaho tha na tum se, hamra rishta kabhi nahi hona dega tumra bapa"

Vasudha-" sushant... he didn't mean that" " tum papa koi galta samjhe rai ho".

Sushant-" yeah... whatever, chalta huin"

Vasudha-" sushant..listen( sushant walks out, leaving vasudha worried).

( in the office DRS calls sushant to his cabin)

Sushant- " may i come in, sir"

DRS-" sushant, yes yes come in, main tumra hai itntzaar kare ra ha tha"

Sushant-" kyuin"? " koi galte hogaye mujhe se?"

DRS-(laughing)" nahi nahi" " asae koi baat nahi hai"

Sushant-" toh, phir"?

DRS-" main yeh suna hai kay, tum kahin deenos se Singha kya bare main jan win kare rae hai ho?" " mujhe singha ka phone aye tha"

Sushant-" hain, maine singha kya bare main sare information hazari ki hai, ki woh garbi kya naam paisa bana ta hai, aur kuhd kah jata hai"

DRS-" hmmm, sushant, yeh information paki hai, yeh mein kaise maan lu?"

Sushant-" aap ki maan yeah na maan ne se kuch nahi hoga, aap ki pyaar dost fiance minster Singha, bahut jalde ex-finace minster hone wale hai"

DRS-" SUSHANT! main tumra BOSS huin, tamez se baat karo" " or yeh report ju tumne bane hai, woh nahi publishes hogi, woh report meri hawal kar do"

Sushant-" yeh report mere paas hai rahi gai and woh report main chaap wa kar ro honga"

DRS-" bahut bare kimat chuka ne padagi"

Sushant-" sach ki liye main kuch be kar sakta huin"

( sushant leaves the cabin)

( DRS thinking to him self, sushant ka toh kuch kar na pade ga)

( sushant is walking to his cabin when he bumps into devyani)

Sushant-" ohhh sorry, maine deka nahi"

devyani-" aree koi baat nahi, chalo is baha nahi tum hum se takrai toh sahi"

Sushant-" devyani, please, mazal ki mood main nahi ho"

Devyani-" kyuin vasudha si jagda ho wa"

Sushant-" nahi, uske pyaar papa si"

Devyani-" ab is tara se boss ki beti kya saath ishq farma woh gi, toh problems toh hogi na"

Sushant-" DRS koi jo kare na hai woh kare, main vasudha se shaadi kare kya hai rahon ga"

Devyani-" or agar DRS nahi yeh nahi hone dia toh"?
Sushant-" unko pucha kaoun raha hai" " mera pyaar, itna kamzor nahi hai kya koi be ake mita sake, khud DRS be nahi" " anyways chalta huin" " bye"

(Devyani thinking to herself " sushant, tum kya jano ki DRS kya kar sakta hai")


Edited by SushantVasudha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx puja ..am so proud of u👍🏼⭐️plz continue this and i wish u ..one day ll be proud for BEING VaSu fan ur really great

vasudha n sushant still living wid ur fiction...WELLDONE👏👏👏

PUJA!. ITS TIME TO 🤗

dont care n worry others will support u or not am always wid u!
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amazing FF!!!
loved it.
thanks for the pm
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CHapter 4

(sushant is in his cabin, thinking about the conversation with DRS, when vasudha calls him)

Sushant- ha bolo vasudha

Vasudha- sushant kahan ho tum?

Sushant- aur kaha hoga office mein

Vasudha- acha, dhek hai, ummm sushant tum papa ki baat koi laykar naraaz toh nahin ho na?

Sushant-(smiling)ji nahi, aap ki papa ko toh hum baat mein ma na lengi, phil har toh aap zara tayar ho jana aaj raat ki liye.

Vasudha-kyun? aaj raat ka kya program hai?

Sushant- tumhare liye ek surprise hai!

Vasudha- kaise surprise?

Sushant- aab surprise bolo dunga toh surprise nahi rahega. shaam ka wait karo

Vasudha- fine.. shaam ko milte hai. bye.

Sushant- see you..

( sushant puts down the phone and smiles to him self)

(Vasudha is in her room, about to leave when shreya and vedant come running )

Shreya- di! dekho na vedant mujhe irrate kar raha hai!

vedant- di, ye jhoot bol rahi hai! is ke moo kaun lag na chata hai.

Shreya- WHATEVER!!

Vasudha-( sighing) ho gaye tum dono ka? aab mein niklu

Shreya- aryeee, ek mintue di, zara hum bhi toh jane aap kiss se milne ja rahe hai.. hmmm??

Vedant-aryee, obviously, apne hone wali pati se milne ja rahe hai!!

Vasudha- vedant! or koi kaam nahi hai tum dono ko?

Vedant-nahi toh!! abb ap ko pareshan nahi karangi toh aur kya karangi, right shreya? ?

Shreya aur nahi toh kya, wai se aap ja kaha rahin jiju ke saath-?

Vasudha- woh,,, bata nahi sushant na kaha hai suprise hai

Shreya- ohhh, how romantic na!!!

