VIRRUDH-ATOOT RISHTE( MY FIRS FF EVER!!!!!!) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
that was WONDERFUL!!! it it was really good, plzzz do continue this!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: SushantVasudha

that was WONDERFUL!!! it it was really good, plzzz do continue this!!


but pia shri feelis i hav to create chapter after vasu's marrieage

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yeah! That would be so nice to read, maybe after you are done with this one you can write one on them after marriage. She was probably just suggesting it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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you don't have to if u don't want to!! She probably give u an idea!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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[QUOTE=SushantVasudha]you don't have to if u don't want to!! She probably give u an idea![/QUOTE

wt u think my chapter is reall gud or is there any msiatkes like its sooo long coz sometiems feel like that😕]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Celebrations of love ( chapter 3)


Vasudha and sushant fall in love with each other but they cant identified
themself thier love..,they like each other but also they never expressed
that( druring the day in office, sushant rounds in corridors for work to someone in the
in the office, sushant's heart desire to see vasudha ..he looks vasudha wid some feelings...,
he smiles bit himself and leaves that place. ...devayani says need to talk wid him( both started some
discussions)on the other side when doing some work vasudha sees sushant's profile she likes him when
she read abt him in profile ( like his name..his work.and all detailts abt him!!she suddenly
want to see sushant...she decides to ask something abt his report as reason..,
(she sees there sushant and devyani's discussions!

devyani: sushant vasudha ne kha ki tume ek hafthe mein nakri se..,

sushant : haa denyani.par upni bare meri taraf se kuch khe ne ke baad woh khe thi ki
kus report check karne ke baat failse lagi aur mein bhi use meri gussa ki liyeh mafi
mangliya ( he says that as cool)

devyani: sushant agar vasudha ne nakri se nilkal diya tho kya kare gi

sushant: cool devyani mein koi bhi decision ke liyeh thayar hu

devyani: sushant itni asani se khe rahi hu par muje bhut bura lage gha!, tum bhut cool hai linkin

sushant:arre devyani cool ..jab mein office mein appoiment order le liya thab hi mein resignation or
dismiss order ke liyeh bhi tha yar thi..kyun ki kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakth hai

devayni:ha ho sakta hai..par sushant tum is akbar chod kar chali gayi tho..mein tum me bhut miss kare
gha( vasudha feels bad when she hear devyani's feelings on sushant)kuch bhu hone se phele itna
emotions kyu ho rahi ho:

sushant:are devyani itna emotions kyu ho rahi hu tum agar DD jaga katam hogayi tho kya humra dosti ka
rishta hamesha ra ha na! so chil yar..kuch bhu hone se phele itna
emotions kyu ho rahi ho:
(vasudha feels insecure when sushant console devyani) then she
leaves that place wid sadness.still she cant undersatnd abt herslef..then she back to normal after
she went to her home!!

IN the next day morning in office .,vasudha gets confuse and she dnt knw hw can
do the work ..it seems difficult for her in important news and check the files
she cant get idea also looks so tensed and worry then she calls devayani for help!at that time sushant
also comes there for something ask to vasudha abt his work

vasudha: ha devyani muje kuch samj nai tha ki mein kya karu..( when devyani starts explain abt work..sushant enters!...,


sushant: devyani itna confuse mat karo!..,tum jao mein unko madat karen ghi

devyani :ha woh bhi theek ke..vasudha muje se bather sushant tum ko sam ja yeh gha...

vasudha:ok! she feels so shy 😳when sushant started his explanationsabt system files and file details ( he suddenly stand up from .and goes close to vasudha .,vasudha felt happy and bit neverous) she also got some nice feelings when sushant near wid her😳 sushant also felt happy😉

within few mins they started same lovable looks as eye to eye! they looks very close wid love!!!😛😉
















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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
OMG!!! that was AMAZING, i loved it, plzzz continue this soon, i cant wait for the next chapter!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
CHAPTER 8

( Sushant gabs vasudha's hand and pulls her toward him)

Vasudha- kya kare ho!

Sushant- tum galta raste par jare ho, humhe osstaraf jana hai.

Vasudha- fine.. Chale

( sushant and vasudha start walking when sushant stretches his arm in the air to annoy vasudha)

Vaudha- ummm kya kare rahe ho?

Sushant- kyuin aab mujhe strech karne kya liye permission lane pade gaye?

Vasudha- nahi..whatever! Abb chalo... mujhe baat needi arye hai.

Sushant- hain.. Toh chalo na kisi roka hai!

( Vasudha is about to start walking when she sees a ice cream shop and gets excited)

Vasudha- sushant- ice cream!! Chalo na ice cream kahte hai! Please..

Sushant- kaamal hai.. Abhi toh mujhe se jaagad rahe thi, or aab ice cream kahne hai!

Vasudha- sushant.. Please ( giving him the innocent look)

( sushant finally gives up, and they walk over to the shop)

Sushant- umm ek chocolate ice cream dena/

Vasudha- kyuin? Tumhe nahi kahana?

Sushant- nahi bahi aap kaho mere liye itna hai kafe hai!

( the guy gives the ice cream to vasudha but she realizes that her right hand is hand cuffed with suahnt and cant eat it)

( Sushant grabs the ice cream cone from vasudha, and feeds it to her with his hand,)

(Suahnt is just about to give it to her, but then stops)

Vasudha- sushant.. Kya kare rahe ho? Dona

Sushant- nahi... jab tak tum mujhese sorry nahi khete taab tak yeh ice cream nahi kehla wonga.

(Vasudha looks at sushant, in a loving way and moves closer to him)

Vasudha- acha baba!! I am sorry.. Aab toh kehela woh!

(Sushant smiling feeds her the ice cream cone)

( after that they start walking again and reach sushant's home)

(Sushant opens the door and both walk in)

Sushant- nahi mujhe bahut needi aye rahe hai.. Mein toh soone jara ho.

( before vasudha can say anything sushhant jumps on the bed , and vasudha falls on top of sushant)

( they look at each other for a few seconds, vasudha is feeling nervous and shy while sushant is looking at vasudha with so much love in his eyes)

Vasudha- sushant.. Kya kare rahe ho?

( she gets up from sushant, but sushant pulls her back, and this time sushant pulls her down so he is facing her)

Vasudha- sushant.. Chode mujhe.. Paagal hogi ho kya?

Sushant- ( smiling) hain!! Tumhare pyaar ne mujhe paagal bana diya hai!

Vasudha- yeh dialog marne ka waqt nahi hai.. Sharma ji.. Abb utho!

Sushant- dekho.. Mujhe bahout needi arye hai.. Aur mein asia hai sota huin

Vasudha- (looks irritated) liken mein aasie nahi soka thi!

Sushant- dheko.. Tumrae paas aur koi option nahi hai.. Chup chaap soja woh!

( before vasudha can protest sushant closes the light and put's his arm around vasudha)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
AWSOME CHAPTER puja!!! it was too good!! continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
superb!

aawsome ,amazing,,woderfull..exellent these words are nothing compare to ur chapter!!!!

today i felt thier love feelings from ur chapter ..its really unblivable worth chapter of VaSu


one request plz dnt end this night ..,u plz continue this more scenes of this occation !!! i mean key still cant find that like that!
u knew ur chapter so nice is like vasudha and sushant love!


NO WORDS FOR ME👏
BEAUTIFULL NIGHT OF VASU!😛

THANK YO SO MUCH PUJA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️

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