SS ON MAAN'S MEMORY LOSS-UPDT PT- 9/pg16 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful update!👏👏👏👏loved it and thanx for sharing...
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Originally posted by: Nandita5

Jyoti, why don't they take u on the creative team? u can work wonders for the show. not only u but some of our FF writers would also be good on the creative team.



@Nandita .. thks...
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nice story dear... update soon... :)
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its lovely update 😆 waiting for next soon ..
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amazing jyo... i really liked the new concept of moving out for meeting and site visit... and for a change out of KC and KM which gives them all the space to be together...

the rain... again was a good symbolism of flashback for maan...


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👏jyo pls join geet crew ..it s a fatabulous os ..new pov ..interesting and amazing ..keep it up jyo ...👏
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I appreciate ur story whole-heartedly... hey geet cv's try to follow this or keep this person as a story writer... jyoti121 u totally rockkk!!!!!!

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Thanks guys, will update soon...


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PART - 2


BACK FROM MUMBAI AT KM ' SUNDAY.

Dadi : Kaisa raha aapka safar. Maan : Accha tha n goes to his room.

Geet makes happy faces n says Dadi mai thoda aaram karke, aapko baad me milti hu.

Dadi : thik hai n says to herself kuch to huaa hai issliye duno chupchap chale gaye.

Maan in his room gets flashes of what happened to him in plane, at the hotel n looks at his hands n says y my hands went around her is that I am getting attracting to her?? No this can't be possible, keep control on you Mr Maan Singh Khurana.

DEV, DADI, MAAN ' sitting in the hall.

Maan : Dev tum KC kab se join kar rahe ho? Dev : Bro bas 2-3 din mein.

(He smells something fishy, if dev is here then where is NT but avoid asking him abt her)

AT NIGHT : After having dinner Maan goes to sleep in his room but can't sleep gets up from bed n goes to terrace while passing by he peeps in Geet's room in see her sleeping peacefully. He enters in room n stand watching her, Geet turns her side n sees a shadow in switch on the light.

Geet : aap yaha?? Maan : ha-who- mai, ok fine mujhe neendh nahi aa rahi thi to mai terrace per jaa raha tha. Geet : per ye to mera room hai, terrace waha hai (pointing her finger in that direction). Maan (confussed) Ha pata per tumhe dekha to raha nahi gaya '.. he can't say anything more. Geet : Chalo hum duno terrace per chalte hai. Maan holds her hand (still not knowing whats going in his mind for her) n they both go to terrace. Geet tries to tell him little bit what has happened without looking at him but he quietly listens n slowly comes near n holding her from back tightly, she too holds his hands. Both standing in a same position quietly feeling each others touch for long time but some sound made them to come out of the sense.. Maan : Geet its 2 late will go to sleep know, holding her near to him comes upto her room n kisses her on her cheek n says her GN'Geet was surprised'n says to herself so Mr. Maan Singh Khurana fisal gaya n goes to sleep. Maan went to sleep but later got up again with the flashes he used to get earlier'..

MORNING AT DINING TABLE :

Except Geet everyone are there. Maan is looking here n there for Geet n bit confused y she is not here n lost in her thought.

Dadi : Maan aapko kuch chahiye kya? Kya dhood rahe ho? But no reply from Maan.

Dev : Bro Bro'.. dadi aapse kuch pooch rahi hai.. Maan ; Kya Dadi??

Dadi Aapka dhyan kaha hai?

Maan : Dadi wo mai (sees Geet coming) kuch nahi.

Geet : Good Morning dadi. Dadi : Good morning Geet.

Geet : Good Morning Maan uffs sorry Maan sir.

Maan giving a wicked smile Good Morning Geet. All starts their breakfast

Dadi : Geet aaj aap office nahi jaa rahi ho. Geet Kyu dadi kuch kaam hai.

Dadi : Ha bas thodi shopping karni hai. Geet Dadi office me zyaada kaam hai.

Dadi : Geet aap to janate hai na, hum akele kahi nahi jate hai issliye kaha aapko.

Geet Thik hai. Maan pretends to be reading newspaper says to himself Chalo accha hai ek din office me shanti hogi. Geet hears this n says shanti !!!!!!! Aap hi koi na koi bahane banakar mujhe daante ho'. N all blah blah their nok jhok continues n unknowingly Maan catch Geet's hands n looks at her eyes without moving his eyelids. Dadi clears her throat n says aapka ho gaya ho to hum chale Geet. Geet ji dadi.

Maan lefts for Office n Geet with Dadi for shopping'

AT KC

Maan in cabin going through Mr. Kapur's file as Mr. Kapur wanted to start the construction immediately n starts recollecting the moment n just smile shaking his head. He start thinking y I am getting attract to her n y I feel low when she is not around yyy? '.. Comes out of the thought when he heards knock n says come in.

Adi : Maan sir who Geet abhi tak aayi nahi n Mr. Khanna will be coming by 11.30am

Maan : Adi meeting ke details kise paas hai? Adi : Sir who Geet ke paas hai.

Geet : Adi abhi phone karke Geet ko office bulao'.. Ye dadi na kabhi bhi shopping ke liye jaati hai.

Adi : Geet tum jaldi office aajaao'. Mr. Khanna ke saath meeting hai na..

Geet : Adi sir ohhh mai to bhul hi gayi bas shopping ho gayi hai office aati hu.

She reached office n within secs Mr. Khanna too enters KC. All in conference room discussing about Mr. Khanna's project' Maan was looking at Geet his mind was not concentrated on the discussion but anyhow manage it. Mr. Khanna's project is being handle with other team so Geet is not involve in this project.

Geet comes in cabin, n reminds him about Mr. Kapur... Maan raises his eyebrows n says Mr. Kapur??? Geet : mai soch rahi thi kyun na hum ek party rakhe n invite Mr. Kapur n Mr. Khanna?? Maan : Party ???? Geet : ha bohot din hogaye hum ne party nahi rakhi hai issliye soch rahi hu'. Maan was standing making back at Geet she slowly moves toward him n suddenly Maan turns (what a perfect timing of dashing) he screams Geet n holds aankho aankho ka ishaara wid in minutes they come out of the dreamy world.

Maan : Geet regarding party we will think later first let me work out on Mr. Khanna's project. Geet goes to her cabin in tries to finish her work.


<<<next part soon>>>

Edited by Jyoti121 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Jo , Good job yaar . Just keep it up . Write next part soon .
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