SS ON MAAN'S MEMORY LOSS-UPDT PT- 9/pg16 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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stop thanking everybody and update... we all r waiting

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PART 7

Next Morning

Maan n Geet having their breakfast, Maan was in his thoughts about last night- did i hold her close to me n was surprised also on not getting the flashes (wow good sign).


Geet comes from back of Maan as he was sitting in chair, circling her hands around his neck n whispering in his ear aap mere bare me soch rahe ho na?? Maan holding her hands in pulling towards him in such a way that their cheeks were rubbing each other.. Geet : oounch thoda to trimming karo...


Maan turns n looks at her... nahi...or ha tumhare bare me he soch raha tha. Geet, thats true i don't remember anything about past 1- 11/2 year, whenever i tried to remember it my head goes spining, at night i see the face which is unclear, please tell me how this accident happened or rather you can tell me what happened in past 1-11/2 year?


Geet : Ya sure, n you will come to know slowly as doctor has told not to take more stress, i promise i will tell you.


Maan : pakka bataogi na?


Geet : Ha baba likhkar du.

Both smilied n hugged.. Mr. Kapur comes n after having some discussions they both proceed to site. Geet staying at home as some pending work to be finished. Mr. Kapur had appointed MR. Dandekar who resides in Khandala as Maan's assistant. Maan n MR. Kapur returns home in afternoon. After having lunch Mr. Kapur leaves to Mumbai n will be coming at weekend only.. SO NO DISTURBANCE.

In Evening

Maan : Geet chalo kahi ghumkar aate hai...


Geet : Ha, but where calls Vishal. asks him where they can go right now.


Vishal : Madamji ek point hai Rajmachi bas farmhouse se 20 mins ka raasta hai. aap aane tak khana banake rakhta hu..


Geet : thik hai...

AT RAJMACHI POINT.

Evening cold breeze is blowing taking a round they sat, Geet keeping her head on his shoulder, both playing with each others fingers guietly as if the silence was the link of their feeling he kiss her cheek..

Geet surprised Maan its public place n this is not done here.

Maan : dragging her more close, i know Mishti, not only we but other couples are there too n when they are deeply involved in each other y they will look at us...

Geet making a face.

Maan : ok fine putting his hand on her shoulder will sit for a while then we will go.


Geet was in mixed expressions when he called her Mishti...

Geet : Maan lets go now its already late n from tomorrow onwards your work will start..


Maan : Oh so you are in hurry Mrs. Khurana n whispers in her ear..get ready for attack.


Geet : attack what do you mean?? Maan you will come to know soon teasing her.. start walking hand in hand...

After having dinner they both sat in verandha for sometime n then went in room.

Maan was on laapy just to check out the plans for next day...

Geet sits side by him, chalo soo jaao...


Maan : ha just 2 mins. hogaya...n close the lappy n takes her in embrace ... bolo kuch..


Geet : ha... aap kya kaha rahe the jab hum point par gaye the???

Maan : Oh so you really want know what i mean to say????


Geet : pinch him Maan mazzak mat karo please tell me...


Maan : nothing will tell u later...


Geet : chalo then me going to sleep.


Maan : y so early, i want to talk with you.


Geet : Maan...

Maan : keeping his finger on her lips shhh... even if we don't talk with each other, we feel the touch more than words isn't it.


Geet : Ha...do you remember you me called in office at night to work on Mr. Khanna's project(purposely takes Mr. Khanna's name she knew it was Mr. Chopra).. n lights were gone ...n gives a cross look at him but no sign of response to this , he was playing with her fingers.


Maan : Geet mujhe kuch to yaad aaye.. kash wo chehera saaf nazar aaye...


Geet : Maan wo chehera nazar aayega but don't put pressure...


Maan :fine can i ask you one question n don't lie drags her so near that her head was near his neck ...will you be with me forever..i don't y but now i started feeling your presence around me more than earlier..


Geet : Maan i was n will be with you always u just need to remember me she was crying.


Maan : (wiping her tears) cuddles her face, i don't want to see tears in your eyes, i haven't seen it n hugs her tightly not allowing to her say thing, now u are with me forever get ready teasing her chalo will go to sleep now sleeping in each others embrace...

At last Maan accepted her in his life as present GEET. but with distance on one point.

Morning


After having breakfast Maan was about to leave.

Geet : Maan jaldi aana n kissed on his cheek, bye.

Geet gets busy with her work n having a word with Vishal about the locality.

On Site...

Maan n MR. Dandekar busy discussing with the work in cabin. They both decide to take a round, they were discussing, suddenly Maan's head started paining n before onyone could realise he fell down... MR. Dandekar calls the workers n carry him in the cabin after some time Maan comes back to his sense.


Mr. Dandekar : Sir please take rest for sometime, we will discuss afterwards.


Maan : Its ok Mr. Dandekar, we will make a move not to worry this was happening with me earlier also at night but this is the first time it happened in day time.


Mr. Dandekar : Get the checkup done this is not good for health.


Maan : Yes my treatment is going on.

After taking rest for a while both of them back on the work.



<<<< NEXT UPDATE SOON>>>>


Edited by Jyoti121 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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IT WAS AWESOME DEAR. MIND BLOWING. COULDN'T WAIT MORE. CAN YOU ADD ME TO THE PM LIST?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😃awesome jyo ...loved it ..amazing ss ..move on dear ..u made us 2 wait 4 ur next update ..pls make it fast ..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part...but why did he fell unconcious?...nothing serious, i hope
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update! can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hope will will get the memory back soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Manesha...
gonna to rock dude...




Edited by Jyoti121 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great part...but why did he fell unconcious?...nothing serious, i hope



will get to know soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update... i just wish they just move it nicely like this... in the soap...

anyways continue soon jyo...

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