SS ON MAAN'S MEMORY LOSS-UPDT PT- 9/pg16 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

awesome updates... i just wish this happens in the soap... they really need some time alone together to get together... loving the idea jyo...

do continue soon


@Shruthe, me too waiting for the same yaar...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it .. waiting for next part... as very dispointed with cv current track... they r not been able to handle it properly... me loving your track

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maansee

loved it .. waiting for next part... as very dispointed with cv current track... they r not been able to handle it properly... me loving your track




Thanks 4 loving it... n don't be dispoint yaar it will take some time to be on track.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART - 6



SATURDAY AT KM

Maan n Geet both ready to leave.. Maan : Dadi take care n call us in between. Dadi : Sure bete n u both take of yourself too n proceed to Airport..

After 3hrs. at Mumbai Airport


Mr. Kapur was waiting for them... Mr. Kapur : Hello Mr. Khurana/Mrs.Khurana so u made it to come to Mumbai thats good. Maan N geet : Hello MR. Kapur..All three on their way to Khandala discussing about the schedule, as it was late they had their lunch at Food Plaza n move ahead. By the time they reached Khandala it was late evening, MR. Kapur called Vishal (Caretaker) n tells him to keep their luggage in the room. Geet was going around the house n was impressed by the interiors, by the time MR. Kapur came n Mrs. Khurana this is Vishal (CT) he will take care of all the household things n u need not have to worry. Maan too joins them... Geet : Mr Kapur, i must say your farmhouse is really nice...MR. Kapur : Mrs Khurana, Khandala is a 2nd home or u rather say weekend home n our project is the same...


Mr. Kapur : MR. Khurana i have to leave now n will pick you tomorrow morning by 11.00am.

Maan : Ok Mr. Kapur...

Geet n Maan in the room, Geet busy unpacking the luggage in her thoughts, after a longtime they got a time to spend together though the reasons behind it are totally different. Maan feeling tired layed on bed fast to sleep immediately. He was murmuring n she can't hear him what he was saying so went to wake him Geet : Maan Maan. He gets up oh its you?

Geet : Ha or koun? Aapne sapne me kisko dekha?

By the time CT comes to call them for dinner...

After dinner Geet : Maan chalo thoda verandha me ghum lete hai.. Maan says no as he was tired. Geet was alone standing making her back to the door... Maan can't sleep comes out n hold Geet from back..keeping his chin on her shoulder r u not tired... Geet : ya but for little while.. Both standing in the same position neither he wanted to leave nor she, dragging her more near feeling the warmth of each other they were standing for a longtime. Later on they went in the room.


Geet gives him medicines n both goes to sleep same here Geet with teary eyes sleeps at other end of the bed.But suddenly both changed their sides n comes face to face ...Geet moves her fingers on Maan's hand n then playing with his fingers. Maan also hold her hand n smiling n saying masti karne ka mood hai... Geet : Na baba mujhe neendh aa rahi hai... now sleep kal Mr. Kapur ke saath jaana hai na...holding each others hand Geet went to sleep but Maan can't. Now he started thinking of dadi words again n looking at Geet n in self thought she is my wife, then i too have to take care of her can't go on asking her abt myself.. If i want to know the truth i should be friendly to her..Feeling dizzy after taking medicines he goes to sleep. Geet gets up when she found Maan's hand on her waist n holding her near she thinks when we came close to each other, but without moving she says to herself Maan i want u to feel me, i am not going to put pressure you that u should think of me i know it will take time for your recovery but i am ready to wait n i want my old MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA back, wipes tears n goes to sleep.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Jo , Great job . Please continue 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Itna chota sa? Kya dude
long update dena plz
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
nice ff... plz add me to ur pm list nd update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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jyo ...beautiful ss dear...❤️ ❤️ ❤️ eagerly awaiting 4 the next update ..i m waiting...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

loved it...waiting for more to read

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: manesha76




@Jo , Great job . Please continue 😛




@Manesha... liked it.
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