Vasudha- acha aap mein chalte hun

Vedant- dekha, sharma ji se milnay ki liye kitne bekarar ho rahe hai

( vasudha gets annoyed and trows a pillow at vedant)

Vasudha- vedant aab mein tumhein thappad maarongi

Vedant- fineee, dhek hai, byee

Shreya- bye diii!

( vasudha is walking down stairs when vedika stops her)

Vedika- vasudha...

Vasudha- huhhh, ab tumhe kya kaam hai?

Vedika- woh.. main sorry kehna aye thi. subha maine tumse jo kuch bhi kaha uski liye.

Vasudha- vedika!!mein jante hun tumne jo kuch bhi kaha na woh gus se mein kaha. sorry bolne kia ki zarurat nahi hai

( vedika smiles)

Vedika- acha tum kaha ja re ho? sushant ki paas?

Vasudha- han!!

Vedika-( smiles) okay have fun!

Vasudha-hmm bye!!

( vasusha is outside, and is about to open the door when some grabs her from behind and covers her mouth)

Vasudha- ummm!!!

Sushant- chup!! vasudha main hun! kya kar rahe ho?

( sushant lets go of vasudha's hand and turns around)

Vasudha- SUSHANT! idiot, pagal ho kya? abhi mere jaan nikhaal jate!

Sushant- aryee jhoothe, tumre jaan tu yahain hai na. ( pointing towards his heart)

Vasudha- hahaha, very fuuny! ( rolling her eyes)

Sushant- acha baba chale?

( sushant and vasudha get on his bike and leave.)

Sushant- vasudha zara tight pakar ki beth na, kahi bikes se gere na jawo.

Vasudha- hmmm, apka irradar jante hun! abb chale!

Sushant- chalo, bhai!

( sushant and vasudha are on the highway, when sushant his the break on purpose, and vasudha hold on to him tightly)

Vasudha- kya kar rahe ho? dhek se nahi chala sakte?

Sushant- kahan tha paakar kar besna!

Vasudha- waise hum ja kahan rahe hai?

Sushant- kuch waqt mein bata chale jaya ga


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HEY PUJA!! AM REALLY LIKE IT AM ALWAYS CHEACKIN FOR 5TH CHAPET PLZ PSOT UR FF I CANT WAIT

REALLY AM DYING TO READING TO UR FF😛
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CHAPTER 5

(sushant and vasudha are on their bike, when sushant stops in from of a restaurant)

Sushant- phelie apni aankhen band karu.

Vasudha- kyuin?

Sushant- vasudha... karo na!

Vasudha- fine... dhek hai yeh lo ( vasudha closes her eyes and sushant grabs her hand and takes her inside)

Vasudha- aab mein aankhen kholo?

Sushant- aab kholo..

( vasudha opens her eyes to see a table for two, with jasmine scented candles every where, and a big bouquet of flowers on the table)

Vasudha-( shocked) yeh sab kya hai? yeh tumne kiya?

Sushant- ( smiling) of course mein ne kiya, aur kaun karega?

Vasudha- sushant.. yeh sab ki kya zaroorat thi?

Sushant- buss . mera maan kiya... aab chale..

(sushant and vasudha sit down and enjoy there dinner.

30 mintues later

(Vasudha and Sushant are on their way home)

Sushant- so. surprise kaise laga?

Vasudha- bahut acha tha, mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap itne romantic hai.. kya baat hai sharma ji aap koi achanak kya hogaya

Sushant- kyun? tumhe kya lagta hai? mere paas dil nahi hai? mujhe pyaar ka inzhar karna aata hai!

Vasudha- okay... fine

( sushant drops vasudha at her house and leaves, vasudha enters the house and sees DRS there)

DRS- vasudha, itne raat ko kahan gayi thi?

Vasudha-( becomes nervous and doesn't know what to say) papa, woh.. ( just then Vedika enters from outside)

Vedika- ummm mein aur vasudha kahin bar gaya thi.. ( vedika looking at vasudha, winks) right vasudha?

Vasudha- yeh.. hum saath mein thi.

DRS-( has a suspicious look) kahan gayi thi

Vedika- har baat bata na zaro re nahi hai..

DRS- ( angry) vedika mein tumra bapa huin, mujhe pura haq hai.

Vasudha- papa, woh hum baas asia hei kuch kaam si gayi thi. aur kuch nahi.

DRS- dhek hai( DRS leaves from ther)

Vasudha- ( sighing) thanks vedika

Vedika- (smiling) no problem.. sweetheart ( vediak leaves from there, and vasudha also goes to her room)

( the next morning, sushant and panda ji are aruging about Singhas file in pande ji's cabin)

Pande ji- sushant.. tum kyuin nahi samajate, yeh report mein publish nahi kar sakata.

Sushant-( angry, slams the file)linkin kyun?? yeh sach hai? yeh file mein publish karke rahoin ga, aur iss he akkbar mein publish hogi. ( sushant leaves from there, leaving pande ji worried)

Pande ji- sushant kyun nahi samajhta, woh apna ghar kuh baar baat kar raha hai, mujhe vasudha se baat karne hogi.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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its gud but dear i have some suggestions ..u should be create suprise dinner moment of VaSu could be more ! ok now check ur msg inbox ..i hav some idea!


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