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Originally posted by: ..Jojo..
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Okay, so I freaking love this update! :) The way you write is so amazing! I am in love with it <3 The best part is that the dialogues you write are exactly the way characters speak in the show! Loved how Khushi justified Arnav's behaviour and cleared his image in Payal's mind. :D And Anjali is not happy with him breaking up with La.. hmm..And that was when he got the answer to his question. He himself had given her the right to affect him this way, slowly unknowingly his mask had been slipping away, he had started feeling for somebody other than his family, what exactly even he didnt know, but it was close to concern certainly.Awww! Arnav is adorable <3 Love this line so much! :)Loved the way Arnav teased Anjali.. it was good to see him joking around and all.. not the Arnav we get to see a lot of in the show! And umm... is Arnav having doubts on Shyam. about him cheating on Anjali? I really want him to beat Shyam black and blue! :P LOL!anyways, awesome update! Update soon! :)Lots of love
Jyotika🤗
Thank You for ur kind and heartfelt review, It truly made my day :D You have a very good insight into the characters urself as ur reply tells me :)
I was worrying tht i overdid it for Arnav in just one Update, thanks for assuring that I didnt. I am waiting eagerly for an Akash-Arnav scene, that's the only Bond we as fans have been unaware or more like been Untouched by.
Next Update, I will try my best to make it asap, writing is a pleasure :)
Lots of Love
ZeeJay 🤗
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