Through the Facade- ArHi FF Completed - Page 11

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

hey

wonderful update..loved it😊

continue soon

Originally posted by: nav_bat

Loved the update. Only that I feel that ASR's chracter has been a little bit mis handled. I know you have tried to potray the softer side of him but as it is he;s not the type to talk about anything. ( Here I am referring to the Shyam-Arnav talk).

Originally posted by: shilparoxx

Hey, Zee di🤗 😃
This update was awesome!!! Thanks for adding me to your friend's 😳 As you said, it is nice to make new friends 😳 !!! 🤗
Anyways, now back to the update!!😃 AWESOME!!!👏
This part was soo cute! :

'Dii' Arnav sighed indicating that he wasnt interested in the conversation.

'Khushi looks pretty' Anjali smiled changing the topic 'She is as beautiful as her talks, and just like her name, Spreading smiles around.'

awww😳 I really, really love that!!

Hiie Shilpa 🤗 Thanks for appreciating my work , am Glad u liked it 😳 And call me Zee, lyk am sure i am not tht elder to u, and we are friends so...u knw 😆 😳

Anjali has this quality in her, She appreciates the good in others always 😳 And she would root for tht person if misunderstood or in peril. Like she did for Arnav infront of Khushi and vice-versa :DD

and again, I loved this part too :
'What the-' he approached and noticed that it wasnt a framed photo on his wall, rather his company's calender. Stumped by her beauty once again he kept staring and noticed his own blurred dark reflection on the glossy paper. And that was when he got the answer to his question. He himself had given her the right to affect him this way, slowly unknowingly his mask had been slipping away, he had started feeling for somebody other than his family, what exactly even he didnt know, but it was close to concern certainly.

He's finally feeling something for Khushi😳

Once again great update!!
I'm looking forward to more!!!😛
Btw, if you pm everyone for every update of your SS, could you also pm me di?😊 It would be really appreciated 😊 Thanks
Overall, the entire update was beautiful!!
I'm looking forward to the " ArHi - Licious " upcoming update!!!😃 yipee!!

take care Zee!🤗

Shilpa❤️

Yup he is, the realisation is Yet to take place, I will try and come up with the next update asap, and yup surely i will pm u dear, u dont need to ask..! 🤗 ArHi-Licious okie m nervous now L0L will give it my best, Thanks for ur kind and heartfelt response, It means a lot to me..! 😳

take care and Have a good day 😳

Luv

Zee xD

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Nice concept and story...looking forward to reading more. Please include me in your PM list.

Originally posted by: Artemis678

That's Great. Please PM Me When You Update.